MORE PIYA- THREAD 2 - UPDATE pg 145 - Page 40

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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet still thinks of Maan and loved him.. but her mom is arranging her marriage.. hope Maan enters soon in her life!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Updates
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Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
is James is Maan
continue soon
awesome updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...wonder where is maan??
update mahsoos as well...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear, thanks 4 da pms n superb update! Jus read paer 223 n 24 nw! Poor Geet! Missing Maan! Is James Maan??? well written
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Posted: 13 years ago
More Piya
Part 25




Geet parked her car right in front of her flat and rushed upstairs in to her apartment. Banging shutting the door. Her body was shaking with fear, pain. The projection of maan was bringing the deep hidden emotions. Sometime the feeling alone could tear you apart, let alone when you know there are nothing to look forward to. The absence, the emptiness within geets heart was slowly poisoning her every vain. She pushed her body against the door, humming, suppressing the loud scream which is threatening to come out.
'please come back... Please come back... Please... Please...' geet stared across the room, gazing upon maans photo. 'why can't god do some magic? Why can't you come back to me? Why can't this patient disappear? Why you left us? She held her knee and sobbed through out the night. Geet couldn't imagine her self with anyone, no one...

...

'where is geet? I want her in my cabin in less then a minute. Right now!' James ordered one of his secretary over the phone. Within half second geet knocked on the door. James looked highly angry. Something must have happen.
'is everything alright sir?'
'WHAT do you mean? Do I look alright?' James grits his teeth. 'I was thinking we should go out to a dinner, that's why I have called you' james mocked
Geet flinched one of her eye brow up.
'ehh'
'GEET!' James snaps. 'why do you think I have called you? Of course it's for work!'
'sorry James. Go on'

James have noticed geets puffy eyes, but she had this sexiness in every gesture. He had to admire her beauty. A natural beautiful girl. Maybe there is millions who dyes after his money, wealth, his sexy attitude however, it's geet who managed make him weak on his knee. Make him feel hard, make him feel wanted.

'hotel, why have the land lord in India have refuge to sell the land? I thought everything is saluted.'

Geet looked at her boss blankly for few fraction of second. Trying to rewind her mind, that what exactly her boss is talking about. 'sorry James, but which one? We have 5 project lined up in India!'

'deli!' James spoke in his English accent. Geet almost laughed that he couldn't even pronounce deli properly.

'it's deli!' geet corrected his accent. 'I will look in to it and let you know soon as possible.'

'ok!' James looked at his folder then back at geet. Who did not look in her hyper mood today.

'are you alright?' James questioned.
'Emm'
'you just seems to be to quit!'
'excuse me sir!'

Geet avoided his question and walked out. Soon as she left the cabin sana came along and hugged geet tight. 'are you alright sweetie?'

There hug caught James attention. He looked over his glass desk curiously.

'yes!' geet fumbled.
Sana wasn't sure what to say. Maan, maan is geets life, how can she let go of him so easily?
'just leave me be please!' geet begged sana and walked towards her cabine.

It's normal for geet to be like that after this big breakdown. It's only matter of few days until she is back to normal.

***
maan

'are au kalll muhiii?' a loud noise came across the modern day slam as Dodo stepped out of one of room of delis basti.
'know-I know-I. I good speak English. Au maan aega na toh me tujko muo boli jabab dunga!' sammera replied. Whole town was present as she got kicked out of one of the ladies house.

'ka yar what are you doing? Why you arguing with her?' one of sams friend suggested.
'no me argue. Argue she! I argue not!' sam spoke in English that was hard to understand.
'why do you try to speak in English when you know you can't!'
'I good English speak! Good very! Diaries & letter maan writes, I read- read and read but I understand not! Is this because I try!'
'now where is this maan? Au anny, she is going out of control. Why can't he send her to mental hospital. That would be awesome!'
'know I! Know I!'
SAMs friend barsha flowed her to there room where anny was tied up with a rope next to the bad. She was dying to release her self, however, no cant do. It's to risky. Soon as Sam and barsha walked in maan entered from behind with a white bag.

He was taller then before, everything was same, the green eyes, brown hair, dark brown stubble except, different cloths. A blue musty shirt and black trouser with chapel. The handsome body was fresh and new, the teenage face he possessed before have long disappeared instead it replaced with a hard manly look. There was no sign of smile, somewhere it's lost deep within London's memory. With Ranos care, with Ranos unconditional love. He Is cold, cold as ice with no tint of emotion reflecting back.
'yes?' maan questioned looking at both of the lady.
'mental hospital!' Sam suggests. 'I no understand you!'
'it's I don't understand you.' maan corrected. 'get out. I need to feed anny!'
'no! I no get out! Always you me tell get out!'

'I always tell you to get out!' maan corrected again. 'and yes, reflects how dum you are. Took you 10 years to understand!'
'I understand speak your English now!'
'if you understand my English, then GET OUT!' maan pushes both of the girl and locks the door on there face. He shakes his head in disbelieve and walks towards anny. He untied her hand.

Anny looked furious, soon as he opened her hand she started to smack maan. 'you are bad! Very bad. I don't like you. You are bad! Bad! Bad!'
'sorry! But you always try to escape!'
'ha toh!'
'this world is very bad place. You will get hurt ' maan couldn't speak very childishly. He knew not how to react with anyone. His world was anny, aim to cure, but failing miserably. Anny being 23 years old, suffering mental problem that maan don't know the cause. It took him 6 years to locate her, and when he did, he was to late. Very late.
'they all hurt me! how els they can hurt me?' anny asked innocently.
'they will hurt you again. And I won't allow them!'
'but why?'
'because I am your brother'
'buy what if they find me?'
'they won't! They can't! You are lost!'
'I am not lost! I am with you silly!'

Annys question would never end. Her endless question is something makes maans day perhaps. He served all the food in a plate and carefully fed anny. She was oddly nice and quit, maan could sense that there is something cooking in her head.

...

Full moon, maan stared across the vast sky, glittering like never before. His heat felt so restless. He wasn't sure why! Someone was calling him. Calling with all there might. Maan layed under the sky wearing a black shirt and a blue jense. One hand under his head, neatly folded while another on his stomach. Everything was soothing, everything top to bottom of deli is silent, quiet.

'I have found you!' for once a proper sentence from sammers mouth.
'I have told you not to distress when I am on the roof. I want peach time!'
'without dinner you can not have peach time'


NEXT- More of maan..

will try to update again soon :)
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
finally found maan...
did he remember geet??
waiting for more...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi jus read part 25 nw! where is Maan! Wat is he upto? Poor Geet! Misses him so much! well written! intense update

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what are you confused about ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoome..
loved d updates..
simply fab..
cont.soon..
thanx for d pm...

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