TERI MERI PREM KAHANI *NEW FF* part 1 pg.23 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
heey dona...
will update in 10 mins
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Originally posted by: geetsweet

heey dona...
will update in 10 mins

okk dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
update soon tanu
we are waiting
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part 1

It is a pleasant evening .. a beautiful girl with a white dress looking breath taking with a cute smile palying on her lips enjoying the nature at park with closing eyes so that she can feel & enjoy the a cool breeze touching & tickiling her face

GEET''. Her eyes opened to see her lovely cute sister also a very good friend pinky calling her '

Seeing her she smiles '..

Pinky araay geet kaha gayi tu ne mai tum ko kabse dhoond rahi hu tum ko '.

Geet ". 'mai tho yahi tha tu gayi vuss kulfi ke peeche asks her by raising her eyebrow & point at kulfi which is in her hand'.

Pinky". 'am ahmm ahh mai hi gayi thi par tum mere peche tho aa sakthe the na'.

Geet" 'arey ye kya baat huyi tum mujhe bin bathye vuss kulfi ki peche bhagi thi aur upar se tum mujhe par hi chilla rahe ho'.

Pinky"
'geet tum ithni gusse kyun horahe ho mai tho bus tume na dhekne ke wajhe se thodi daar gayithi '

Geet knows how much pinky cares for her '. She also know pinky can't resist if she sees kulfi so she just smiles at her & hugs her'

Geet"
'ahh theek ke tho chal meri maa gaar chalthe hai kal office bhi jaana hai'..

Pinky"
"ahh geet kal tho DD anevali hai na..londan se after one week yaar mujhe tho kal ka din ko sochthe hi bahut daar lagrahahai yaar"

Geet" 'yaar vo tho hai hi ithni dhustdanav woh tho kissi ko bhi aisehi darra the hai'. Tum abhi se kyun dar rahe ho yaar' kal dheklenge'.

By talking with each other they just came out of the park and walking to wards their home as their flat is very near from tat park'..

Suddenly there is a man comes from no where helds geets neck with one hand where his another hand is with knife shows towards pinky and askes her to give her precious things '

Pinky & geet were hell scared with thz & pinky stated shouting for help ''.

Goon directs the knife towards geet neck to warns pinky not to shout & give her gold chain & purse like a good girl'

Pinky was now very much worried for geet & shuts her mouth with fear...

She stars removing her gold chain '. While all this incidents taking place geet was totally numb'. & there is sweat all over her face& fear in her eyes'.

When pinky was about to give her chain & purse to the goon ' the goon was engroseed talking them from her he have loosen his grip on her '' suddenly a young man comes from back & punches his hand which is is holding knife taking a changes geet moves from goon grip

In this process geet get injured on her shoulder by the knife''

Pinky hugs geet & stare them'.. when that young man gives some more punches to the goon making him bleed from different parts' goon just pushes that makes him fall on the ground & runs for his life'..

Soon as goon lives geet & pinky goes to words their savior and helps him to stand'..

Geet" '
app theek ho'.??

Man looks the sources of that sweet & musical voices comes from & to see her beautiful almong eyes now caring for him'.

Her milky white skin ,her cute lil nose ,her soft rosey lips he was fully in her dream land '. Tat he even forgot to notices his wounds'

He came out of his dreams land when pinky pops him'.

Geet" 'app theek hai na'..??

Man" 'ahh mai theek hu ' app theek tho ho na'.

Geet" ' she nodes her head and says thanks u very much for saving us '..

Man" ' heey don't say like that '. Ek insane hone ke kathir mai dhusre insaan ko help kiya, iss mai thanks ki kya baat hai ji'.

Geet smiles and says'
who tho apo ka badapan hai' by the way iam geet'

Geet such a beautiful name like her thought & says'
. Nice name geet Iam vikranth'..

Geet thanks & suppose to say some thing pinky interputs & says
iam pinky geets sister'.

Vikranth
'heey pinky nice to meet to'..

Pinky'
'thanks same here vikranth'. & thank a lot for saving my sister '.

Vikranth
'heey tats okya'.

In between geet sees his bleeding elbow & says'
haye babaji app ko chot lagi hai pointing toward his elbow'

Vikranth" 'says heey don't worry its just a small scratch'.

Geet asks 'r u sure'..??

Vikranth nodes his head assurences…..

Pinky' ' geet ab hum chalana chayi ye bahut dheer horahi hai'….

Geet says 'okya' to pinky & truns to vikranth...

'Once again thank u very much vikranth for yor help…… nice meeting u'….

u have to move now...

Vikrath' okya geet theirs no problem….. go safely……Bye,,,

Pinky & geet bid bye to vikranth…. Moves from their…...

vikranth 'stands their for sometimethem & leaves smilling to himself'...
precape...
someone pulls geet to the drak room 😕

so how is it...

sorry their is no maan in this part...🤢😆
so waiting for ur response ...😃
even critics are also welcome😊

@priyadarshini64

thank u very much very much meri jaanu


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

update soon tanu
we are waiting

heey dear thanks 4r waiting... updated
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey tanu
superb update dear😊
geet in white dress i knew she would look like angel yaar😳⭐️
and geet and pinky kulfi sequence lolz made me laugh thinking bat me nad my sis with the same situation 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
and vikrant entry is good hm starting mein he ight not bad yaar
and geet and vikrant thanking
and vikrant is lost in geet beauty 😡
oye u dont have r8s to see her its only our msk haq on her😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
and me waiting for maan entry plus maan and geet nokjhok 😆😉
loving it
superb dear
continue soon
😆😡😆
Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

hey tanu
superb update dear😊
geet in white dress i knew she would look like angel yaar😳⭐️
and geet and pinky kulfi sequence lolz made me laugh thinking bat me nad my sis with the same situation 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
and vikrant entry is good hm starting mein he ight not bad yaar
and geet and vikrant thanking
and vikrant is lost in geet beauty 😡
oye u dont have r8s to see her its only our msk haq on her😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
and me waiting for maan entry plus maan and geet nokjhok 😆😉
loving it
superb dear
continue soon
😆😡😆

heey dear
thank u 4r wonderful comment ,,,,,
after reading ur comment i was just like thz😆😆
ur right no one has right to lost in geet beauty😆😆 ye vussi ka haaq hai...😆
even i love kulfi very much...Embarrassed
will do dear...
luv u tooo❤️
TanuDDian thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Aanchal_

Nice update! 😆😆

thanks dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
i hope precap maaneet pe hi ho

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