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arpitaji

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: payalpari
pleasure is all mine dear that's what life teaches us think before u do bcz once it done its done u can't undo it by going in past and u can't do anything but repaint and feel guilty for the mistake u did that's what maan is doing right now thinking why i have to do this and not that 😭

Very true dear... sometimes we just ruin everything

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: arpitaji

Very true dear... sometimes we just ruin everything

yup dear its us only who build and who ruin no one else ...

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

Loved the part arpita..

Maan's remorse s getting more heavier day by day..

And the way he torturing himself is really a paining one..

Gud one..

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arpitaji

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai
Loved the part arpita..
Maan's remorse s getting more heavier day by day..

And the way he torturing himself is really a paining one..

Gud one..

yeah he committed such a horrible sin, that any punishment is less for him and he is truly repenting his deeds

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Mishu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

wow arpu di
awesome update
loved it so much..

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arpitaji

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: jssood

So did u like it dear ????????????????????????

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

great part arpita...
so geet changed maan😊

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Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

awesome arpi
love it the update yaar
maan now he came to know that he loves her but wat use when he buried his own love
well see wat bring next

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princes939

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

Heyyy
Read in 1 go!!!
Awsome!!!
Plz pm me!!!

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#450

PART 15

S.D;;;;;;;;;;ok sasha u can go now

sasha;;;;;;;;;;;yes mam

s.d(s.t);;;;;;;;;;;;;;jahan tak mujhay pata hai yash ki aik hi beti hai meera phir yeh GEET? kahin yeh MAAN ki GEET too nahi kya pata babaji ne hamaray potay ke liye khuch acha socha ho hamay yash se baat kerni hogi(s.t end)

savitri devi called yash on his mobile

YASH MITTAL;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;hello

S.D;;;;;;;;;;;;;yash hum...

YASH;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; mummy ji app itnay time baad app ko meri yaad ayai.

S.D;;;;;;;;;;;;;sun ker acha laga yash ke ajj bhi hamari awaz app ko yaad hai wetna hamay laga tha app hamay bhool gayae hongay.

YASH;;;;;;;;;;;;;mummy ji app sirf JAY(maan's dad)ki mummy nahi meri bhi maa hain yaad hai app ne hamesha apnay betay se zyada uske dost ko pyar kiya hai...yash gets emotional

S.D;;;;;;;;;;;;;;haan yad hai sab but abb JAY nahi hai hamaray sath.

YASH;;;;;; ajj jay ke baad app ne pehli baar mujhay phone kiya sab theek too hai?

S.D;;;;;;;;;;;; haan sab theek hai hamay app se khuch poochna hai yash app ki to aik hi beti hai na MEERA phir yeh GEET kon hai?

YASH;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;mummy ji lambi kahani hai waisay GEET bhi meri beti hi hai.

S.D;;;;;;;;;;; yash kya app hamay asliyat batayain ge GEET ki?

YASH;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; ji mummy ji

YASH'S FLASHBACK

yash was in his study when his daughter meera entered with her friend

meera;;;;;;;;; hi dad

yash;;;;;;;; hi sweety so back from india.he hugged his daughter and asked soo meera who's this preety young lady with u?

meera;;;;;;;;;dad meet my friend GEET

geet;;;;;;;;;;;hi uncle

yash;;;;;;;;;; hi beta

meera;;;;;;;;;; dad i have to tell u some thing about geet and he told every thing happened with geet

yash to geet;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; its ok beta now u'll be my daughter GEET MITTAL

geet;;;;;;;;;;; thanks a lot uncle

yash;;;;;;;;;;not uncle its DAD

geet;;;;;;;;;;yes dad and hugged yash

FLASHBACK END

s.d;;;;;;;;;;; yash the boy who done that with ur GEET is my MAAN

yash;;;;;;;;;;;;;;WATTT mummy ji

s.d;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;haan yash per us roz ke baad hamara pota roz jeeta roz marta hai yash us ne qasam khayai hai ke "HE WOULD LIVE EACH AND EVERY DAY AS DEAD MAN AND MAKE HIMSELF SUFFER EVERY NIGHT TILL HE BID GOOD BYE TO THIS WORLD"he's changed now yash he always thaught that geet is killed by her family plzzz yash give him one chance to meet geet agay jo babaji ki marzi hamara pota mar raha hai yash main yeh nahi kehti ke usne jo kiya uski usay saza na milay per yash aik baar usay aur geet ko aik dosaray ke samnay anay do.

yash;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; kal maan yahan a raha hai meeting ke liye mujhay nahi pata tha maan hi woh larka hai per sirf app ki wajah se main yeh meeting cancel nahi karoonga is se zyada main app ke liye khuch nahi ker sakta mummy ji sorry.

s.d;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; thank u beta bas itna bohat hai shayad babaji meray potay ko maaf ker sakain shayad geet usay wo gunah maaf ker sakay jo maafi ke layak nahi hai.

yash;;;;;;;;bye mummy ji

s.d;;;;;;;bye beta thank u jeetay rahiye.

yash was in deep thaughts and he goes to geet's office

GEET WAS CRYING IN OFFICE AND WATCHING MAAN'S RING

meera is asking her who's ring is this and why r u crying like that

geet bata na kya hua hai?

yeh uski hi ring hai meera jab main teray sath car main bethi thi i found it stucked in my chain,meera main sab se chup ker uske sath gayai thi kyunki I LOVE HIM i loved him a lot meera but see wat he did to me meera he killed me but my stupid heart it still loves him a lot meera tell me MAIN KYA KAROON😭😭thats why i dont wana go to mumbai if i can see him i'm gona kill him for wat he done to me but i know after that my heart's gona be dead also meera YEH PYAR ITNA MAJBOOR KYUN KERTA HAI😭😭

YASH was shocked to hear this.

THE END