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Posted: 12 years ago
part 30
awesome...
so Maan is J...
this Rahul doesnt look good...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back and i hate Rahul yaar..poor maan feeling frustrated..pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
maan jealous
n rahul ye kuchh thik nahi lagta!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.
Long time of waiting.
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no...abb kya hoga...geet kaise sab kuch sahi karegi...maan feeling betrayed once again...worried fr maan n geet both...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oops.. Geet is in trouble..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice parts dear

i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,

As a compensation for the delayed updates, here is one more update for you all today. I hope you all will enjoy reading it. I am open for any suggestions from your side, on the storyline, but I have some really great surprises planned for you all in the next few updates. So guys keep up with the speedy updates.
PM for this one will be sent with the next update.

njoy 😊


NOT A FAIRY TALE
PART 31

Pari.. "Geet jaldbaaji me yeh tune kahan fasa liyia khudko. Nahi Geet main bhi haar nahi maanungi. Party to abhi bas shuru hi hui hai. Abhi to puri raat baki hai. Mujhe bas aapne plan me thoda sa change karna hoga. And you Mr. Rahul, just wait and watch, such a cheap person like u does not deserves to be with my friend" and Pari went to find Adi.

Maan was still trying to get a hold on his anger, when his phone rang for the nth time. This time he picked it up, it was Adi.. "Maan sir, aap kahan hain. Saab log aapko party me dhundh rhe hain. Mr. Ahuja bhi 3 baar mjhse aapke bare me puch chuke hain. Please jaldi yahan aa jayia"

Maan clenched his fist, feeling frustrated "Theek hai Adi, main abhi aa rha hun" and he hung up the phone.

"Pari agar Maan sir ko pata chal gaya na ki aisa kuch nhi hai, meri to naukari gayi" said trembling Adi.

"Aare Adi sir, tension mat lejia. Geet mujhe hamesha aapke bare me bati rehati hai, aur aapto Geet ke itne acche dost bhi hain. Itna to kar hi skte hain. Don't worry, Maan sir ki party hai, unhe to yahan hona hi chayia" said Pari, donning an expression of innocence.

..

With Geet looking so beautiful today, Rahul was having a lot of fun flaunting his fianc among his friends and colleagues. He came in the party mood and started consuming a lot of alcohol. Geet was feeling very suffocated and wanted to leave from there. But she was afraid if Maan saw her leaving Rahul so suddenly, he may suspect something. So she continued to bear with Rahul.

She saw Maan re entering the party hall. His face was expressionless. Rahul had already drunk a lot, but he still insisted on meeting Maan. Geet tried to stop him, but he dragged her with him.

"Hello Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. Sorry, hum phale sahi se mil nahi paaye. You see, main aapni fianc ko attend karne lag gaya tha. Aap to jante hi honge, shaadi se phale kitna dhayan rakhna padt ahai aapni fiancs ka. Vrnaaa.. baad me, bhut problem ho jati hai. I hope aap samajh rhe haonge" and he winked at Maan. Maan was listening to all of his nonsense with a straight face. And not once did he look towards Geet. Geet too kept looking down, unable to meet his questioning eyes.

"I hope aap yeh party enjoy kar rhe hain Mr. Rahul. Aapki 'fianc' ne hi organize ki hai. Aur agar aapko kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho, to aap aasani se unki madad le sakte hain. Now excuse me, I have to meet somebody important" and Maan left from there.

Geet's head shot up, and tears were starting to form in her eyes, at Maan's such rude behavior. She even tried following Maan, but Rahul was oblivious to anything. He was already high on alcohol. He dragged an unwilling Geet to the dance floor.

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Maan reached the bar and ordered a strong drink for himself.

If only I had eyes before

See right through you sweetest guys

Know that you can't see it

But still let it go tonight

To let it go, tonight (tonight...)

Maan gulped whole of his first drink in one go, asked for a refill and sat on the bar chair, facing the dance floor.

On its own accord, they wandered to the place where Geet and Rahul were dancing.

I'm a bad bad girl (bad girl)

I'm gonna rock your world

Coz I'm a bad bad girl

I don't give a damn

I'm gonna rock your world with a gun in my hand

I'm a bad bad girl (bad girl)

I'm gonna rock your world

Coz I'm a bad bad girl

I don't give a damn

I'm gonna rock your world with a gun in my hand

Rahul pushed an unwilling Geet towards the dance floor, and started dancing. Pari had seen Maan standing at the bar. She entered the dance floor and flowing with the song, she drifted the clueless Rahul and Geet to a spot nearest to where Maan was sitting, and hurriedly left the dance floor, before Geet could stop her. (In her mind Pari prayed.."Babaji, I have played my part, aab baki sab aapke haath me hai") Geet tried to leave after Pari, but Rahul caught hold of her wrist and brought her back. Geet was about to tell him to leave her, when her eyes meet Maan's scorching glare. Maan was sitting very near to the place where they were dancing.

Dil luttiya ae mast nighawan

Dil luttiya ae mast nighawan

Tera naam japdi phiran, soneya

Main tera naam japdi phiran

Tere naam toh sadke main jaawan

Tere naam toh sadke main jaawan

Tera naam japdi phiran, soneya

Main tera naam japdi phiran

She stopped resisting, not wanting Maan to doubt anything. Initially she let Rahul lead her, escaping meeting Maan's eyes. But after a while, when Rahul started getting closer to her and drooping all over her, she pushed him a little away from her and started dancing. She locked her eyes to those red angry eyes of Maan.

If only I had eyes before

See right through you sweetest guys

Know that you can't see it

But still let it go tonight

To let it go, tonight (tonight...)

She too caught on with the mood of the song, and started dancing all over the floor.

Meanwhile, she didn't realize that the zip of her tight dress had gotten loose and started to open slowly. She was too engrossed in venting out her anger, her helplessness, her suffocation in her actions. She was too high on her sorrow, to realize anything else. She had forgotten Rahul, her parents, Dev.. everything.. everything.. there was just one name which was echoing throughout her body, her soul.. MAAN!!

I'm a bad bad girl (bad girl)

I'm gonna rock your world

Coz I'm a bad bad girl

I don't give a damn

I'm gonna rock your world with a gun in my hand

I'm a bad bad girl (bad girl)

I'm gonna rock your world

Coz I'm a bad bad girl

I don't give a damn

I'm gonna rock your world with a gun in my hand

But Maan, who was continuously watching her only couldn't miss it. He was shocked to see her dresse's zip slowly opening. He tried finding Rahul, but Rahul was far too drunk and engrossed in his own antics to even notice anything about Geet. For that second Maan forgot everything and instantly rushed from the bar to enter the dance floor. Geet had not noticed Maan, until his strong hands grabbed her from behind, covering her opening zip by his hands. Geet, instantly recognized his touch and froze at her place. He twisted her in his arms to make her face him.

Tere saath seekha maine,

Jeene ka saleeka re

Tere saath seekha maine,

Jeene ka saleeka re

Dukho ko bhulaane ka bhi,

Aaya hai tareeka re

Dukho ko bhulaane ka bhi,

Aaya hai tareeka re

Maneet eyelock.. Maan's fuming eyes were boring into her pained eyes. There were tears brimming from her eyes, and the hate she was seeing in his eyes, made her rebel more. She was tired of fighting with everyone, tired of trying to judge every man entering her life, running away from them, not letting them hurt her. So why this time running away from him was hurting her more. She was so confused in her thoughts, that she pushed Maan away and started dancing again, showing a sign of rebellion, wanting to free herself from all men, but still could not help finding his image in her heart.

Nach nach ke main

Nach nach ke main

Nach nach ke main

Mauj manawan

Nach nach ke main

Mauj manawan

Tera naam japdi phiran, soneya

Main tera naam japdi phiran

Maan was horrified at her actions. He caught hold of her again and tried dragging her out from there, but he had underestimated her anger. She freed her hands from his grip, shouting "Nahi.. mujhe dance karna hai. Aaj koi mujhe rook nahi sakta. Main kisi ki nahi sunungi. Mujhe aapni zindagi me kisi bhi ladke ki zaroorat nahi hai. Aapki bhi nahi, samjhe aap. Aapki bhi nahi. Door rahiyia aap mujhse. I'll dance. I'll do whatever I want. Aap mujhe rook nahi skte" She was talking like a drunk person, her anguish had taken over all her other senses. Maan's patience's bridge had broken at her these words. He was mad with rage. He went to her and grabbed her tightly by her arms, pushing her back through the crowd in a corner. She was struggling to free herself, but who could have gotten free of that iron clad grasp of Maan Singh Khurana. He pushed her behind a wall, roughly, hurting her in the process and instantly came over her, grabbing her tightly in his arms. Geet was shell shocked at his actions. She had never in her dreams imagined that Maan could stoop to such a level. She got scared and increased her struggle to free herself. But then she suddenly stopped, realizing what Maan was actually doing. She could feel him sliding her zip, which had by now moved down to dangerous levels. She was shocked more. She didn't know how to react. Maan after doing her zip, abruptly released her from his embrace, but continued holding her by her shoulders. She was like a jelly in his arms.

"Kya keh rahi thi tum, tumhe meri zaroorat nahi hai. Main tumhe rook nahi skta saabke saamne dance karne se. to theek hai.. dance krna hai na tumhe, main dikhata hun tumhe dance kya hota hai" He grabbed her tightly in his arms, and angrily started pushing her towards the floor, twisting, twirling and turing her as if she was a doll in is hands. He was being very rough with her.

Maine toh khushiyaan saari,

Tere naam laayi ve

Maine toh khushiyaan saari,

Tere naam laayi ve

Meri yeh khushi hai ke

Main tere kaam aayi ve

Meri yeh khushi hai ke

Main tere kaam aayi ve

Rahe hasda tu mangdi duawan

Rahe hasda tu mangdi duawan

Tera naam..

Tera naam..

Tera naam japdi phiran, soneya

Tera naam japdi phiran

Main tera naam japdi phiran..

Slowly their dance became so sensuous, that other's left the floor to make way for them only. But they both had long got lost in each other's eyes. Geet too had started responding to his steps and they both danced as if no were was there, just them.

They came back to their senses with the sound of claps around them, as the song ended. Of all Pari was the happiest to see her plan getting successful, but her happiness did not last long, when she saw Geet immediately running away from there and Maan's looks turning angry. He too left from there.

Pari had really less time before Maan left the venue, and she rushed to catch up with him.

Precap..

What is Pari chasing Maan for? What is she going to tell him?

Next Part : Part 32

Edited by thekolgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updat e
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Posted: 12 years ago
weolcome back dear...very good double uodates...just one req...ab gayab mat hona...I had to read the whole FF again to catch up 😆

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