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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you all for liking the previous part and motivating me guys. and A Big thank u to -Ratna- for spamming and to others too. Anyway as promised will give u the update once it reaches to pg 88, well here is the next part. ENJOY!!!

-DHDAJS Part 9-
DHDAJS Part 9

As they reached home Geet left to her room crying, Maan followed her to her room but didn't bother asking her anything coz he knew why she was crying, so he left to his room to change. When he came back after changing he thought to check on Geet, as he start to walk toward her room he hears piano playing, he walks in the music hall.

Geet was sitting in her room crying, after while of crying she felt she needed to go out in an open place as she felt out of breath. She thought of going out in the garden when her eyes fell on the piano, she felt like playing it sharing her pain with it, as a child she has been playing piano and would play whenever she felt sad. She goes and sits on the chair and starts to sing:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i7p246M79Qs&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

jindagee se hame kuchh shikayat toh hain
jindagee se magar khubsurat hain kya
tumse shikayat hain yeh tum hame milte nahee - (2)
marke bhee ham jee rahe, tum kyon samajhte nahee
ho o tum se shikayat hain yeh tum hame milte nahee

Maan watches her as she plays the piano lost in singing the song. Just then the Khurana family came in KM stopping on the door step hearing the painful song playing in the music room. As Geet continues to sing, Dhara and others made their way to the music room. Dhara Looked at Geet before looking at Yash with her teary eyes. Yash understand her plight, he went and held her by shoulder, Maan Vicky and Annie looked at Dhara worriedly as she had never cried like this before, Maan goes and places his hand on Yash shoulder questioning him with his eye, Yash just nods in no and tries to take Dhara away from their before she says something that she should not be saying it in front of their children.

jite jee ham tere pas aa na sake
marke bhee ham tujhe bhul paye nahee
wakt bhee yeh mere jakhm bhar na saka
aaj bhee har ghadee sochte hain yahee
ham kyon dilbar tere dil me dhadakte nahee
ho o o o... tumse shikayat hain yeh tum hame milte nahee


Dhara- Yash Vihaa…" Dhara stops in mid as her eyes fell on her kids

Yash- Dhara plz lets go from here

Dhara Looks at Geet and says "but Yash Geet…"

Yash- Dhara plz tumhe meri kasam chalo yeha se. Yash takes Dhara to their room as Dadi Vicky and Annie follows them, Maan stays their watching Geet. As Yash and Dhara came in their room they could still hear Geet singing, Annie and Vicky went and sat next to Dhara trying to console her but her tears were flowing constantly as she remembered HIM after such a long time.

"Dad, why is mom crying" Vicky asked as he came to Yash who was standing next to the window.

Yash- nothing Vicky you both go and take some rest, u guys must be tired.

Annie- Dad not till u tell us what is wrong with Mom, I have never seen Mom crying like this in my life.

Yash- Annie Vicky will talk about this later, you guys go now.

Annie- but dad" Vicky stops her and takes her with him.

Yash came and sat by Dhara taking her in his embrace "Dhara plz don't do this, I won't be able to take it"

Maan was lost looking at Geet, her pain, the lyric she sang was her heart pouring out her pain. Geet looked across the piano and saw Dev standing across her smiling at her, looking at her with all love, memories of their playing in his eyes.

bebasee me toh bas ek khayal aa raha
jindagee se mai ek jindagee mang lu
abb toh aane laga aansuo ko reham
aansuo se bhee mai ek hasee mang lu
ham se tanhayee ke lamhe gujarte nahee
ho o o o... tumse shikayat hain yeh tum hame milte nahee


Then Geet saw Dev bringing his hand forward and the next moment she saw a girl hand in his and as he pulled her she came in front and she saw herself in his embrace. A smile touched her lip along with tears made their way out her eyes as she saw them dancing happily around her, the next moment she saw Dev leaving Geet hand and he came toward her he gently pressed a kiss on her for head and wiped her tear as he shook his head in NO. Geet held her hand up to touch his face but before she could he walks away from her and as the song ends Geet fainted on the piano "Geeet" Maan screamed seeing her faint, he went and held her before she falls on the ground. Maan scooped her in his arm and took her to her room. Hearing Maan screams Dadi and Yash came out running and saw him holding Geet unconscious in his arm.

"Maan" Yash called as he walked toward them "beta what happened to her"

Maan- Dad she fainted

Yash- What…Ma call the doctor?

Maan- no Dad no need of that… I mean she must have fainted due to stress, you go to Mom she needs u right now, I will stay with Geet.

Yash- but Maan

Maan- Dad plz…Yash and Dadi left leaving Maan and Geet alone, Maan sat next to Geet holding her hand as he waited for her to gain her conscious back_____

"Yash kya huwa, why did Maan screamed like this" Dhara asked as Yash came in their room

Yash made her sit and made her drink some water saying "kuch nahi wo bas Gee…"

"Geet…Geet ko kya huwa Yash" Dhara asked cutting him mid

Yash sighed and cupped Dhara face in his palm and said "geet theek hai, tum uski chinta mat karo…Dhara you know what will happen tomorrow" Dhara looked at him guilty and bend her head not being able to meet his eyes,

Yash- Dhara bachein

"I am sorry Yash, I am really very sorry" Dhara said hugging Yash, Yash made her lay next to him as he creased her head think of the next day that lay ahead of them, what would they tell their kids why Dhara was
crying like this, how will they react when they finds out the truth…Dhara raised her head up a little and found Yash staring at the ceiling, "kya aap bhi wo hi soch rahe hai jo main"

Yash- hmm…I am scared Dhara, for the second time in my life Yash Singh Khurana is scared, scared to lose everything that is his life, I don't want to lose what I have, I won't be able to bare this pain Dhara

Dhara- Yash hum se hamara kuch bhi nahi chine ga, I promise…neither our happiness nor our kids…I promise Yash I promise" Yash kissed her forehead and drifted to sleep waiting for the next day to come…

"Deeev" Geet screamed as sat up, Maan also sat up who just fall a sleep next to geet waiting for her to gain her consciousness back. "Geet you ok" Maan asked as he held her by shoulder.

"Maan dev, khoon, Maan dev is bleeding, use bauth chot lagi hai deakho na wo kitna tarap raha hai dard main" Geet said pointing toward the empty room.

"Geet…Geet dev ko kuch nahi huwa hai wo bilkul theek hai…tu…" before Maan could say anything else Geet jerked him saying "aap jhot bol rahe wo deakho he is laying their lifelessly, aur aap" Geet treis to get up from the bed saying "Dev I won't let anything happen to u I promise, main arahi hoon main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi" before she could get off of the bed Maan pulls her back and they both lands on the bed Maan on top of Geet…as the moment passed they both looked at each other as tears rolled out off Geet eyes. Maan wiped it and moved off of her and sat beside her and says "Geet Dev is fine; you not need to worry about him anymore" Geet looked at him nodding in yes, like she knew if Maan said Dev is fine then he must be, Maan looked at her as she kept staring at him, "Geet tum so jao" saying that he made her lay and was about to get up but she held his hand stopping him from going, he sat back and creased her hair and says "Tum so jao main yeahi tumhare pass hoon, hmm" Geet closed her eyes as she kept his hand under her cheek holding it tight. as he found her deep sleep he tried removing his hand under her cheek but to his luck he couldn't and he falls a sleep right next to her, Geet cuddle in more to him feeling his warmth and rested her head on his chest, while Maan embraced her in his arm.
Precap: The truth reveals "Is that why u Hate ME"
glimpse of Yash and Dhara past the whole truth will be out in the next update...

Hmm...Mariam thinking should i give an update after u guys complete 130 pg or wat...
Don't worry guys not this time, next update will be on Friday as always till then u can spam as much as u want sowwie haan aaj kal Mariam thodi demanding ho rahi hai, but don't worry, next update ke liye nahi hongi, kyun ki next update sirf Friday ki hi mile gi😳😊😆😉


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Edited by Mariam94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam94



dono hi hai problem mere saath
i hate watching movies😡 haan agar old hai tu phir theek hai wo bhi jeetendar aur shridevi aur jaya parda ki huwi tu warna no wayyy🤢 and pluz have no time to waste on it



k i also dont watch movies that much
only when movies of hritik get release
i use to watch it
now to i m not even watchin any serial
i m only watching supernatural which wuld finish after 5 episode

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079



k i also dont watch movies that much
only when movies of hritik get release
i use to watch it
now to i m not even watchin any serial
i m only watching supernatural which wuld finish after 5 episode



ohk
jaani i have updated the part read it before ur power gets cut
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
everyon ei sin pan
this [art showed the glimpses of yash and dhara's past
but what happened to geet
sh e seems to get in deeper with the memories of dev
want to know the past of yash and dhara
and in percap i thing its dhara saying that thin to yash
als want to know the past of maan
waht maan has faced in his past
really yaar here everyone has a past
i wonder does aniee or vickey too have a past😆

but i thing that yash and dhara 's past would be similar to geet
i mean dhara would have love someone and he must have dies and after that yash came in her life
and they both loved each other very much from then
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey great updt...superb...thanks wtng for the next...in precap is maan is asking the question?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb dear:)
loved it:)
i think maan is not real son of yash...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
loved it
everyon ei sin pan
this [art showed the glimpses of yash and dhara's past
but what happened to geet
sh e seems to get in deeper with the memories of dev
want to know the past of yash and dhara
and in percap i thing its dhara saying that thin to yash
als want to know the past of maan
waht maan has faced in his past
really yaar here everyone has a past
i wonder does aniee or vickey too have a past😆

but i thing that yash and dhara 's past would be similar to geet
i mean dhara would have love someone and he must have dies and after that yash came in her life
and they both loved each other very much from then



thank u jaani for liking the update
yes it showed the glimps pf their past
well she will get over it soon, I just hope tooo😕, yes she does
next update is all on them jaani so u will know it soon
will let see who say that to who, thoda sa tu suspense rahe ne do and wait for the next update😆
will show Maan past soon jaani
sachi😕 lagta tu aab wo hi hai mujhe bhi
nahi yar Vicky and meera doesn't have past nahi tu pata chala ke ye SS maaneet pe kam family past hi main chala jaye ga
and i am sure u guys don't want coz u all want Maaneet moments
yes Dhara and yash past is similar to Geet ones that is why Dhara is understanding her pain

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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor geet she luv'd dev so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part

is maan not yashs son...

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