DOSTI YA PYAAR #1 - Page 47

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PART-10

Geet and karan stood there making baby faces.."tell me what are u people searching for??and that too this seriously..and what all these people r searching for.."asked maan seriously…

"umm..wo…it is very cute"said geet still making baby face..

"sweet too"said karan..

"cute and sweet…what??"maan asked irritatingly….

"tumhari smile"both said in unsion in low tone…

Maan who was expecting them to tell something looked at them amusingly..finally a smile crept on his lips..he nodded in disbelief looking at them..karan and geet jumped like kids shouting"yayyy"as if a kid won running race….

but their happiness didnt last long as rishi entered the place and maan's smile turned in to anger again..maan fists tightened in anger as he recollected his words again..rishi who saw maan rooted to the spot with no expressions...his gaze is rooted to the floor in shame..it seemed that geet's words had effect on him...maan's eyes were filled with tears unknowingly..he is not able to digest the words said by him where he said that maan dont have his mom with him...

when maan is busy glaring him karan and geet stood there worriedly..they also has a fear that maan may assault on him again becoz they very well know maan's anger..he dont think what he is doing and whatever he is doing is right or not...geet slowly tried to call maan and is about to place her hand on his shoulder but maan moved forward in anger and still glaring at rishi who dipped down his head and stood there…geet's eyes widened in shock and fear as maan took steps towards rishi and too in anger…karan and geet were expecting maan to assault on him but to their surprise maan just passed him without even giving him a second look…karan and geet looked at each other in surprise and it took them few minutes to come out of that shock…

maan who is fuming with anger recollecting his words came straight to basket ball court which was empty..he don't know why he is angry but that one word is peirceing his heart..he loves his mom a lot and for the first time he is realising her absence and rishi is the one who made him realize…he is frustated on himself for troubling his dad with his behaviour last night…he stopped talking with his friends especially geet n karan…he picked the ball and started playing with it..he is trying to remove his frustation which is making him insane..he is throwing the ball in basket soon when it came down to him..within few minutes his whole body is covered with sweat and he is panting badly…still he is feeling frustated..his minding is screaming "why??why that words said by some idiot troubling him to that extent..why??why??"

karan and geet came there running in search of him and found him there…they shook their head in disbelief..karan ran from there to get some water for maan while geet stood there with tears…she quickly wiped them and started walking towards maan who is still busy in his thoughts at the same time removing his frustation on that poor ball…he threw the ball once again expecting to fall it in net but he missed this time and ball falls down..he frustatingly kicked the ball…

"ofooo…poor ball!"said geet dramatically which made maan realise that geet reached the place…he again tried to kick the ball but geet stopped him.."maan…come with me"said geet who held his arm..but maan snapped it and said"geet plz…leave me alone for sometime…plz go away"

But geet being geet didn't payed any attention to his words and dragged him outside the court…she made him sit on bench even when he snapped her hand again..all the while he is not at all looking at her but somewhere…..he is trying to control his anger and he know that he is over reacting but an unknown pain in his heart making him feel frustated…meanwhile,geet tried to calm him saying something or the other but maan is busy in his thoughts…"accha maan chalo"said geet and grabbed his hand…

"geet I said I don't want to come any where..plz for god sake leave me alone"said maan controlling his anger…

"why should i???iam ur friend..how can I leave u alone to suffer…maan I know rishi's words hurt u but.."geet spoke in a concerned tone..

"geet plz..i don't want to talk anything about it..just go away"said maan who stood up in anger as soon as he heard rishi's name..

She held his arm and made him turn towards her.."maan plz calm down..i can understand…mein samaj sakthi hoon but how long u'll stay like this.."

Before geet could continue with her words maan snapped her hand which held his arm irritatingly…"tum kuch nahi samaj sakthi kuch bhi nahi..u cant understand what iam feeling now..becoz u have everyone in ur life…u have ur mom in ur life to love u..to teach u everything but I don't..isliye no one can understand my pain.."shouted maan in tears…

"ha..mein kuch nahi samaj sakthi"mumbled geet who already is in tears and ran away from there…maan who saw her tears realised what he said just now…"omg!!maan u idiot..why u were shouting on geet…ur best friend who always stands for u..how can u say those stupid things to her"he almost slapped himself…and thumped his arm on bench which left his hand to bleed…"muje geet se maafi maangni hogi"mumbled and ran from there…

he however found geet in one corner who stood there crying.."geeet"maan screamed her name and ran to her…geet looked painfully at maan and started moving from there..maan is continuosly calling her name but she took no name to stop..when she realised that maan is very near to her she entered in to the classroom without even having books and sat in one of the bench..professor did not notice her as he was busy writing something on black board..maan is about to enter the class room but professor who just turned stopped him.."maan..u are late…so get out of the class now..i cant allow u"said sternly…

"sir plz "mumbled maan in tears while his gaze is fixed on geet who sat there wiping her tears with her tiny hands..she looked away when maan looked at her…

"I said out..now"he almost shouted….maan helplessly left the place while geet looked at maan with concern at the same time glaring at professor for shouting on maan…harika who was already in the class is observing both maaneet..when she asked geet what happened she just nodded in no and kept mum..

karan came back with water and saw maan outside the class room sitting on floor with tears..he came to him running and sat beside him..maan hugged him and said all the happening.."ofoo…tum ne us par chillaya..iam sure she must be angry on u."said karan giving him water to drink..maan nodded and his face clearly showed that he is guilty for what he did…"don't worry manalenge.."said karan with a little smile for which maan just nodded..

finally the class came to an end and maan stood ready waiting for geet..geet who came out quickly made her way to play ground before maan could hold her hand…"geet plz meri baat suno..iam sorry"maan continuosly asked for sorry at the same time running behind express named geet…..

maan who already feeling very guilty for what he did now felt hurt as his best friend is hurt becoz of him and she is ignoring him which he cannot endure for a second…he pleaded her continuosly to stop.. at last she stopped and turned to him.."geet plz forgive me..iam really really sorry…I..."maan tried to explain..

"ha u said right….mein kuch nahi samajthi…hai na...how can u say that maan??"asked geet in tears and again moved from there…

Maan closed his eyes in pain and fresh tears flowed down his cheek..he saw geet turning back and walking away from him…he brushed his hairs in pain with both palms and broke down on his kness shouting"iam sorry…plz geet don't go away like that"

Geet stopped at that moment..she is not angry on him but felt hurt with his one sentence..she melted with his one sorry as she cannot she him asking for forgiveness again n again and cant endure his tears…she rooted to the spot closing her eyes in pain but didn't turn towards him..

"geet I was wrong..i would have not said those words..i know u were trying to cheer me but….but iam a fool..i was angry on myself for unknown reason…may be rishi was right..i cant understand anyone's emotions..isliye I hurted my best friend who tried to make me smile…mein kisi ke pyar ya dosti ka layak nahi hoon"said maan in in trembling voice and closed his eyes…

he then felt a hand on his shoulder..he opened his eyes and looked up to find geet staring at him with serious face..she held his arm and made him to stand…

Before he could say anything geet asked him still maintaining serious face.."kya kaha tumne??"

"mein kisi ki"maan tried to repeat his words…but geet slapped him not very hardly😆..

"kya kaha..phir se kaho"said geet in tears and started slapping him continously on his both cheeks with her tiny palms…he dipped his head down and received her slaps silently..slowly her flow of slaps started reducing and she hugged him…maan hugged her back and mumbled.."iam really sorry geetu..iam very very sorry"..geet smiled and hugged him tight..karan and harika who stood there smiling came and joined them in hug….they broke the hug and karan wiped geet's tears making weird face as if saying u don't look good while crying…geet smiled and hugged him..karan then wiped maan's tears.."now throwthat stupid angry young man there and give us a sweet smile"…maan smiled and hugged him..harika smiled in tears n felt happy seeing their bond…when they are rejoicing the moment as their naughty,cute,maan is back... maan's mobile ring disturbed them..he saw the caller id and is shocked…"geet..maan ka phone..u said everything na"said maan glaring at geet for which geet and karan giggled…

"haiii maa"maan shouted in his regular style…

"maan mera baccha..how are u now??geet said everything to me..ruk mein college aathi hoon abhi..dekthi hoon us nalayak ko"she(rano)without any full stop..

"maa…maa..maa..wait...iam fine..muje kya huwa..accha suno..iam hungry now and iam coming to taste my favourite kheer..milega??"said maan while smiling at his friends..

"ha kyun nahi…beta come soon I'll be waiting for u"said rano with happiness as maan is ok now…

"ok then bye..love u maa..muahh"and he disconnected the call…

Then three of them went to geet's home and harika left to home saying she have to go somewhere…asusual maan filled the climate there with smiles and continued with his masti..he is back in his original mode and totally forgot what happened in the college…he always loved everyone especially geet's and karan's family holds very imp place in his life..they treat him as his own family…he pulled mohinder's leg along with rano which is his favourite thing to do…

when ever maan comes home rano feeds him with her own hands..karan and geet always fights with rano not seriously😆😆 as maan is over pampered by her..maan enjoys this and adds fuel to the fire saying maa loves me more..(he he kkkg dialgue😆😆)then three of them end up in fighting like kids…maan after his many nakhre finished eating and moved towards the refridgerator while geet sat hugging her dad with pouting lips and karan helping rano which is his duty always…

he took the cornetto from it and started opening the wrapper…geet's eyes widened as she saw icecream in maan's hand.."maan no..no icecream…dekho u catched cold just a day back and u are eating icecream again..u know na u have to drink that khadwi kada if u catch cold again..isliye wapis rakdo"she warned him pointing her finger towards maan…

"ofoo…tum doctor ki tarah behave mat karo…nothing will happen with one ice cream..."said maan and about to eat it..geet who was very quick to signal karan to snatch icecream from him said"haww…maa…what happened??"..maan looked back and karan taking the chance snatched the ice cream from him…

"u cheat….karan do mujhe..warna.."maan tried to catch him but the icecream shifted in to geet's hands now…she showed her tongue and ran from there..karan,rano and mohinder smiled at their antics which is very frequent to them since their child hood…geet ran upstairs climbing the steps while maan chasing her saying.."geet rukho…give it back..warna I'll not leave u"he tried to warn her but how can our sherni scare to anyone..she continued teasing him and ran here and there when maan blocked her way..they ran around the couch and finally both stood at their respective places panting..(icecream might have became juice till now😆😆😆)

Maan who was on other side of the couch jumped quickly to her side and tried to snatch it from her but geet is very quick to move from there…maan chased her gain and got hold of her left arm finally…he grabbed her near him and tried to take it…geet raised her hand upwards in air so that maan could not take it…when maan is trying to catch it she is moving it to other side…

geet wears tight fitting top with jeans..so when she raised her hand her top went up exposing her waist slightly.."geet do muje"maan tried again n again..while geet teased him saying"nahi nahi nahi"…she is about to run again suddenly maan placed his hand on her bare waist unknowingly…geet gasped in shock as she felt maan's touch on her waist which sended shivers through her body..her grip loosened and that cone falls down on floor…(lo in dono ke jhagde mein icecream gaya😭😭muje diya hota😆😆)

"haww..u threw it"maan said glaring at her…"ha..kya karoge??"geet retorts back…"oh u are challenging me.."asked maan…

"ha.!!"said geet confidently…she slapped on his head and escaped from there before he could catch her.."geet rukho..i wont leave u…u wasted my icecream first of all and now u beat me..wait …"

He chased her while geet showed her tongue and continuosly made attempts to escape from him but finally failed and maan caught her..he twisted her hand from back(not hurtingly guys)"now u understood what I can do??"said maan glaring at her.."haww..maan plz plz leave me"geet pleaded him with pouting lips…it just seemed like two kids were fighting..maaneet fights in the same way since child hood but they are always best friends and will be forever…"accha!!u were challenging me na"

"sorry sorry galti hogayi..plz chod do ab"pleaded again…

He melted in fraction of seconds and left her hands while smiling at her…as soon as he left her hand she rubbed her hand with her palm and glared at maan who smirked at her…his smirk made her more angry and she punched him on his arm with her tiny fists which had no effect on his muscular body…instead her delicate fists pained as she punched on his muscle.."ouchhh!!!u are stone"said geet rubbing her back of hand with another palm…

"ha ha ha..dont dare to mess with msk..ok my cutie.."said maan pulling her red cheeks…"oh accha!!!ab dekho"said geet and started hitting him again.."geet..kya kar rahi ho…are u mad"said maan and ran from there but geet didn't leave him…he held her both hands to stop her but she started hitting him with her legs on his…they both really looked like kids now…maan ran on top of couch followed by geet..but he stepped down immediately..she threw pillows on him from which he escaped very easily…she finally stood there panting..maan taking the chance pushed her on the couch play fully..and ran from there.

"haww..u…I wont leave u now"saying so geet ran behind him..they both reached geet's room..now maan stepped on her bed and sometimes ran around the bed also threw pillows on her..geet is in fully sherni mode now…she want to take revenge on him now..she stepped on bed while maan stepped down and tried to run but geet soon held his hairs as she managed to get hold only that😆😆..she pulled his hair in anger.."ouchh..pagal kya kar rahi ho..leave me"maan said wincing in main.."accha!!then why u beat me there ha??"she pulled his hair with one hand and punched on his chest with another…in this process she didn't realized when she stepped down from the bed…maan held her hands to free himself from her hold for which geet applied her energy even more…but maan being stronger than her freed finally and held her both hands by her wrists…

both glared at each other and finally burst out in to laughter remembering their fight…geet thumped on bed while laughing holding her stomach with maan beside her doing the same….after few minutes both got up when they felt that they had enough fun…karan entered the room and found both laughing.."arey what happened to u??why u people are laughing like fools??"asked karan with confused expressions…

"fools!!"😡both shouted in unison while glaring at karan..they both winked at each other and attacked karan with pillows..poor karan ran around the room for his life…

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May be geet's birthday…😕😕😉

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Loved the part a lot...
Loved the fact that maneet can't b angry with each other for a long tym..
Loved their pillow fight...
Geet for the first tym felt sumthg different..

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