'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

when will you update next

do it soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: sindu1231
omg annie you should not let this happen...let me guess., maan would jump to save geet out of love but claims he cant let her go as she has to fulfill his desires for her whole life time...hey na..😉..this maan is hiding his love in desire., and geet is burning with this new desire for a devil., soon gonna see them burning in love and desire...😳...

i loved all the killing guestures of maan towards geet...the way he is tasting every sense of geet while making her realize that she is in desire is too too much hot re...
annie you cannot leave us with just this part...show us maan saving geet 😳

thank u soo much

abhi next part

even i didnt decide

what to write😆

but i will be updating soon

me so happy that u liked it

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afsha

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

Yay Geet giri yay😆😆😆😆

Sorry but im happy

Now Maan will also jump as he cant let her go

N by looking her wet form he will have tuff tym by controling himself

Loved his tricks

He is awesum😉

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

awesome update
omggg devil is making geet crazy as well as us tooo😆😆
their is no match for him and his dialogues
superbly written annie
can't tell how to praise any more
he has answer for every question
nowww i wonder what will devil do
according to me he should save her but then it all depend on you😆😆
sooo evil annie do not be harsh on us and pls save geet😆😆

have a good night🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: ajenn
Annie wonderful update.
Geet's own definition for love and Maan manipulating it to Lust.
Maan would realize the thru meaning of love until he experience it.
But now Geet's life is in danger.
Why do u always hang u story at the top cliff!!!
Arrgh!!!! Next update.. Please tell me Maan saved her..

exactly

and then devil would

explian what exactly love is

winks

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: jasraj123
awesome update
omggg devil is making geet crazy as well as us tooo😆😆
their is no match for him and his dialogues
superbly written annie
can't tell how to praise any more
he has answer for every question
nowww i wonder what will devil do
according to me he should save her but then it all depend on you😆😆
sooo evil annie do not be harsh on us and pls save geet😆😆

have a good night🤗

if i didnt save her

then u all would defo

kill me

and i love my life

😆

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Yay Geet giri yay😆😆😆😆
Sorry but im happy
Now Maan will also jump as he cant let her go
N by looking her wet form he will have tuff tym by controling himself
Loved his tricks
He is awesum😉

omg

everyone is happy

to c geet drowning

hey baba jee

kya zamana a gaya hai😆

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princes939

@princes939

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Posted: 13 years ago

#528

Omg!!did she realy fell down da clift??
Im sure dat maan vil safe her!!all dw he is devil monstr!!
No1 would win 4rm him!!!!!
Waitin 4 next update hurry

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#529

nice update..

luved their convo abt luv...

hmmm maan seems very intense..

continue soon

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#530

Originally posted by: srirad
Excellent update👏
Maan is only seducing her..Poor geet burning in new desire...
Maaneet conversation Mind blowing..👍🏼
Liked that geet gave own explaination of love and maan is opposes it.⭐️.He is really devil..
Geet fell down.😲.U stopped in cliffhanger...
What will be maan reaction...❓
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part😊

thank u soo much

will update soon