Maaneet FF ~7~ Saaya (Thread8 added) 01/03 - Page 71

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Posted: 13 years ago
both concept are good di
but i want u to continue 1st one..2nd concept is also good but i cant bear to see them separte..because it hurts..
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved both the concept😊

but 2nd one is different, i loved it...but is shocking, my only question is would that be a sad ending with maan and geet on separate ways and he getting married? anyways still my vote is for 2nd one...

when would you update saaya?
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Posted: 13 years ago
i was very very confused. Loved concept 1. When started reading concept 2 still loved concept 1. When I read the last line of concept 2 , I though I should click like to both.
Then thought that is not fair to the writer.
Then my hand went and I clicked like to concept 2. Not knowing if the girl getting divorced or married is Geet probably swung my decicion as I will love to see see Geet as either of them. Not knowing the man divorcing is Maan or someone else. So it intrigued me.
But I am scared too. I don't have a heart for very sad stories. Concept 1 sounded fun but concept 2 - don't know. It could be "heart break" or "Rebuilding Life". depending on who is the girl and boy and what are their next steps.
So, those are the two titles depending on what suits it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

loved both the concept😊

but 2nd one is different, i loved it...but is shocking, my only question is would that be a sad ending with maan and geet on separate ways and he getting married? anyways still my vote is for 2nd one...

when would you update saaya?

Thought of updating Saaya this afternoon but caught up with work.. Will update at night..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love both and love to read one by one both ...i leave its up to you which one you like too write first
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the both concept . dia , wanted both since have to vote for one , it goes for second sounds very different and intriguing . but if u can , plz continue the first one too plz .😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
2nd one is different.. bt hope it aint too sad..
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Posted: 13 years ago
if second has not the happy ending continue first and if the second has happy ending then continue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved both the proluge dear.. ...
wants u to start on both the stories...
i know it will be tough...
but i m sure u will be able to manage...
both the concepts r good.. ...

first one on friendship ...
and second one is on relationship. ...

concepts first will show us the true meaning of friendship i suggest u name of first concept ...dil or dost...
concepts second will tel us how to survive the realtions in our life...
for second concept i feel u can named it
dil ke aawaj ...dil ka rishta...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Dia--

Concept 2 (Prologue)

She sat outside the court, holding their son close to her, waiting to see him once more before they separated their ways. He came and sat next to her. Their son was asleep in her lap, not knowing that he won't get to see his parents together again. He looked into her eyes. She saw there was pain, guilt and love. Then why he took such a decision? She knew he loved her, no loves her still as much as she loved him. He was the one who used to tell the importance of having both parents with the kid. Then what prompted him to make such a decision? She knew they were exact opposites. Their likes or dislikes never matched, their aspirations and dreams never matched, their lifestyle never matched. Theirs have been an arranged marriage and there was not a single day in the past five years of their marriage that they never argued over something. But beyond all these, there was something that kept their relation intact, their love. She couldn't come into terms with the fact that they got divorced, the five year long relation has come to an end. She wanted to scream, to beg him not to leave her, but something prevented her from doing so. If he is not happy with them, she should let him go. When he gave the divorce papers, the only thing she asked was she don't want their son to live a dual life, she wanted him to be with her always. She knew it will be difficult for him knowing how much he loved him but to her surprise he agreed on a condition of bringing him to meet him once in every two months. The past six months of staying together under a roof knowing about the impeding doom was the most difficult phase in her life. She wanted to ask him the reason. Like knowing her inner turmoil, he spoke breaking her thoughts, "I'm getting married next month."

Hi dearies, this will be little dramatic than the first one. For this I have the whole storyline in mind. If you liked the prologue, click the like button and suggest a title.


i really wanna read this concept...
i hope this concept gets more likes...
eager to know who is the husband and wife...

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