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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 3


Two days had been passed since Maan visited Karan's father. But that visit put deep impact on his mind..A man who takes things casually not related to his business..He was thinking about that meeting..The subject of their convo.But why ?..Even he missed office for this time.


Daddi Maa was much worried about him .When she tried to find out reason behind this Maan had no satisfactory answer. How much tense he was that was written all over his face n Daddi easily recognized


Daddi: Maan what's the reason beta..tell me if I can do some thing for u .I m not ur mother but more then a mother so why u always hesitate to share (she tired to lick his wounds…to find out the reason of his dilemma)


Maan: No Daddi Maa there is nothing lik that..u r taking seriously.Jst business ki tenstion hai nothing more. (Maan put his eyes down for this period .He was not able to face more questions from Daddi)


Daddi: Oh business.But if there is a tension why hav u missed office..pishle do dinno se aap aise he apne room main kayed (locked) hai

.

Maan: Daddi Maa plz leave me alone (he tried to get a grip on himself )


Daddi: U r alone from years..since u hav completed ur studies jab aap student thaye...atleast apke pass frinds to thay..but apne sari duniya se naata tod liya..Beta come out of this humse nahi to apne friends se miliye..share ur problems they will help to get it out of ur system...hop u ll understand me (sighs Daddi n leavs the room)


Maan thought what Daddi said n after some time dialed some one.Maan who was man of few words had started to speak hardly after this day.Even he tried his best not to face Daddi.


Months hav been passed since this conversation..On the other hand far away from Delhi at Bangalore.


A gynecologist in a hospital room was in conversation with an patient /female


Dr: So u hav decided to take ur baby with u .What u ll say to ur parents ..Its beyond me why r u doing this if u hav solution (Dr put her hand on girl's shoulder)


Girl: I not need to tell any body about my child's identity.If I think this is not a problem for me then why I need solution (determined girl said)


Dr: I m ur friend so I m helping u .But don't u think its wrong.


Girl: I m not doing some thing wrong.My child is mine so plz let me go


Dr: Okey I ll help u..U did lots for me now its my turn.So when u wanna go .


Girl: Today


Dr: okey

Dr left n that girl was thinking what to do next .How she gonna tell about this child to her parents.

At KC

Maan was missing from two days.Its not unusual.Maan always leaves home without letting any one for camping.But when Daddi came to know from Addi that he dropped Maan to airport that was thing to b worried at .Even Maan not let Addi know where he was going.He was not out for camping this time that was sure.


Savitri Devi Maan's Daddi she was shedding tears from last two days...But when Nakul informed about Maan's arrival...She jumped out of skin.She ran toward door.But she was not aware which Bombshell was Maan gonna drop on her .He had some thing in his hands.Lik any bunddle .He was grinning ear to ear.


Daddi: Nakul what is this Maan is smiling or wo bhi is tarah...


Nakul: Ji Daddi lagta hai camping karte karte Maan Sir k hath koi kazaabna to nahi lag gaya..jo unke hath main hai...isliye to nahi hass rahe.(he wishpered near Daddi)


Daddi: Nakul chup...wo aa rahe hai..aur Maan camping per nahi thay I m sure.


Within few seconds Maan was standing in front of Daddi


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Within few seconds Maan was there in front of Daddi

Daddi: To aap ko fursat mil gayi ghar aane ki..This is the limit Maan (she bursted without letting him speak)


But Maan lik always not answer back this time.He was still smiling.


Maan: Ya Daddi this is limit from now onwards I ll never let u giv any chance to complete .


Daddi's mind boggled what he was saying .How her boy has been changed over nite...Lik Nakul said 'has he gotten any hidden treasure'...Daddi first looked at his face.Then the bundle or treasure in Nakul's terms


Daddi: Yeh Kya hai apke hath main.(she pointed )


Maan: Daddi let me come in first…


Daddi: Come with me let me know what's ur new drama..aur Nakul go n bring coffee for him (she was frowning)

Nakul left place.But he was continuously looking back.But a voice suddenly stopped him.A baby's cry.He ran toward Maan

Nakul: Maan Sir u hav changed ur ring tone.But for a business man lik u its not good.Ek bachchay ki aawaz as a ring tone..(he said in one go)

But Daddi found some thing fishy.There was a moment in lil bundle.

Daddi: Maan kya hai yeh..bachchy ki rone ki awwz yahi se aa rahi hai..kya hai apke pass(Daddi goes near Maan n lifted the corner of lil blanket covering the thing within blanket)


Its beyond her.From where Maan got this baby.She was rooted to the spot.Before she fall Nakul held her n helped her to sit.


Maan: Daddi Maa r u alrite...(sitting next to Daddi Maan said)


Nakul gav a glass of water to Daddi.


Daddi: Maan humme kush samjh nahi aa raha pehle isko chup.. kara-ea...Pata nahi is nanhi se jaan ko kahan se le kar aa gaye hai..inka rona humse bar-dashat nahi ho raha (she took baby from Maan)


Nakul: Kiska bachcha utha laaye Sir..kissi k yaha apki payment to nahi fasi thi unka bacha to nahi utha laaye..jaise pictures main hota hai ..jisse paisa lena ho aur wo na de to usko sabhse pyari cheese le aate hai (he estimated n gav verdict)


Maan: Shut up Nakul.Dekho ro raha hai yeh…mere beg main bottle hai nikaal kar do mujhe aur bahar waiting room main ek ladki hai Maya ask her to come quick


Daddi: Ladki bachchy k sath ladki bhi laye hai aap ...what's this Maan (she was about to cry )

Maan: Daddi let Maya come..usko main bachchay ki care taker bana kar laya hu...Sabh batata hu apko .Nakul tum jayo


A girl of 23-24 came with regular features..wished Daddi..Maan gav baby to her n asked Nakul to show her guest room.


Daddi: To aab boliye kya drama hai yeh


Maan: Daddi Maa its not drama.He is my son.


Daddi: Ur son...is bachchy ko orphanage se lay kar aaye hai aap.(She has been irritated with his behavior )


Maan: No Daddi he is my son my blood.( he flashed a smile cupping Daddi's face)


Daddi: Ur blood u hav any affair Maan...kahi yeh bachcha apne binna shadi k to paida nahi kiya..sirf apni zid man-vaane k liye that u don wanna get married.(she put his hands down)


Maan: No Daddi Maa I hav no illegitimate relations or this child is not illegitimate...Apko bachcha chaahea tha. Your heir apko mil gaya..even I hav appointed care taker for him.So no need to worry.


Daddi: Aap ne aise keh diya apka bachcha hai...hum maan langay kon hai iski Maa (she srinked her brows tears rolled down from her eyes)


Maan: I don know..But Daddi Maa plz don ask any thing more..I hav no answer.He is my son yahi sach hai..n Maya she is nice girl...Karan k kissi friend ki behan hai..she is trained nurse in child care.


Daddi: U impossible Maan ..agar yeh aapka bacha bhi hai to iski koi Maa to hogi hi..binna Maa k to paida nahi hua..kahi apne kissi ki mazboori ka fiada utha kar yeh bachcha to nahi le liya..


Maan: Daddi plz don ask me more.I hav son ..u hav heir so chill now.


Daddi: Chill apko yeh koi tamaasha lagta hai..pata nahi kis dukhi Maa k jigar ka tukda le aaye hai aap..or yeh nanhi se jaan beta jab bhi roye ga samjho apni Maa ko yaad kar raha hai


Maan: Daddi there is no word called emotions in my dictionary He is my son .Koi takleef nahi hone dunga main apne bachchy ko aur kisi ko dukhi nahi kiya maine plz don put any question.I hav asked Meera (his friend n interior designer) to renovate a room for my son.She is coming tomorrow.


He leaves after that.Daddi was struck dumb.


Hop u ll lik .Plz comment n hit tab


Lov


Jass



Tense liberties may b there it is according to rules of writing Change of tense according to the situation.

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Will be waiting
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
omggg
wt d f####
oye jass yeh kyaaa tha????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85


yaar thoda confusion hai...

is it really Maan's baby...how...

and who was that girl in Bangalore...

waiting for the suspense to open up...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



yaar thoda confusion hai...

is it really Maan's baby...how...

and who was that girl in Bangalore...

waiting for the suspense to open up...

thanx for pm...



plz don b confused if Maan says he is rite 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg ye maan ne kya kardiya.bache ko lekar aaya hai aur kehraha hai ki uska beta hai..sachi iam very cnfusd abt hw he said that that baby is hs blood..hw cme??plz clear ths na..and who's that maya nw..besides caretaker who's she?ye maan bhi na unique piece hai..kitne asani se kehdiya ki o uska son aur o apne bete ko lekar aaya..aisa keh raha hai jaise koi cheez hai..and nakul asusual my darling rocked..iam falling 4 nakul again and again..lolz
cntinue soon and clear my confusn
love u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
So maan has son... I feel Geet gave birth to twins n she has one baby will maan has other...I know I have lost it 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awesome update
Who's baby that is
How come in this world maan telling he is his son
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
nice update Maan is crazy love Nakul😆 he is to funny

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