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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 165


Followed by a scream '
her eyes turned to the door... when she heard Maan scream her name...
she hers legs couldn't bare the pain any more.. it gave way.. & she fell down on the floor. She slowly tried getting up clutching her belly stuck with knife between her fingers..her eyes shutting down.

He came in rushing giving no time or room to the guys to react.. his eyes widened in horror seeing her soaked in blood & a metal through her stomach. His heart stopped... he couldn't breath...wat did u do to her...he screamed
his heart felt choked seeing her like that. He ran to her hitting those guys madly screaming.. wat the hell did u do to her?? his hand reached the collar of the guy who probably was better build than him...but was shaken by his wrath. Maan really looked dangerous as he marched towards her..dragging this guy by his collar his dark eyes nearly spitting fire as he questioned him through his bleeding mouth, forehead..his body practically vibrated with anger... the whole room could feel filling.
The other guy hit Maan from back freeing his frd from maans grip.. pushing him on the floor next to Geet.
We didn't do anything to her... she stabbed herself.. Maan tried to rise... the guy slit him with the knife across his arms..
we didn't even get to touch her.. he tried to reach her.. Maan bend down thrusting his head in his stomach pushing him against the wall..
don't u dare touch her

he came running back to Geet... taking her in his arms... horrified seeing all that blood... patting her cheek...
wat did u do Geet??
why did u?
Kyun Geet??
kyun???
by then brij got both the guys from behind & handed them over to police. Brij ran to Geet & Maan.. both soaking in blood
Maan looked totally worn but still didn't let brij come close to her. He was not sure... who he was. he held geet very protectively cocooned in his arms.
brij sighed ' its ok Maan.. its ok...
Maan hugged Geet even more tightly ' why did u do this Geet??
why would u stab ur self? stupid... kuch soch thi nahi hain
why..?? he screamed holding her ..shaking her.. why??
brij ' handa's aapni jaan dedenge.. aapni izaad nahi
kind of fact may be.. he is her veerji... sinked in. Maan lifted her in his arms & rushed out to the closest vehicle.
He screamed.. dr.. hospital.. plz... dr.. plz...

brij sorted out the things with the cops & followed the car that was taking geet to hospital. The media was already there to get the details & pic. That just brought the worst in Maan. He punched the cameras & the media personal who ever blocking the car. He didn't let anyone come near her... or take her pic...
by the time brijs car reached the spot.. the whole entrance of the hospital was in a big mess.. Maan fighting losing his mind, screaming like a mad person holdin geet in his arms.
Police cleared them away & brij tried to calm him.. letting the dr take Geet in. Maan followed them until the operation theater. Dr was running in with the initial reports & x-rays
brij ' dr how is she?
dr ' she has lost lot of blood.
she didn't have anything since morning Maan added nervously... hating himself being the reason for it.
Dr looked at Maan & then brij
brij ' family frd
Dr looked at another nurse & told to take him to immediate care as well.
Maan refused to go anywhere from there.
Brij ' Maan u need some medical attention
Maan ' I am not going anywhere.. he said looking away
brij ' I am here
Maan didn't say anything
brij ' prachi kanha hain
Maan ' hotel main hain.. he gave the number & details.

Brij called up & checked if she was ok.
Maan sat outside till his senses could hold on.. the nurses rushed him to the intensive care & cleaned his wounds. They had to take some x-rays to check if he had any internal injury.


next day

Maan got up screaming Geet...
yash ' she is fine
he sighed & fell back on the bed.
Yash ' they have taken her home.
he got up at once.. trying to get out of the place.. pulling out his drips.. twitching his brows.. how could they.. he cried in pain .. tears blinding his vision
yash yelled ' Maan!!!.. holding him back..
yash tried to tone down.. Maan beta.. aap yeh kya kar rahen ho
u did a grt job. I really appreciate it
. Yash heart was filled with pride for his son.
Don't worry every thing is fine now... her family members r here now & they r doing wats best for them.
Dev came in rushing to hold him.. helping him to lie down on the bed.
Dev ' main abhi prachi se milke aa raha hoon
she is bit shaken up
Maan ' Geet??
Dev took in a deep breath
Maan almost stopped breathing
Dev ' she is out of danger. Nothing to worry. Lekin
Maan searched his eyes.. wat it could be.. every passing sec he felt himself sinking
Dev ' lekin ussen abhi taak hosh nahi aaya
yash helped him with the sheet ' sedditive ke karan hain
meri dr se baat hogayen hain
it was unlike Maan to shed tears.. his eyes were filled. All he wanted to do was see her once
yash ' tum rest karo... don't move ur left arm...
thats when he looked at it.. he probably had a broken bone in there.
yash turned to leave, he couldn't see Maan like this... he felt a soft pleading touch on his arm.. he turned to meet his teared fill eyes.. dad can I see her just once
yash looked at him helplessly
dur se hi
yash looked at Dev
plz dad

Precap
laila-majnu away away
-PREV PART 164 NEXT PART 166-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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she stabbed herself she was in blood and he was screaming for her he was fighting like a mad for her he held geet to himself Brij ko bhi hath nahi lagane diya poor Maan couldn't bear to see his Mishtimia in pain and took out all her pain and anger on mediaThey took him for the checkup but he didn't want to leave her Yash was proud but he is not understanding his miseryOska hath bhi toot gaya

Originally posted by: muskanp

he turned to meet his teared fill eyes.. dad can I see her just once
yash looked at him helplessly
dur se hi
yash looked at Dev
plz dad


OMG you just made me cryhis pleas literally left me in tearsThat was heart wrenching partso sad and very emotionalPoor Maan and Geet
Or oper is PreCap bhi itna sady sady
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update geet is always in trouble because of prachi
Hope her family realises the value of geet
😭
Edited by chandpooj - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
what a miserable thing to have to bear..💔.. he did go crazy didn't he.. but at least the sweetheart is with her family now..

I liked how he openly told Yash he wanted to see her.. hard time for all.

Continue soon muskan..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭😭 Bechara Maan!! 😭😭
He was injured himself but all he could htink abt was Geet !!
Cant wait for Laila and Majnu to meet again .. 😳
Amazing update di ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!
hope geet will be fine and they will be back together soon!!
continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
i feel like cryinggg
n such a sad precap
plz continue soon di
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing
luved every bit of it
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wow super update
maan held her not allow to touch brij
no words Speechless
abhi tak geet ko hosh nahi aya hai
he want to see her just once.
loved it
Edited by kahkashansakina - 13 years ago

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