Pt6/7'Devil Desire'Thrd4 Pg7/71

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Eza_analyst

@Eza_analyst

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Thanks for updating

loved it

thanks for pm

i am in love with it

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ExpectoPatronum

@ExpectoPatronum

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Wonderful update...
Devil cheated :( our geet but i really don't mine dat :-P
i wonder wat's going to happen to rahul poor guy kaha phasgaya...

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Our devil n his devilpan

Liking the change he is feeling

Geet dosent knw him well

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maahi zaidi

@zaidi98

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

amazing update...👏

maan da devil...😈

becharii geet ko kitna doraya...😔

finnally as expected devil won... bt cheatng se...😉

poor geet...

desire k baad 1st feeling of J...😳

jealosy means 1st step toward love...😉

yupp sure wil love 2 hate diz devil..

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

that was a masterpiece by a genius named annie!
that is what i have to say for the update
loved it!
fairplay and our devil!
that seems like a far fetched dream
poor geet, she has to learn to deal with her devil, hot boss
dance with geet! ab rahul ka kya hoga?
you said we are gonna hate the devil yet love him
after all hate is the first step before you actually and irrevocably fall in love!
isn't so😉
maan thinks he desires geet and terms it as lust
well i think otherwise, i think our devil is slowly and steadily yet unknowingly falling in love with our angel i.e. geet!
waiting eagerly for the next part
continue soon

Edited by doublecross - 13 years ago

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

awesome part!!!!!!!!

but the point is if he gets angry n feel rage when ever geet is with some one how can poor geet even try in winning the 6 months challenge...

though its obvious tht at the end maan is only the one who is going to prove geet right as per her thought abt love... but now both don't know the same... so how can she even try if he kills every one in his way who will go close to her...

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504887

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Congos for new thread di!!!!👏

Awesome update!⭐️

It was simply fab!!😃

Awww Geet trying hard to complete the file and not be with him but😳

Alas!! Devil being devil plays unfair😆

She was just one min late poor my baby Geet😉

Awww how sweet of Devil He gave her a room to change and much needed privacy too!😆

awww Geet met her friend after many days but eh ki Dev out Rahul in!!!🤣

Ha ha Geet fearing his presence ROFL!😆

OMG Devil burning with rage+ jealousy!😲

Yeh to hona hi tha! 1st trait of devilness is the inner burn=jealousy+rage!!!!!!!😆😳😉

OMG He cross questioning her and Geet with her ego ignored his warning and OMG danced with Rahul!!😈

I pity this guy Rahul! Could not he choose someone else other than the DEvil's girl ROFL!!!🤣😆

Now what punishment i mean payback he should give her and moreover how he would beat this Rahul Guy black and blue is worth to read!!😉

And moreover we all know our Devil is HAWWTTT , SEXY, IRRESISTIBLE, HATE-ABLE yet LOVABLE all the more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!☺️☺️

I am dying to read it!!😳

Please continue soon!😳

I know you updated now only but can't wat di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

Thnx 4 d pm!😃

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Well wrkng wid devil not gonna be easy 4 geet...n nobdy can win wen devil is dere...
superb prt...rahul u r so dead

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

too good. God Geet inviting devils fury.

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

to my devil...

for new thread...

we r on 4th thread...yippeee!!!!

now about update...

well geet had worked hard to win d challange n she actually won dat...bt...alas! our devil is evil n cheater too...he went far from her reach in order to win d challange...n he is successful in dat...he is dam arrogant man...he is proudly accepting dat "he is devil"

"Yes it is but when did I told you that I would play fair..???????????"... i luv'd it...

geet is daring d devil...uff why she always take panga wid devil...from where dis rahul comes...omg!! he is dancing wid geet...

devil is getting angry...dat too wid d dance...hmmm...kuch to khichdi pak ri hai...i m sure now geet have to pay high for dat...

devil had broken d bottle...now who is going to be his prey...baba ji plz save geet...n poor rahul tooo...

well in dese conditions...normal people will hate dis devil...bt...as devil is becuming more evil i m loving him more more n more...

me egarly waiting for devil's nxt step...

so update soon...

Edited by khushi1022 - 13 years ago