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Edited by anshra - 13 years ago

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Shruthe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

As always, yet another brilliant update aniee...

Geet stuck with him in the same room and the way devil made her bend towards his rules... uff.. he is just totally super devilish...

And my favorite line in that was when he tells her that she is the only girl with whom he had spent a whole night... 😉 Just perfect for a devil!!

Geet decision of leaving the job... does she really think it would be that easy to give up when you are challenging a devil????

I loved the way Devil justified his side of the story... the way he tried to prove his point about lies was just awesome...

The best was this monologue, "You are a fool to believe my lie that I would have your video made in that condition of yours and bigger fool to believe that I would let anyone see that even if it had existed in the first place.

But lie is indeed powerful"

i just cant wait for the next update aniee... continue soon

Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago

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Dee.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

he likes her, doesn't he .. ?? but afraid of these alien feelings..

btw gr8888 update di .. and congrats for the new thread..

continue soon

take care :)

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Durga

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

congrats for the new thread !!!

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i loved it didi !!

maan thinks he is lusting over her ..

may be its too early to realise his feelings for her ...

want to see more of cute fights ...

Edited by mrk-1 - 13 years ago

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Asmi13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

This Devil has its own way...loving him more...he has trapped her with his words☺️...& l think Geet's plan will fail na

Waiting for more😊

Edited by Aasmina - 13 years ago

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sumusumu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Congo for nw thread...keep rocking.

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Mishty.M.k

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

congrats for new threadNYC UPT

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

You know, technically you are the only girl with whom I slept whole night...n didnt do nything wth u except hold u on my chest...

the activities of this devil...only tell that he has already fallen for her but still named it as lust...may b i wrong...

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Nasioush

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Kate ki takkar...koi kisise kam nehi..superb di me love it...waiting to c wht z geet's plan...

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

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sorry...like button not working.

Congrats for the new thread.

Devil...devil...lust...oh god.
Geet has been trapped badly...i wonder if she can plan anything solid against the Devil.
Nice update.