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PART 168


Yash had a long discussion with Darji & family regarding geets stay. Everyone was convinced except rano. She was not sure if it was good idea especially with Maan being so close to her. Not that she suspected Maan, but knew her jhalli beti.. she won't be able to control her feelings for him.

So it was decided she could continue with her studies. Rano insisted that Geet should stay in their outhouse instead of bothering them in KM. Yash so much was against that but guess that is the only option Rano left them with.

Geet was really excited abt her going back to Delhi. More than that being so close to Puchki. She couldn't even image wat she will tell to him or do to him. Ek tho kuch katen nahi.. aur phir itna kuch kardeten hain. She still can't believe he came to Mumbai for her. How can he.. her heart so much just wanted to blindly believe everything but her mind kept questioning. Why does he always leave me so puzzled she started with her list of complaints to babaji.

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Already a week without seeing mistimia & now a week more. Mere paas uska number nahi hain.. usken paas tho mera number hain.. can't she just call me. Wat is wrong with her. She just loves to make me run behind her & he knows he can't help himself.. he would any way do it. Only he & her teddy knows how much he missed his misti. Especially now realizing how she gave in to him that night. Even in that drunk state she didn't want to cross her limits. Her sanity meant so much to her..given a instance ..she rather kill herself!!!!..his heart almost stopped...
he chuckled holding the teddy puchki in his arms.. then why did she just let him..
why !!!! does she??? he didn't want to name it... but feelings he felt he couldn't deny... himself
How can she???
he has always been mean to her.. he hated himself for that
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It was the sunday she was supposed to reach. Maan was up early, he brought a yellow flower & kept it in the guest room beside the bed. He restlessly waited for her in the out house .. but then this was ridiculous, its only been 15mins & seems like ages. He was getting irritated every passing min. ek phone nahi kar sakti hain. He got fed up & went back to the mansion, just then he heard car pulling in front of the mansion. He ran down the steps.. just then Yash, Dev, Nt & Daadi all rushed towards the main door. Maan made all kind of faces & walked towards the dinning table pretending to take something to eat. He took an apple & nibbled it cribbing to babaji.. sabko aaj hi misti se milna hain kya
just then he heard her sweet voice filling the house. He felt so much in peace. He smiled & peeped to look. He sighed & looked down.. holding his heart that suddenly seemed to jump out of control just with her glimpse.
Daadi ' how r u feeling beta
Geet ' I am ok Daadi
Dev helped brij to settle her luggage in the outhouse.
Geets eyes was restlessly looking around for her puchki. He could clearly see the yarning in her cute brown eyes. He continued to nibble the apple & walked back to the steps.
Daadi ' Maan tum Geet se nahi millen
geets eyes twinkled in delight seeing him.. then her eyes worriedly scanned her arm that was plastered.
Maan glared at her angrily & then looked at Daadi ' mujhe nahi milne issen se
waisen bhi issne tho pura plan bana diya tha hum se dor jaane ka
Daadi muffled her laughter seeing her grandson's jhoota gussa. She looked at geets sad face & patted her cheeks softly ' wo aisen hi gussa kar raha hain
tum tho ussen janthi ho na.
She pouted cutely murmuring wohi tho samjh nahi aata.. kab gusseb hiten hian aur kyun.

The whole day Geet waited to talk to her puchki but he didn't even come out of his room. Poor girl had to go the outhouse.
I was excited to see him.. he didn't even ask me once how I am feeling. Didn't even look at me once. Itna gussa...yeh kya baat huen..aisen gussa karna tha tho.. mujhe bachaya kyun. Mujhe nahi rahna yanha. He just doesn't care for me. She cried all the while to her big puchki pillow & lied.

It was past mid night..she heard some noise.. she bit her lips & closed her eyes pretending to sleep. She knew it was her puchki
He tiptoed & came beside the bed & looked at her. So gayen..he sighed
she twisted her lips.. yanha neid kisen ..ek tho itna gussa karten hain ..her breath stuck in her throat when she felt his fingers softly slip her shirt up from the waist. She tucked her tummy in closing her eyes tight in anticipation. He softly caressed her wound & bend down.

He glanced softly at her, when he was sure she was still a sleep he leaned closer & gently pressed his lips to her stomach. She closed her eyes tightly..holding the sheets on either side nervously. Her body froze at the contact as she felt heat rushing up to her cheeks.
He slipped next to her slowly pulling her in his embrace. She shied turning into his embrace. Phelen gussa karten hain..phir ..she chuckled resting her head in his chest. But I missed u so much she said it in her mind. His hand pulled her closer. His heart suddenly seemed in peace feeling her safe & alive.. breathing...
the whole night he kept feeling her.. checking she was fine.. reassuring his longing heart..she was right their next to him.. fine!!!
Precap
missing their morning session
-NEXT PART 169
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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally... 😳


After so much of intazaar... They met!!!!! 😳
Thank god... I mean Thanks Muskan...!!!😆😉

I m feeling my heart at peace seeing them in each other's embrace!!!!😳

SO as expected Puchki showing jhootha gussa to his misti... 😉 and misti not getting what to do...😆
Ye Puchki bhi na.. pura din tarsaya usko...😭 But all is fair in love and war..(ye dono sirf war he karte hai😉 love to abhi baki hai)

muskan ek doubt hai... Is yellow color favourite of Maan or Geet? I mean he kept yellow flower beside her bed.
I know wo bhi gende ka phool he hoga...!!!! 😆
I think Yash has planted special Gende ke plants in KM's gardern just for his majnu son😉

waiting eagerly for next update.. I wonder how puchki will give his daily dose of gende ka phool to his misti??😕😉
Continue soon...😍
Edited by PoojaMishty - 13 years ago
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lovely prt di
check in f u gave the wrong link
it is opening the first page di
not the update page
loved it
waiitng to express there love
pls update aparchit

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