Maaneet FF ~7~ Saaya (Thread8 added) 01/03 - Page 72

i liked the second concept more

the second concept is more interesting...however, u can write two separate ffs...

2nd concept sounds interesting my vote for 2nd one

I'll go 4r 1 concept... 2nd one is quite painful yaar...anyways both the concepts are interesting..

hey i go 4 second one though it is heartwrenching but seems fresh...If the coupleis maneet i cant see them separately i'm guessing it is deveet but some wher e i feel the couple is maneet...THEN 4M HEART A BIG NO I CANT SEE HIM MARRYIG ANOTHER WOMAN OTHER THAN GEET 😭.why cant u start both of them i know u r busy but kya karein i am greedy reader😉.well u r welcome with new concepts

i loved both the concepts but the second one is different yet very painful if maaneet separate and its even more shocking they r divorced and maan's getting married to someone else...i cannot bear this neither can i see them separate , yet i feel they will never separate come what may because they r meant to be together...if its going to be a really very painful ff then please give us a lighter version as i cannot see them in pain and separated and maan marrying someone else nooo never!!! 😭😭😭😭

dia hi sache me ache ideas hi lekin dono ache hi ek friendship ek shadi to tum dono liko saath em nahi ek ke baad ek bi sahi lekin dono likna jaroor masee ne jo dia analysation of title acha laga use it

maansee concept analysation

loved both the proluge dear.. ...

wants u to start on both the stories...

i know it will be tough...

but i m sure u will be able to manage...

both the concepts r good.. ...

first one on friendship ...

and second one is on relationship. ...

concepts first will show us the true meaning of friendship i suggest u name of first concept ...dil or dost...

concepts second will tel us how to survive the realtions in our life...

for second concept i feel u can named it

dil ke aawaj ...dil ka rishta...

Originally posted by: --Dia--

Concept 2 (Prologue)

She sat outside the court, holding their son close to her, waiting to see him once more before they separated their ways. He came and sat next to her. Their son was asleep in her lap, not knowing that he won't get to see his parents together again. He looked into her eyes. She saw there was pain, guilt and love. Then why he took such a decision? She knew he loved her, no loves her still as much as she loved him. He was the one who used to tell the importance of having both parents with the kid. Then what prompted him to make such a decision? She knew they were exact opposites. Their likes or dislikes never matched, their aspirations and dreams never matched, their lifestyle never matched. Theirs have been an arranged marriage and there was not a single day in the past five years of their marriage that they never argued over something. But beyond all these, there was something that kept their relation intact, their love. She couldn't come into terms with the fact that they got divorced, the five year long relation has come to an end. She wanted to scream, to beg him not to leave her, but something prevented her from doing so. If he is not happy with them, she should let him go. When he gave the divorce papers, the only thing she asked was she don't want their son to live a dual life, she wanted him to be with her always. She knew it will be difficult for him knowing how much he loved him but to her surprise he agreed on a condition of bringing him to meet him once in every two months. The past six months of staying together under a roof knowing about the impeding doom was the most difficult phase in her life. She wanted to ask him the reason. Like knowing her inner turmoil, he spoke breaking her thoughts, "I'm getting married next month."

Hi dearies, this will be little dramatic than the first one. For this I have the whole storyline in mind. If you liked the prologue, click the like button and suggest a title.