'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150 - Page 56

Originally posted by: junglli billi

hi i had silent fic reader of urs i must say i am damn badly impressed by ur way of plotting th fics. All of dem r happening man. N i jst lov tis fic of urs. Hmmm jst wanna say tat update soon n dont stp writin lik a few ppl did.

superb update. loved the devil. so sensueous continue soon

Originally posted by: drrose31

only two words are enough for whole update that are : SUPER HOT... 👏

but i will elaborate as well😆 😆

i was thinking that snake was fake ????? coz it didn't move a bit 😆

both felt strange after the kiss...and what was that both didn't get

to know or at least tried to know...

geet was so sweet... It.. It was a kiss.😆 😆

for me that was a small peck...

and then maan said...Do you call it a kiss..?

I mean, come on we have done it before and I am sure I was not that bad to give you an impression that the thing you just did can be given the name "kiss".

aww... that was indeed a shameless comment...😳

and then...

wasn't geet supposed to seduce him???????? but here maan was seducing her ...

oh that too to make her respond him...

maan had answers of her every definition of love...

and once again maan was trying to prove himself right and geet wrong...

who succeeded ??????? i don't know

i loved these lines of your's annie... My conscience has several tongues,and every tongue brings in a several tale,and every tale condemns me for a villain.

o oo geet fell down in the water and she doesn't know how to swim...😲

hope her devil will save her...or that uday can do that honor???????

that is what i call cliff hanger😡

continue soon

love rose😉

Originally posted by: maaneetfanatic

Wow Aniee that was hhhooottt😳

I'm glad geet chose the Devil among the 3 options😆😆

But wow I love the fact that Maan told Geet to define love...and with each response Geet gave..Maan had to say something to counter it😉

Maan bhi na...hhhmmm so he wouldn't jump after her...let's see😛

Can't w8 for the next part...shayad a mouth to mouth after saving geet😳😳😳

Update soon Aniee😊

*le annie di no see my comment!!
*le me sad... :-(

Originally posted by: love2_soma

three equally dangerous things...water(she cant swim), snake(bitten to death) n DEVIL...n among d three most dangerous one is our DEVIL...hiii...hw much i love him...more poisonous dan a snake...muah...

no one can defeat my DEVIL...d answers he gave against geet's definition of love r amazing...hum toh fida ho gaye humarein DEVIL pad...

kuch ehsaas toh ho raha hai dono ko...magar dono hi anjaan hai iss ehsaas se...kyunki ek toh nadan hai...usse ye ehsaas naye hai...toh samaj nehi pa rahi hai...doosra...woh toh iss ehsaas ko manne k liye tayar hi nehi hai...woh toh adamant hai k pyar hotahi nehi...sab kuch sirf aur sirf desire n lust hai...pata nehi kab inn dono pya ko mehsoos karenge...intezaar...

magar abb kya hoga?geet to gid gayi?kya DEVIL usse bachayega?...zaroor bachayega...hai na?bolo bolo?...

awesome n beautiful n superb update dear...

u r amazing...u hav created d DEVIL in such a way k hum usse pyar kare bina rahe nehi sakte...u r just tooo good...love u...muahhh...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

simply amazin update

yes u did send the pm but i can't take back the idea of throwing u in the water unless u give us another update what to do this FF is really good u have got me hooked