ManeetSS Life A Paradise With You!!!!pt4 pg22 27/3 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Geet smiled and told her everything from the Valentines Day to the party she arranged and the events of the evening too in details…

Surbhi was shocked as well as happy to hear the way Geet told Maan's love for her… but she couldn't digest the fact that all that happened in just three meetings…

Surbhi:- but Geet how are so sure about his love???

Geet:- bhabhi you know what is most special about him.. its his eyes… those eyes speak volumes.. and I saw the immense love in those eyes for me itself…… and I am so sure about it.. Believe me….

Surbhi smiled mischievously and said

Surbhi:- accha to abhi se apne unki tarafdaari….

Geet blushed hearing that and looked down shyly when her phone rang… She saw Maan's name flashing on the screen and said

Geet:- bhabhi mai abhi aayi…

Surbhi:- haan haan ab to ye roz hoga…

Geet glared at her and she gestured her to take the call… geet went inside and picked up the call

Geet:- Hello !!!

Maan:- hello !!!

After that an awkward silence occupied but both of them were able to hear each other's heartbeats … As if they were talking via melody of their hearts speaking everything required… no need of words… the silence was itself a medium of their feelings towards each other….

Stuti who was analyzing everything with a smile on her face but was unable to control her urge to talk to her bhabhi, yelled

Stuti:- bhaiyaaa… Phone cut gaya kya ya phir bhabhi aapko bolne ka chance hi nahi de rahi hai by God !!!!

Maan and geet came out of their silence sea and geet smiled hearing words of Stuti

Maan:- nahi wohh haan mera matlab.. uffo Geet stuti wanna talk to you…

He handed over the phone watching Stuti smiling …

Stuti:- hello Bhabhi….

Geet:- hi stuti… how are you????

Stuti:- wow bhabhi… you have a very sweet voice….

Geet:- thanks dear and you too have a very sweet voice as sweet as your brother's

Stuti:- why bhabhi.. did he sing a romantic song for you for a change ….

Geet remembered the song he sung on valentines party and smiled…

Geet:- nahi I just heard him singing at Valentines party once

Stuti:- oh that humse rahogi kya hamesha khafa….

Geet :- (shocked) you know????

Stuti:- of course bhabhi… I know everything…. Waise bhabhi did he sing any song for you while proposing…

Maan who was listening to it got in between

Maan:- what are you suppose to do with it??? Chal its over time now… let her sleep..

Stuti:- Oh hello Mr Maan Singh Khurana… eavesdropping girly talks doesn't suits you… chalo if you wanna stay here then be quite otherwise go downstairs…

Maan:- stuti no gundagardi…

Stuti:- bhaiya don't waste my time… Haan bhabhi where were we??? Yeah song… did he sing any song for you today while proposing..

Geet laughed and said

Geet:- song??? Nahi stuti… he issued a statement of request like a perfect businessman… as Geet tumne dekha baatein karte kartein kaise waqt guzar gaya tumhare saath pata hi nahi chala… kya hum I mean tum aur main apni saari zindagi aise nahi guzaar sakte ???? ek saath…

Stuti:- not bad lines but itna unromantic proposal…. As expected… what can you expect from an business psycho…

Both of them laughed

Geet:- hey Stuti you are as same as me…

Stuti:- phir to bhaiya ke pange ho gaye bhabhi… we both gonna rule Khurana Mansion… Accha ab aap bhaiya se baat karlo warna he is defo gonna burn me with his burning looks….

Geet laughed realizing how dear is Stuti to Maan and how sweet is she…

Stuti handed over the phone to Maan and he glared at her with "will see you later" look..

Maan:- Hello Geet…

Geet:- hi Maan Stuti is so sweet..

Maan:- why not?? Both of you have got an opportunity to tease me na…

Geet:- Olle my Maan is cribbing like a baby…

Maan:- What did you just say???

Geet:- cribbing like a baby…

Maan:- who???

Geet:- you maan???

Maan:- Whose Maan???

Geet: My Maan ofcourse

She said and realized what she said and blushed profusely… Maan felt a jolt of happiness through his ears raching directly to his heart…

Geet who could not speak of shyness was waiting for him to say something but he was feeling the moment and finally he spoke

Maan:- the thing you said remember it always… because Maan is only and only for Geet….

Geet felt her heart pouncing hearing those words from a three meetings ago stranger whi has become her life within a few hours….

Geet:- Always and Forever Maan …. Geet is all yours now….

Maan smiled and both went on talking knowing more about each and others life….

Next day Maan and Geet told their families about each other and their decision to be with each other …..

Maan's dad was happy to know the girl is none other than the strong girl at their party… he was impressed with her so he agreed at once… Mrs Khurana was least interested so she agreed at whatever her husband said…

Geet's brother was however shocked to know that the Maan Singh khurana is the person for whom his sister is talking about but then when Geet made him realize his words and unconditional love for her he too agreed to meet him for once and then decide….

Both the families gathered and met at Geet's place as decided…

Geet's brother was more than happy to meet the person like Maan who was so down to earth and so friendly… He realized by his words that he would never let his sister feel alone

Maan:- Bhaiya jitna sambhal ke aapne meri Geet ko aaj tak rakha hai utna hi sambhal ke mai apni Geet ko rakhunga and I promise… … I too have a sister and I know what a brother feels…. I know being a brother it is quite tough to let your sister in anybody's hands but I promise your sister will always be your sister first…

Surbhi and Geet were in tears…

As all of them agreed, their engagement got scheduled to be in next 8 days and the wedding within 15 days because stuti wanted her bhabhi to be at KM asap…

Days started to pass.. geet and stuti have been doing great together…they both were like each other and enjoyed each other's company.. both would call Maan for engagement's shopping and enjoy their lunch out teasing Maan in all possible ways….. Life seemed to be perfect…

One Day Maan was suppose to meet Geet but he was immersed up in some work and due to workload he has switched off his phone.. Geet who was all irritated with his continuous no responses decided to reach his office after waiting for two and half hour….

When she entered unaware of her position everyone started to stare at her audacity to ask the office of Mr. Maan Singh Khurana… for them their Maan sir was the most serious man in the entire world…

Receptionist:- Sorry ma'am sir is busy in a video conference with clients…

Geet:- I know how busy he is.. just show me the way to his office..

Receptionist :- my job ma'am…

Geet:- is safe don't worry….

Watching Geet in her furious avtar receptionist told her the way to Maan's cabin…

She entered the cabin looking at her so called busy man who seems to forget entire world when it comes to his work… he was so engrossed in his laptop listening to the non stop bakwaas of the client that he didn't even noticed her standing there…

It was being five minutes that she was standing there and watching him with her arms crossed… finally when he looked up he found her standing there looking at him with all the furious expressions she could give….


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He instatntly looked at the wall clock and found the time three hours delayed of their meeting time… All he could say was

Maan:- Freak !!! Geet wohh

She turned around to leave and said

Geet:- it is a blunder not a freak..

He got up and followed her.. they had reached the main hall of the office surrounded with all the employees..

Maan:- Geet plz listen to me … plz once

Geet turned around and said

Geet:- Okay Maan down on your knees…

Maan tried to hear evidently what she said when she repeated leaving Maan and everybody shocked

Maan:- Geet my whole staff is watching…

Geet:- so what?? I said down on your kness and promise not to repeat it again…

Maan looked at the amount of anger in Geet's eyes so he thought it was better to back out so he said

Maan:- okay my big boss….

And in a moment he was on his knees with his hands holding his ears…

Maan:- I am so sorry my Love.. I promise not to repeat this ever… but I cant afford you to be angry… iam really sorry and I mean it….

Geet smiled and said…

Geet:- I don't mind you working but what I want is just one message of either "I am busy" or "catch you later"… just for my mental satisfaction…

Maan was touched at her heights of understanding as if there would be anyone else she would have asked him a promise of stopping his work right there on her call but it was Geet his geet was entirely different….

He noded and asked

Maan:- now can I get up my majesty????

Geet:- Sure …

She smiled at him….

Mr. Khurana who was watching the scene from far now came in between and said

Mr Khurara:- are wah !!! you have made MSk sitting down on his knees in front of the whole world … you have the power beta…

Geet went o him and touched his feet…

Geet:- wohh kya hai na papa stubborn people need lessons…

Mr khurana laughed and nodded..

Maan:- oh plz… what whole world?? This is KC family only…. Ab plz all of you stop gawking at me and go back to your work…

Maan left holding Geet's hand embarrassed off course when Mr Khurana told everybody about Geet and everybody was very happy for him….

It was the day of their engagement… Maan was on the top of the world so was Geet… Both of them were waiting to exchange their rings wer busy staringstaring at the unending beauty of their partners….

Later Geet got busy with Stuti when everyone at party heard a voice

Maan:- Though I am the most unromantic lover of the entire world and don't know even the R of it but still for you my love I can become whatever I have to be the perfect for you so here is my one dedication to the one of the two girls I love the most… don't get confused the other one is my princess standing next to you…

Geet gestured saying "I know"… Stuti smiled with pride and side hugged Geet

He started playing his guitar and singing

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Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya


Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

He went to her and took her hands in his and led her to dance floor and started swinging on the tunes of the song..


Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja


She kept her head on his chest and hugged him along with the movements of the slow dance…


O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you … so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so

Baby i love u

He picked her up in his arms and looked into her deep hazel eyes realizing the reciprocating feelings in them… it was him only for her who has occupied the void in her incomplete life and made her complete forever and always…

He was watching her with all the love he had for her as if was insisting God to grant her for each and every birth of him…

Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein

Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein

Tu jo mili ek din mujhe
Mein kahin ho gaya lapata

(O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa ) ….. 2

(Kar diya Deewana dard-e-Kash ne
Chain cheena isqh ke ehsaas ne
Bekhayali di hai tere pyaas ne
Chaya suroor hai
Kuch to zaroor hai) ….. 2

Both were lost in each other and were so close as if could not allow even the air to enter between them…

Praying to lessen their distance as soon as possiple…

Yeh dooriyan
Jeene na de
Hal mera tujhe na pata

(O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa) ….. 2

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you … so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
Baby I love u
I love u…

At the end of the song he was on his knees in front of the world's most beautiful lady

Maan;- this unromantic stubborn workaholic stupid man has given his life to you… he would really be obliged if you could give him a little space in your life… will you

Geet nodded for a no and said with a smile to stunned Maan

Geet:- when you have occupied my whole heart then what is the issue of a little space…. You own me Mr stubborn unromantic workaholic and non stupid Khurana….

He slipped the ring into her fingers and everybody applauded at the most out of the world engagement ceremony they have ever seen….. he hugged her and murmured in her ears nall the dear ones had tears of happiness in their eyes when Stuti ran and hugged both of them

The days flew away smoothly and geet was now Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana living happily with her husband and a loving sister-in-law cum best friend … her mother-in-law was not interested in talking to her so she too never interrupted in her life.. she gotta know her behavior with Maan and Maan's respect of her and also her being a typical step mother for him… she was shocked to know that Maan and Stuti were step brother sisters because their affection was incredible….

It was a perfect family life… Geet has become the part of the family entirely and was loved by everyone including Mr. Khurana, stuti and the other members of Khurana Mansion too….

Then comes a day….One Day that changed their destiny…

Mr. Khurana met with an accident… he was in coma and there was no sign of improvement since many days… this was the opportunity for Mrs Khurana to deal with the step son she was bearing for years … so one fine day when Geet was taking care of Mr Khurana and Maan was busy with the office work which was neglected since days due to the health of Mr. Khurana, Mrs. Khurana called both of them to the common hall and said

Mrs. Khurana:- you have to leave this home Maan.. go and find some of your own house and job… you are no longer a part of KC… I hope I am clear….

Geet was completely shocked but Maan was calm and simply nodded…. No ifs no buts no why no where but a simple yes…

Precap:-

Maan's letter to Stuti and her reaction… Maan leaving home and his hard life



@all- i hope this much long part is the compensation of my late updation... plz plz plz do like and comment... waiting for your responses..

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Posted: 13 years ago
after soo long u updated



awsome update



mrs khurana is bitch


waiitng for stuti reaction




feeling bad for maaneet





u drop the bomb at the high point


waiitng for the next part


update soon





jaldi
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upadte
loved it...
omg i soo much hate that step mom,she is such a devil...
aww loved the bond btw maan n stuti ...
very well written...
loved the romance..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..
liked geet n stuti convo...
awww maneet moments were really cute..
OMG maan's mom asked them to leave..
awww wonder how stuti would react..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update and the precap looks scary but i know maaneet will manage 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
so cruel maan's stepmom is...😡
hope maneet ll be alright n stuti will do smthng
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update. Simply loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE...

LOVED IT...

ITS AMAZING TO SEE D AMOUNT OF LOVE MAAN N GEET HAV FR EACH OTHER...

I WANNA KILL HIS MOM WITH MY BARE HANDS...I HATE HER...


THANK U SOOO MUCH FR SUCH A LOVELY UPDATE...

WAITING EAGERLY FR D NXT PRT...

CONTINUE SOON PLZ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb updates
👏👏👏👏👏

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7 years ago

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Hey all of you welcome all in Maaneet sweet world one more painful story i hear " Kitni girhein kholi hai maine" a nd feel this going perfect

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