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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

My eyes nearly popped out of their sockets and my mouth refuses to close...I think I feel some drool coming out.

This was obviously not expected...not expected at all. At first I thought Geet was a cop, definitely not the sister of the supposed rapist. So did her brother really rape his sister...Or are they hell bent on terrorizing the world and each other for no apparent reasons, based on mere misconceptions?

The gangster and his 'mistress' both must posses some feelings for each other, regardless to what they say or believe...unless their such good actors, that even their thoughts and dreams are facades ;) I mean Maan is pretty darn good, if he can pretend it's all a game, when he is dreaming of her unconsciously and wounded.

I hope your never-ending sickness' soon come to rest, this was brilliant read...there isn't a moment in the story where you feel bored.

Congratulations on T3!

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noaccount

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

holly moly!!!!

awesome part!!!

loved it!!!

look yaar john ke diwani ne update kar he diya...LOL just kidding!!

but honestly ...what a thrilling part!!

u know u should be writing novels!!!

it was all a plan made by maan...huhhh😲

u know i was waiting for the update for sooo long ...gosh u take forever!!!\

beautifully written!!!!

poor geet feel sad foe her !!!

but the only part i didn't liked was maan acting as is he was in love with geet , well tahst ur story u can write what ever u want but u did some spell on ur readers that we want maan to be in love with geet even after he knows she betrayed him😉😆

geet dsoza handa? now whats the new story?

arggghhh maan u better not hit geet or will surely hate u , or wait dislike u, damn can't even hate him in fictions!!!

you definitely deserve a very VERY long comment, but m in a lil hurry !!!

as u r back now plz cont soon

love u tons

esha

Edited by backy - 13 years ago

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XXaquafireXX

@XXaquafireXX

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

YES! Finally, an update!!!

Omigosh...what a turn of events! 😲

But Maan wouldn't do this to Geet...right? RIGHT?!!

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Sammy, I hope you get better soon. Please don't stress yourself with updates till your better. Don't eat outside food and rest up dude, ok? 🤗

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

all this was a play. there was no luv from either side😭...i feel like crying.

thanx for the pm n i hope u can get out of u'r allergies n eye issues.

take care.

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362035

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

congo for d new thread..

loved d upd.

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afsha

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

1st of all ur personal stories were hillarious sorry that u were in pain but the way u showed n reacted on it i culdnt stop laughing esply that WORMS part hahahahahaha

2nd cming to update

U toh changed the whole stry upside dwn

It was lik bhukam ( Bhukam means earthquake 😉)