Maaneet FF ~8~ Saaya (Thread9 added) 11/03

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Angel

@amita5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

Thanks for the triple updates

All I can say it was Fantastic...

Loved the way the truth came out and then maan guilty

conciousness and then geet's pregnanacy

Dia, you write so well that we all wait to read your updates

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Loved it ,Awesome Update you describe the pain of both beautiful in your words ...its completely amazing i must say ...waiting for next update .

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Its a FABULOUS FF dear ; from beginning till the present scenario , all of it was BEAUTIFUL !!!

I read it a while back but due to erratic schedule of my work could not continue it . I completed reading after so long and now I'm ADDICTED !!!!

You are a Fantastic writer !!! this plot was handled with Extreme Finesse and Perfection I can Safely Say IT IS A SUPERB WORK AND 1 OF THE BEST I've read so far !!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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I loved Geet here !! her characterization was BRILLIANT , to say the least ! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 sensitive and soft which completely complimented Maan who was rude and harsh during the initial chapters ... also Geet was all heart and Maan all mind ... and when they came together it was MAGICAL 😍 👏

I'm speechless HOW MUCH THIS FF touched my heart and soul ? 👏 👏 👏

It defines Love in the Most Beautiful Way I've ever seen ... I would like to mention and give you kudos for Pt 56 specially which was 'MASTERPIECE' written so 'Elegantly' ... esp this entire para convo ...

Geet looked down and nodded. Maan felt his heart getting constricted. He continued with great difficulty, "Kya woh humare batch mein tha?" She again nodded looking down. He asked, "Usne aisa hone ke baad tumse milne ki koshish nahi ki thi?" She told, "Usko pata nahi tha ki usne mere saath aisa kiya tha. Woh nashe ke halath mein yeh sab kiya tha." He asked, "Aur tumne usse bataya nahi?" Geet told, "Nahi, usne hosh mein nahi kiya tha. Aur woh kisi aur se pyar karthe the. Mein unke beech mein aana nahi chahthi thi. Aur yeh baat tho sirf mujhe pata tha. Kisi aur ne hume dekha nahi tha." Maan felt he can't breathe anymore. How much she suffered because of him. How can she love someone like this? He asked finally, "Don't you think he deserves to know the truth?" Geet told looking up, "Nahi, ab in sab baton ka kya matlab. Mein usse kabhi bhi guilty feel karana nahi chahthi thi." He stood up and went near her. He held her shoulders and asked, "Don't you think it is wrong to keep him in dark? Even after getting married to him?"

Edited by drashsree100 - 13 years ago

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saam123

@saam123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#525

wow awesome

did in one day

i got three

surprised 3

updates all

together . now

u r my angel

who bring maaneet

dream world in

our life. love u

4 all these updates

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

I cannot see both Maan and Geet in so much pain.😭One in pain due to the guilt of what he has done, while Geet in pain seeing Maan blaming himself for what happened.Me crying.😭