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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part...

she is not admitting her feelings...lol...

waiting to know what maan will do now...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update a lot..
oho!!geet s very stubborn to admit her feelings..
Loved pinky's call to his show..!!
Precap s interesting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nyc update

geet do have sum feelings for dhak dhak waitng for her to admit it

pinky is realy cute
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Posted: 13 years ago

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AWESOMEEE UPDATE JAANI LOVE U MUAHHH YR TOU HAMESHA GEET K HAATHO KISI KI WATT Q LAGVATI REHTI HAIN PEHLE MAAN AB PINKY
LOVELY CHAT B/W DHAK DHAK DEVAR N MOTI BHABHI 😆
MUJHY YH PINKY KI FAMILY SAMAJH MAY NHI AAYI DADI MAA WITHOUT SHAADI USKI BACHI KAHA HAIN HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
PULEJJJ DHAMAKA JALDI KRDIJIEYGA WO KIA HAINA WAIT NHI HOTA MERE SE 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb updt
n loved pinky..😆😉
do continue soon..
waiting for maneet moments nw..
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Posted: 13 years ago
she is very stubborn😛...
waiting to see what will maan do now...
loved the update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update
pinky teasng geet
geet bhi na nt acceptng her feelings
waitng to knw next
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiii,
wow! Wat a story n way of writing.superb dialogues.maan's character is sooo diffrnt.
I read all parts in 1 go n jus loved it.
Plz continue soon.
Wanna see hw maaneet's courtship period will b like.want it in detail before their marriage happns
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 22

In Khurana Mansion everyone is waiting for Pandit to arrive and tell dem date of Maan and Geet engagement and also Dev and Meera wedding date.

Mrs Khurana: Ye lijiye Pandit G.. Ab jaldi sy Shubh Muhraat nikalwayee Humsy raha nahee jattaa..hum jaldi apni dono bahunon ko ghar lana chahty hein..

Pandit: Gee

Pandit start counting wid matching both kundali's

( I have no idea about dis Kundali thing so bear my mistake).. After some time he said'

Pandit: Mery Khyal sy dev and meera ki shaadi ap is month ki 13th ko kar dejiye.. wohi shobh muhraat hay and for Maan and Geet ki saggaaii on 10th of this month.

Daadi: ary waah ye to bohaat acha hay... Badhaiee ho mrs sindhya and hug her..

Mrs Sindhiya: Apko bhi ... Is pal ka mujhy kabsy intezaar thaa.. AKher bhagwan ney meri sun li..

Yash: But Pandit gee its too early.. I mean just in 2 weeks how could we arrange all for both big days.

Mr SIndhiya (Meera dad): Ohh C'mn YASH hum larki walay hein..Humhein koi aitraaz nhee. And baqi sab mil kar kr leingy. u dont need to worry.. Hug him..

Mrs SIndiya: Haan G Yash sahib U don't wory . we will manage all.. we

already prepared for Meera wedding but was waiting for Maan. Now All done so we should not wait anymore.

Mrs Khurana: Ye to bohaat acha hyaa.. Theek hay.. Pandit gee ap ye

Moun meetha Kijeye... NAKUL Pandit Gee ka Saman dedijeye...

Pandit G: Gee hum chaltye hein..

Mrs Khurana: Gee Namasty ...chaliye Mrs Sindiya Hum ranu ko ye news dedein...

Maan entered and saw silence around.. Yash and Mr Sindhya sitting and discussing some issues..

Maan: Hey Dude Ab kya naya Bomb phorty ga..*dude bacchaa leina*

Annie saw MAAN and ran towards him..

Annie: Bhhhaaaiii Bhaaaiii aye aye Dulhay Sahab..Finally Bhagwan ney apki sunn li'

Maan: Kya Matlab

Annie: Bhai apki engagement date decide hogai.. 10th ko apki and Geet Bhabhi ki Sagai and 13th ko Dev Bhaya and Meera Bhabhi Ki shaadi'

Maan: waaattt Itni Jaldi

Yash: *glare* ab tujhy engagement date sy kya problem hay. Tery konsy office key kaam hein.

Maan: nhee dad mera matlab hay' itni jaldi Dev Bhaiya ki shaadi..

Yash: Tu Nalayak kabsy kisi ki fiker karney laga. Wasy bhee tyarian mujhy karnii hein tum too kisi kaam k hoo nahee.. abto Shehzaday ki bhi Engagement hay ab to ar nakhrey hongy'

Mr Sindhya: Yash Baas kroo. Bacha hay.. Uski bhi sagai hay.. ab usko danta maat kar.

Yash: Huh' Bara hogaya hay' Nalayak sirf Height bari hay baqi aqal ar responsiblities ka khyaal to hay nhee.

Maan: *uffh dad ajto chor dety* chill dad.. u should be happy its ur son's wedding. Finally God heard ur complaints. Now u should be happy. Ik baar Galay laga kr congratulate to karoo..

Daadi: Baas Kijye Yaash Aj nhee ... Ajto khushi ka din hay... She give

him sweet and hug her. Aj Hum bohata khush hein MAAN..

Maan forcefully Hug Yash and squeeze him tight.THANKS DAAADDD" which made Yash more anger.

Yash: Ohh araam sy Nalayak.. Tera Baap hay koi custion nahee..abhi ter shaadi mein in budhi hadiyon ney hee kaam karna hay tu too kisi kaam ka hay nahee...

Maan: Daaadd... thora kaam kren gey to smart lageyn gy..

Yash: *angry* Kya Bolaa...

Maan ran away to his room before his dad start again..All laugh and plan for wedding arrangements.

''''''..

Maan entered into his room and change into casual. Suddenly an idea hit him ..he hold his mobile and about to call and stop. "AISY NAHEE

MAAN.. WISH TO FACE TO FACE HONA CHAHYE ABTO HAQ BANTA HAY*smirk* and he slowly move outside by holding his car keys in hand and check if anyone dere.. but found all went to their respective rooms..

He came into his car and drove towards Geet house. Geet was sleeping peacefully in her room. Maan jumped into her room through window. The room was dark and the only light which enlighten the whole room was Moon light. He came towards her bed and saw beautiful scene. An angel was sleeping peacefully by hugging one pillow and other under her legs.


Maan: Hey Dude tum ney mjhy Pillow kun nahe ebanaya.. wat a luck..

m jealous.. The dim light from window adding more glow on her soft milky skin. The rosy lips are so inviting and the strands which are dancing on her forehead are irresistible for MAAN. How could they first touch her. its MAAN's Haq to feel her skin and to enjoy its softness.

Maan sat on her bed and put his chin on his hands and stare Geet without blink as he tried to capture this beautiful moment."HOW COULD SOMEONE SO INNOCENT... SOOTY HOYE IK DAM ANGEL AND JAGTY HOYEE SHERNI" He raise his hand and put strands behind her ear.

His slight touch make Geet shiver and a smile crept on her lips AS she know her possessive prince is here, even her own strands can't disturb her sleep widout MAAN permission.. She hold his hand during sleep and turn which make MAAN fall on Geet. A Sudden jerk awake her and she saw MAAN so close to her.


Geet: *M I dreaming * self thought

Maan: * lost in her eyes* Beautiful

Geet:* realize* She jerked him back and sat on her knees and switch her side table lamp. '. TUM ''.. TUM yahan kya kar rahey hoo' Tumhein sharam nahee atti kisi larki k room mein itni raat ko agaye.. ar... ar tum aye kahan sy.. GOSH ur such a cheapster..

Maan: *lay on her bed on belly* Apni fiance sy milney ana koi sharam walli baat nahe.*Came close* aur mein nay abhee aisa kuch kya nahee key mujhy sharam aye.


Geet: aaarrghh Stop it'. Uthoo challo jao yahan sy'

She hold his hand and pull him towards the door.

Maan: sooch lo darling. Is waqt mein tumhary room sy gaya to tumhary parents kya soochein gy..

Geet: eee I will kill u' u dirty mind... tum fr aye kaisy...

Maan pointed towards window. WAHAN sy..

Geet: *push him towards the window* ab wahin sy wapas chaley jaoo...Jaoo nikloo yahaan sy... badmash kahin key...

Maan: ary challa jaonngaaa.. Jis leye aya hoon wo kaam to karney doo.

Geet: Boloo Kya kaam hay.. Ar ye kaam subha taq rok nahee shakta thaa..


Maan : *putting his hands around her neck* ary Janeman Is time chori

chori milny ka mazza hee kuch aur hay.*wink*

Geet: * jerk his hands* GOSH ur soo cheap' Get lost before I shout for CHOR CHOR. fr leinaa is raat key mazzey...As she jerk MAAN hold her hand and pull him towards which made her fall on his chest. Maan hold her waist tight.

Geet: MAAN choro mujhy' kya kar rhaye hoo'


Maan: *move close to her ears* ABhee to mein nay kuch kya hee nahee Geet. Itna kun Daar rahee hoo and peck on her ear lob.

Geet: Maaannn stop it.. u know I hate dis..

Maan: ok but first listen to me' warna tumhein sari raat aisy hee meri bahon mein rehna hogaa' I don't have any problem but apna sooch loo' Khudh Ko rokk paogiii aisy mery kareeb' itna kareeb reh paogii..


Geet: Okk Okkk but first tell me why ur here' aisa konsa kaam hay jo

tumhein Bandar banaa dia..

Maan: ary My sweet heart tumhary pyaar mein Bandar bhi baan

jayengy..me just here to wish u personally and wana know tum ney

mujhsy shaadi karney k leye HAAN kardii kun' pehly to bohaat bhaoo khaa rahee thi'.

Geet; Ummm ''.. wooo'.. baas woo I love my parents and I want dem to give dem happiness' baas

Maan: *hold her chin* see in my eyes Geet.. do u really accept me just

coz of ur parents' ' yaa u fell in love wid me'. Afterall m Dhak

Dhak'.

Geet: Gee nahee' apni shaqal dekhi hay mirror mein' ik dam languor hoo..


Maan: Dekh raha hoon' tumharee ankhon mein'

Geet: Acha chalo now bye.. mujhy choro '. Mujhy neendh aye hay..

Maan: Meri neendhin uraa kar khudh soo rahee ho not fair geet..

Geet: jerk him and make her free from his hold..baas hogaya tumhara

quiz now Gooo. She push him towards the window..

Maan: ok ok last question

Geet: Bolooo

Maan: Tumney aaj mujhsy Fm pr baat kun nahee ki.. Pinky sy kun call karwayee


Geet: Gee nahee Mein ney koi call nahee karwayee is khush fehmi mein maat rehnaa..

Maan: ummm but usney to kaha SOMEONE IS WAITING FOR MY

CALL. Boloo


Geet: Maan Tum ja rhy hoo ya nahee'.

Maan: Tum mery sawal ka jawab dedo mein chalaa jaongaa..

Geet: Pakkaaa' *pounted finger*

Maan: *hold her finger* Pakkaa

Geet: wooo Pinky ney kaha that she wana know how u feel.. Mein ney

kuch nahe kaha.. really' I just said " Why should I call u first' I

mean m a girl so u should call me first and wish me..but uss Moti ney

pata nhee kya kya bold ya..

Maan: aaahaann so ye baat hay tum mer call ka wait kar rahee thi and the way i talk with Pinky bhabhiee u r jealous'

Geet stand with her back and acting as *DAM CARE LOOKS* mein

kun jealouse hongiii..

Maan: *stand wid back to wid hands on his chest* Isi leye key I was

flirting with Pinky ..*steal galances to geet*

Geet: *move forward with back towards MAAN* No tum jo karoo

usmein mujhy kyaa' tumhari to wasy bhee adaat hay har kisi sy free

honey ki'

Maan: REALLLY tumhein waqai kuch nahee hogaa if I flirt with

anyone..

Geet: Haan MAAN u know me' Mein is relation k leye kabhee tyaar

nahee thi.. so how could u expect me key mein jealouse hongii ' Mein jealous nahee ho shaktee kabhi nahee..


Maan: *came forward * Mujhy yaqeen dila rahee ho ya khudh koo..

Geet: * Glare* SHuuuttt uppp now Its too late Mr Maan Singh Khurana'better u should leave' before I refuse about dis in

morning' samghey..

Maan: Ok ok relax'. *move towards window and about to climb, smirk on his face and turn around and move towards Geet who is standing with back towards Maan.'Kiss on Geet cheeks " GOOD NIGHT" and ran away..

Geet: U Scoundral'.. u B'.. How dare'''''.Arrrggghhh I

Hate uuu ...NONSENSE

she tap her feet and lay on bed and cover her self wid covet.

'''''''''''''..


Precap: ummm socchnaa parey ga.. any suggestions 😆

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Edited by MyInfatuationz - 12 years ago
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