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Hi read all th e6 parts together...

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Update kaha hai??????? U hv not updated since sooo many days... Sirf yeh nai koi bhi nai kiya... Sob sob sob...plzzz update




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and thank u soo soo much who are giving me long comments..they really motivates me...

@tamanna-dear i kept my promise..now will wait for u comments..long wala😆

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guys me crying...very less likes and comments this time

and one more thing friends...plz give atleast two no at least one line comment..i think u'll hav atleast 2 sec to comment..one word comment like awesome,lovely,nice,superb,mindblowing etc etc will hut me more than not getting comments..plz plz plz i req u to give atleast one line comment..atleast tell me what u liked in it and what made u feel it was awesome..plz guys😭
and thank u soo soo much who are giving me long comments..they really motivates me...

@tamanna-dear i kept my promise..now will wait for u comments..long wala😆

@divya-thanx for waiting dear..uopdating now..plz dont cry😭


ok will give you long waala
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DOSTI YA PYAAR

part-7

Geet:tumhe kya laga??mein buddhu hoon….dekho maan M.B.A section mein M.B.A students will refer the books related to them but not medical sciences…o bhi ulta pakadkar…


He side hugged geet while smiling at her….


"oh my geetu is very smart" said pulling her cheeks…


As soon as they entered the basket ball court maan and karan ran quickly and started playing…it seemed like they love the game a lot..they are enjoying it a lot..maan is playing very intelligently and giving no chance to anyone to get hold of the ball..here geet and hari sat on one bench there and cheering the boys..


Harika is surprised to see maan who is playing the game and handling the ball very intelligently…


Harika:wow geet…seems maan know this game very well..


Geet:ha..maan knows everything..he's just perfect…u saw na how easily he solved that problem…maan dikne mein toh cool dude types hai but he is very emotional from inside..he always wishes everyone's happiness and tries to bring smile on everyone's face..he is sooo sweet…he is my best best bestest friend..no one can understand me well than maan..he knows everything about me..he knows what I like and what i dont…but stupid khud ka khayal bilkul bhi nahi raktha…..


And geet went on telling the life history of maan…she is all the while smiling and this is noticed by harika..she noticed how there was a spark in geet's eyes when she started narrating about maan…


Harika:geet…u know maan very well na..maan means a lot to u..right!!


Geet:ha…he is my bestest friend…maan ke bina ek din bhi man nahi lagtha mera..i'll feel bored with out maan..if maan is there with me..muje time ka kuch pata hi nahi chaltha…maan sach mein bahuth accha hai..gussa jaldi aajatha hai par utni hi jaldi chala bhi jaatha hai…he loves the people around him and….


She took no name to stop..she went on and on and on..harika smiled when she understood what actually maan means for her..she noticed the same with maan too whenever she was maan with geet..


Harika:geet…maan is only ur friend???

Geet looked at her confusingly but smiled.."no..bestest friend"


harika smiled her head and nodded her head...


Meanwhile,they saw maan and karan sharing hi-5 as maan won the match again..he came and hugged geet...

"hey geet..i won again" shouted maan with excitement…

When they were busy in rejoicing the moment one guy came running to maan…


"maan…rishi is beating aadi very badly…plz come soon"


Maaneet,karan and hari ran to the place where they saw rishi holding aadi's collar and slapping him continuosly…maan's eyes were burning with rage when he saw someone dared to touch his friend…no matter how much he teases aadi and plays pranks on him but aadi is his friend after all..how can he endure when some one dared to touch his friend…


He went to rishi and pushed him harshly…

"aadi are u okay?"asked maan with concern..


Aadi who already had some marks on his face said"maan dekho na..ye rishi kya kar raha hai..keh raha hai mein ne nisha(rishi's sis)se misbehave kiya..mein waha tha par mein ne kuch nahi kiya..tum nisha se hi poochlo..tum muje jaanthe ho na mein aisa kar saktha hoon kya??

[maan this rishi is saying that I misbehaved with nisha..i was there at that time but It was someone who misbehaved with her..u can ask her..u know me very well na..how can I do this??]


Maan:ha..aadi aisa kuch kar hi nahi saktha..rishi tum nisha ko yaha bulalo..o sach batayegi aakhir huwa kya tha..and ha don't dare to touch aadi now..iam warning you…

[ha..aadi cant to this..rishi u call nisha here..she'll tell what is the matter actually..and ha .. don't dare to touch aadi now..iam warning you…]


Geet and hari who saw nisha heading towards the wash room ran to her..

Rishi:oh!!bada aaya warn karne wala. .....mein dar gaya…ha ha ha...tum apne aapko samaj the kya ho..hero?? tum apni bewakoof dosto ke liye honge hero..mere liye zero…tum har baat mein tang aadana band karo and handover this idiot to me..otherwise I may beat anyone..

[oh!!so u are warning me..iam scared..what do u think of urself..u are a hero..but only to ur stupid friend and for me you are a zero…u just stay away from this and let me handle this idiot…otherwise I may beat anyone]


Maan(smirks):koun hero hai aur koun zero..ye toh sab jaanthe hai…and I loved ur spirit..u are ready to mess with maan singh khurana…ok..dont say me again that I didn't warn you…


Rishi ignores him and about to drag aadi again but maan gave him a nice punch on his face…he got up and tried to fight back but maan gave him no chance…when both were busy in their fight and trying to defeat each other geet and hari came there…geet got scared when she saw maan fighting horribly…maaannn she screamed..


Maan looked back and taking this chance he punched maan…and pushed him hardly which made maan fall on floor…


Rishi again went to aadi who was standing with karan and karan is cleaning his wounds..


Before rishi could reach him ;maan is very quick to stand in front of him..

Maan some how controlled his anger as he remembered what geet was saying last time.."anger is always not good maan"


Maan:look rishi!!dont take any wrong step now..u just call nisha once..she'll tell us what is true..if aadi is wrong then I'll help u in punishing him…maan tried to handle the situation..


Rishi:huh!!just shut up and go away maan…kese aathi nisha yaha??o bechari pehle se hi ro rahi hai..tumhe kya pata?tumhari na koi behen hai ya maa..being her bro I have to protect her...tumhe ye sab kese pata hota tumhari toh maa hi nahi hai ye sab sikhane ke liye…

[huh!!just shut up maan and go away...how can she come here??she's already in tears..how can u know..u dont have sis or mom in ur life...then how can u know what iam feeling now...]



This angered maan to hundred folds as he heard that word which he tries to forget every minute…."no maa in his life"😭 tears were continously flowing out at the same time his eyes were blood red..his fists tightened..he said nothing but dipped his head…and closed his eyes in pain...😭




Rishi:chup kyun ho…sahi kaha na mein ne….tumhe kya pata apno ka kitna khayal rakhna padtha hai..tumhari toh koi hai hi nahi..jab dekho is geet aur karan ke peeche ghoomthe rehthe ho…mera gussa tum tab bhi samaj sakthe ho jab tumhari bhi ek behen hothi…par tumhari life mein toh koi nahi hai..na maa…before he could complete he received a tight slap..he looked there to find geet with burning eyes…

[why u r silent now..i said right na..how can u know about how to protect and pamper our dearones..u dont even have anyone in ur life..u'll always be seen roaming behind this geet and karan...you can understand my anger only when u hav ur own sis in ur life..but there is no mom..]


Rishi:how dare u…u slapped me…glared at geet...


Geet:just shut up!!agar ek aur shabd bola na mujse bura koi nahi hoga…kya kaha tumne maa aur behen ka kitna khayal rakna padtha hai..aapno ka khayal rakna padtha hai..sahi kaha tumne…aur tum kitna khayal rakthe ho na apni maa ka..use beech road par chod kar chale jaathe ho heavy bags ke saath..kyun ki tumhe toh party mein jaana imp hai na..ha maan is stupid he don't know anything..that's why he dropped ur mom at home when you left her in the middle of the road..aur behen ka toh kitna khayal rakthe ho..kitna protect karthe ho usko..isiliye roz akeli college aathi bus pakad kar jab apni bhai ke paas bike hai aur wo bhi same college mein padtha hai..kitna khayal rakthe ho uska..raat ko medicines lane akeli aathi hai jab ghar par bhai hai..and maan is idiot to save ur sis from goons and drop her safely at home..hai na..wah!!kitna khayal rakthe ho tum..sab seekhlo isse..says while turning her face to others...papa ke paas medicines ke liye pese nahi hai par janab ko branded jeans chahiye..zid kathe ho jeans dilwane ke liye...bechare papa kya karthe usko ko pata hai apna beta kitna protective hai sab ka kitna khayal raktha hai..isliye tumhe jeans dilwa diya…

[just shut up!dont u dare to speak a word now..what were u saying..we have to protect our dearones and take care of them..ha u r right..and i know how cared u are towards them..u leave ur mom in the middle of the road with heavy bags..as party is more imp to u..how caring u are and how stupid maan is to drop her safely at home..and ur sis will come to college by bus when her own bro owns a bike and he is in the same college...how caring u are..wah!!she comes to buy medicines at night time when her bro is at home...how caring u are and how stupid maan is to save her from goons and drop her safely at home...really u are very caring na...ur papa dont hav money to buy medicines and u demand for branded jeans..poor papa he gave u whatever u asked as he know how protective and caring his son is...]



Geet:ha u are right maan don't have maa or sis in his life but he loves everyone around him..he loves his friends..he protects them..everyone in the college knows that maan plays pranks on everyone even on aadi but he is here to save him when he needed him..that is maan…says proudly...u hate maan na..u fought with him…but maan cant hate anyone…he always wishes everyone's happiness..iam sure he'll be there for you when you need him..that is maan... and iam proud that iam his best friend..infact we all are proud that maan is there with us…it's not necessary that we should have blood relation to love..it's related to heart..and maan loves people around him from his heart…that is maan…whatever i dont want to compare maan with low class cheap idiot who mentality is so cheap...who dont care about others feelings...



Rishi's head is already dipped down in shame in front of whole college…


Geet:rishi I don't want to prove anything to disgusting person like u but still u listen..aadi is innocent..he was not at all fault..


"ha bhai..infact aadi saved me..it was sunny who misbehaved with me..how can u say all this to maan bhai..he saved me many times and helped me like own bro when my bro is not with me…"says nisha who came there just then..



Geet:ab samaj mein aaya koun hero hai aur koun zero..and from now don't u dare to say anything about maan…warna mujse bura koi nahi hoga…


Chalo maan…said geet and turned to see there is no maan…


Geet:maan…karan where is maan???

Everyone searched for maan but he is nowhere…


Precap:

Maan kaha gaya???maan gayab😲😲😭😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yipppeee me first...
wow wow wow what an update mona...
its awesome... superb, wonderful.. loved it to the core...
oh maan and karan are playing basket ball... oh wow maan won the match...
oh geet is on n on on maan... hayeee hari is thinking that geet loves maan i think...
oops fight...
omg... that b***** punched maan... grrr
i want to kick him... no no now kill him... how dare he say those word to maan... me crying cant see maan in pain... but geet did a awesome job by slapping him... he dont take care of his mom n sis but came to beat adi and insult maan.. how dare he...
geet u did a great job dear... love u...
omg... ab maan kaha chala gaya.. 😭😭
update next soon dear...
eagerly waiting eagerly.. tumko na mera asar bohot hua... suspense pe suspense de rahi ho... 😡

love u for awesome update dear... muahhh
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago

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