-inteha- maaneet SS LAST PART - 153pg mar15

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

That was really an amazing update...

i loved it completely...

So much of happenings... Maan decides to settle in US and the unexpected thing happens... and poor Geet... at her age she is totally confused ...

It was really a painful update but i loved the way you portrayed the flow of emotions... the way maan tried to hold himself... how love overcomes his control...

Poor Geet... she is just too young to face such situations and it was really sad when she pleads maan not to leave her...

2 more parts ... me eagerly waiting for it... hope you can update more today...

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#732

awesome, brilliant, emotional part
feel sad for maaneet and sply maan first lost his parents
then he assumed that geet will not cope up with all
once he should asked her
in love we can sacrifice anything and for geet , she will also do it, she can also cope but at least maan asked her
next feel sad for geet, so much tender age and her life, world everything with ,and revolve around maan
it's so unexpected for her
how much pain she felt
precap mein geet is there
but it's present or past
continue soon

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

painful

only two more parts

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#734

kya aur ek update milega
btw ek questions arise hua hain
kya oh little boy maaneet ke hain
pata nehi phir se mein over thinking kar rehi hoon
muskan tumhara FF ka kamal hain m back those day's mood

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

ohhh..

what a flow..

it was ausum..

waiting eagerly to read more..

LOVE
KJ

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neethu

@neethuMG

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

nice part...very sad part pls dnt make more crying updts di...

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#737

painful... my heart broke as she was asking him not to leave in the end... even he too, initially he wanted to settle down in ny but due to the circumstances what all he have to go through... how true... thats life... life doesnt move according to our plans... if it had then kya kehna???? lekin phir jeene ka mazaa bhi kaha aayega??? eagerly waiting for the nextt...

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komlika

@komlika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#738

I will read once I get happy happy update... You see if I read it now then I will only think abt it... Which I can't afford bc I have big exam to study for its tomorrow 😳