-dhundlae aks - MAANEET FF THREAD 26 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Prachi pagal hai kya..?

How can she talk 2 sum random guy...

geet ki copy karne chali thi per bevkhoof ye nahi jaanti ki geet ko pata hai kub kis ladke se baat karni cahiye...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
lol naughty muskaan... kahan se churaya lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
congrats on the new thread and awesome update dear!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on new thread di... Loved the update... X
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
aww update prachi bilkul pagal hai girl hoke ese stranger per believe ker liya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
congrats 4 new thread di
omg
what an update
i m in shock
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
yaar..mera padhai ka muhrat nikal raha hai.. ;)
samjha karo..
jaldi update naa!!
LOVE
KJ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
sweeties the kidnapping part is similar to movie taken...the praveen bit
main idea is.. i want frds to know.. its really not safe to share ur infromation to strangers
how ever decent or simple he sounds.. just be careful
we all won;t have maan or brij veerji coming for or rescue.. by the time they would reach..🤢
PART 164
Maan managed to reach the main gate of her apartment. He scanned around for any vehicle speeding or
he was not sure but he saw a car the couple of guys.. he tried to check the number plate ..it was moving too fast.. he took a cab & told him to follow the car.

The car stopped at a very odd looking street after almost an hours drive it was around 11pm at night now. Geet whispered.. they stopped.
Brij & Maan ' where is this place
Geet ' I don't know
Maan ' plz don't get out of the car
plz.. Geet.. !!
brij ' I have alreted the police..they r on it.. unke pass tumahara phone number bhi..hain..don't worry. I will be there any moment with them.
Maans cab driver some how managed till the place but got lost with the inside lanes, but by judging the wat she said ..they should be some where close by.
They grabbed prachi & took her inside.. Geet opened the door.. not fully.. waited from them to leave. She stepped out after few mins & looked around. She nervously pulled her t-shirt down, feeling a shiver of fear down her.
Maan ' where r u Geet??
pata nahi Maan..

Maan ' tell me wat u see?? street name or house number or anything
Geet ' there is nothing here.. bahut dark hain
Maan ' koi shop ..or something uske board main address hoga ..teehko se dehko misti.. plz..
he pleaded.. running madly at the streets..
Geet ' yanha koi liquor shop hain.. address nahi phone number hain...
Maan took down the number & called them immediately putting her on hold.

The man on the other side answered very lazily.. hello
Maan trembled ' aapka address kya hain?
The guy got on guards ' kyun?
Maan cursed himself.. then came up with an excuse.. I am looking for drink..
I am at this lane..
he managed to read out the address from where he was.. my frd said.. aapko shop paas main hi hain.. '
mujhe mil nahi raha ha
the guy relaxed & kind of very happy at his own popularity promptly gave him the address.. & the direction.. Maan cut the call without realizing he cut geets call too...he couldn't think abt it.. he just ran to the location.. & managed to reach the exact place.. he was shocked to see.. prachi.. trying to walk out in bits & pieces... hiding herself in the corners.. holding on to her cloths.
Maan shook her prachi?? prachi?? wat happened.. ? Where is Geet??
prachi.. looked totally lost & terrified. ..not registering
He shook her again.. wrapping her in his coat.. prachi wat happened..?? where the hell his Geet??
every passing min his heart was sinking.. nothing humanising in his thoughts at that moment.. he felt his head would burst any moment. He couldn't even imagine wat it would be ...he brushed away the thoughts..he took her to the next street.. & stopped a cab. He pushed her hair behind slowly.. cupping her face.. plz.. prachi tell me where is Geet??
when she was refusing to respond.. he told the driver to take her to his hotel. He gave his room keys & money to paid the driver. He took down the cab's number & the drivers name & pic on his phone. Before he turned to leave.. he felt a gentle pressure of her trembling hand. He looked at her hopefully...
she will kill herself.. agar unhone ussen aisen kuch kiya tho...
she won't put up with all this
he looked into her eyes more terrified than he was. His face looked lost off its expression.
Nahi...he replied after a brief pause
he trembled..inching away
she is stronger than wat u think she is.. he was pritty sure of that.. especially knowing wat she has gone through because of him... his heart felt choked at the thought..
tum ussen jaanthe nahi ho Maan.. prachi said trembling in fear ..pleading him to get her out of there at the earliest
he looked at her the blankly as the cab drifted away.. he was sure nothing drastic has happened yet to prachi.. probably just they tried to '.& she managed to escape..with geets help.. & she got stuck in there...then wat did she mean by wat she was saying..
why would Geet ???
he couldn't even think..
he didn't think anything..just walked straight into the building.. few guys gave him a questioning look.
He just began to scream.. Geet.. Geet.. Geet.. as loud as he could...
some where in the corner of the building where his voice couldn't be reached was Geet.. trembling fighting against the guys who ever trying to reach her. '
guy ' she is worth millions..
she hated every word they spoke & the way their eyes scanned through her curves
guy ' she is really hot!!!
guy - much better than her frd
they began to molest her with words..

Maan was not any trained fighter or had he got into any such physical tiff before. He still managed to put up a fight.. getting beaten up more though.. they hit him with rods.. still he managed to hit them & look for her around..
by then the police had reached the location.

Geet pushed the guys away from her... who were trying to have some fun stripping her t-shirt with the knife... she snapped the knife from them & warned them to stay away from her
the guy laughed ' u don't have to be scared.. why would we do anything to u...
when we can get more money from selling u
she closed her ears not able hear wat they were saying... they laughed louder pulling her t-sirt apart...this is just fun...
she didn't wait a sec .. before she stabbed herself right through her stmach. As the knife puncture through her knotty flesh, the whole belly rippled.. her eyes watered in pain...
the guys looked at her in utter shock!!!!
arren yaar yeh kya issne!!!
she tried to muffle the scream & choke in agony as blood began to slowly drip.
Followed by a her scream filled with anguish '
her eyes turned to the door... when she heard Maan scream her name...
she hers legs couldn't bare the pain any more.. it gave way.. & she fell down on the floor. She slowly tried getting up clutching her belly stuck with knife between her fingers.
Precap
Maan going crazy!!
-PREV PART 163 NEXT PART 165-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg 😲

dee yeh kya kar diya aapne...😭 continue soon
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is like...😭

not a V day present at all...it breaks the heart into a million pieces...

hope she will survive otherwise ...

continue soon...

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