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Awsome prt...maan did his job n still mainted distnce n not violated her...
Superb option...waitng 4 geets reaction...

Originally posted by: NiharikaNeha777

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">as usual... a vry sensual... passionate... emotional turmoil filled updt wid d fake sex scene of MaanEet 😆😆😆 well done Marvee 👍🏼</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">but I failed 2 undrstand whts d point of targeting Geet in all dis mess... I mean Maan nrmally goes 2 those bimbos who r keep of some criminals or politicians and will help him revealing their true colors... but why Geet?????? she is not sm1's keep nor she is attached wid any kind of illegal works or person...thn why is she a file or case for Maan??????? <font color="#ff0000" size="5">WHY???</font></font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">will u plsss clear disconfusing point (4 me at least 😉😆)b4 advancing d story 4ward!!!!!!! otherwise evrythng is as perfect as ur other awsome works 😊😊</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS">plsss updt soon dear...</font>

Hope u dont mind me answering ur question...well, geet herself has a mission from Karan that she must stay away from men,karan is also maans boss so he kind of using his skills of casanova to test geet...at the same time karan knew maans love 4 song since childhood thats y he assigned geet to him,so they kn fall in love :) smart man this karan 😆 Two rabbits with 1 shot 😉

aaawww poor maan. well hope geet don't hate him.. its beautiful update as well as touchy

loved the update...maan finally came to know about geet...maan named her song...oh that was so cute...i just can't have enough of this fact😳..

Juicy comment for u Jaan;) Well i started dripping jst by cin warning: kinda 18 Just the note itslf ws sendng me wierd thots n ws anticipating like hell, "Threeth " time Roflmao... i loved it dear ... Kissy would have been described much more... Maans dilemma n the happiness tat he found his song ,he rembrd her since the infancy!!!!! Daadi n daddu convrsatns were gud ,the way daadi doubtd khurana charmers was beautiful, n daddu's trust on his pota ws awesum n maan finally confesd to himself tat he is in love Oh my my Casanova in love ,the way he came out draping towel aftr shower i felt i vl eat him up ;) he handld it smartly taking of geets clothes n himself setlng over her panty n rode the ecstatic fantasy to pleasure her ,along with love bites and pasionate kisses :me too flushd!!! geet moand subconciously , maans audacity to walk out nude n his coment made me blush . ur motto to make us pant heavily hs been succesfuly acomplishd;););) Precap:lol maans jaw gonna drop ,he is feining Dr.geet tat shes no more virgin ... HOWS THE SUPER DUPER LENGTHY COMMENT JAAN...WAITING FOR NXT UPDATE...

Originally posted by: Sushmacholke

Juicy comment for u Jaan;)Well i started dripping jst by cin warning: kinda 18 Just the note itslf ws sendng me wierd thots n ws anticipating like hell,"Threeth " time Roflmao... i loved it dear ...Kissy would have been described much more...Maans dilemma n the happiness tat he found his song ,he rembrd her since the infancy!!!!! Daadi n daddu convrsatns were gud ,the way daadi doubtd khurana charmers was beautiful, n daddu's trust on his pota ws awesum n maan finally confesd to himself tat he is in love Oh my my Casanova in love ,the way he came out draping towel aftr shower i felt i vl eat him up ;) he handld it smartly taking of geets clothes n himself setlng over her panty n rode the ecstatic fantasy to pleasure her ,along with love bites and pasionate kisses :me too flushd!!! geet moand subconciously , maans audacity to walk out nude n his coment made me blush . ur motto to make us pant heavily hs been succesfuly acomplishd;););)Precap:lol maans jaw gonna drop ,he is feining Dr.geet tat shes no more virgin ...HOWS THE SUPER DUPER LENGTHY COMMENT JAAN...WAITING FOR NXT UPDATE...

One most imp part whch i loved POSSESIVE Maan cz he dint wantd anyone to touch her for wch he pland her for fake sex ,superly executed,
Just wish geet cums to knw soon bot her Infant lover;) rathr presuming maan to be a casanova ...

very hawt and can't believe he din't go through with it update soon