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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

touchy update. i had tears reading ranos lines to maan

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Ritzy, you have no idea how much I was waiting for this update. I really was so eager to know how Geet would handle the situation.

I must say I'm so very impressed with the way you've portrayed this scene where Geet is pondering on her decision and then seeks Babaji's guidance and the whole scene till the sunshine & rainbow was just so beautiful, I loved it.

Now I know why I'm such a big fan of your writing, I really admire the maturity & depth in every scene you create, so my darling Kudos to you 👏

Dee

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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Ritzy, that was an awesome part. I loved the way, the painting HOPE gave new Hope to both Maan and Geet, and Geet k babaji ka to kya kehna. Waise you very rightly potrayed how a mother influences her daughter's life. Here Rano helped her take the right decision. Loved the update.

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
feel sad for geet
how much she loves geet and she thinks about only maan's smiles and his happiness
continue soon

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

oh sweet se is worried for his smile

nice update

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Everybody deserve second chance... But if he wants...
HOPE...

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poongs123

@poongs123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

awesoem update didi plz continue soon

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kkiddoo

@kkiddoo

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

awesome update dear its clear that some where maan to wants this relationship its just that he need time to accept it and move on forgeting his past geet took the right decision by giving this relation a chance and maan time to think and come out of his past ...waiting for some maaneet moments 😉

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

loved this update...

I have tears in my eyes...not sad tears but happy tears that Geet has decided to give second chance to Maan and how Rano told her turmoil to Maan was very touching...

amazing update...

thanx for pm...

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

nice update di itna hone ke baad bi gete maan ke chere pe muskaan keliye kitna scoh rahi really good na ise hi to pyaar kehthe hi

Babaji….mein nahi jaanti pyaar kya hota hai. Par mujhe apne aane wale dard se zayda unki muskurahaat ki fikar hai. Can I ever bring true laughter back in his life? Will I be ever paint his laughing profile. It is in my head, my imagination and in my heart. Is this love when someone's smile matters more than your tears?

Please Babaji, mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai. I know I can not be happy without him. He is my soul mate but am I his? Unki zindagi mein khushi nahi par kahin mera pyaar unka sukoon bhi na cheen le

Mujhe raah dikhayie Babaji. Ek ishaara de dijiye apni bachi ko…bas ek ishaara"
Nice gana di at right time aap is FF me geet ko bahut devotional dikaye kisna gane se leke ab tak i like it

wah babji ne kya rasta dikaya geet what a conv that is calles caring talk Hello"

"Hi, Geet here. Woh maine yeh poochne ke liye phone kiya tha ki aap kab aayenge mujhe lene ke liye. Dinner ke liye aa jaate toh mummy papa ko acha lagta but I can understand if you are busy."
i really loved their conversation
"Aap sun rahe hai na…hello"

"Haan Geet….I am here. I will come for the dinner but if you want you can stay for some more time"

"Nahi it is ok. I mean if it is not inconvenient for you. Daadima ne bataya tha ki waapis jaake abhi aur kuch rasmein karni hain. Aur mom-dad kaunsa door rehte hain. I can come back again anytime once all the ceremonies are over."

the conv b/w maa beti excellently potreyed

Kuch bhi ho….tu mujhe bol sakti hai…..Maa hoon mein teri. Meri jaan basti hai tujhmein…waada kar kuch nahi chupayegi mujhse"

Geet hugged her mom "Aap chinta mat karo mom….I know. Waise bhi aur kaun free mein advice dene wala hai mujhe"

"I hope you find your happiness soon beta. Patience ki zaroorat hogi par main jaanti hoon aaj nahi toh kal, Maanji reh nahi payenge meri laado se pyaar kiye bina"

rano ma maan se exact achi baat kahi good
"Betaji, bahut naazon se pala hai humne apni beti ko. Humara guroor, humari khushi, humara dil ab aapke haathon mein hai. Please beta, koi bhi faisla lene se pehle yaad rakhna ki ab aap akele nahi ho"
papa ki bate funny lagi
"Kaisi galaan karde ho tussi Rano ji…Maanji khayal rakhenge Geet ka…waise bhi mujhe toh Maanji ki tension hai. Inhe Geet se kaun bachayega"

maan neto ek baat kehke poora update me highlight hogaya

Maan came and folded his hands in front of Rano – "Koi galti ho jaaye to maaf kardijiyega mummyji. I promise I will try my best ki Geet khush rahe"
precap me kya hi di return me sirf journey

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