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hmm nice story do update soon and congrats on ur new thread

this is so different from most of the ffs for ur attempt🤗 wonderful update

Awesome update.

Superb update dear…

Just loved maan and geet's friendship and their understanding

okay first of all...
Sneha di.. Me holdin my ears.. Sorry sorry sorry 4 being late...

Okay part 4...
I loved d way u described each adventure sport... Seems like u hv done dem.. 😉

Den i loved hw Maan sooo cared for Geet...!!! He was wd her while bunjee jumping... Dat ws sucha cute moment..

Den i loved hw u mentioned lyk .. Being underwater was once in a lifetime experience n hw Maan wanted to spend dat moment with Geet...

Omg.. D sparks r being generated... My my... Dey cudnt look towards each other afta d river rafting proximity... But until d underwater world arrived... Hehheheh...

Me loved d update...

Part 5
U knw wht.. Trekking n rock climbing is my fav 2.. Hehhehe...
Yippee one more similarity wd ur MSK... Hahahah...

I loved of Angel in Distress... Hheehehe...
Hw Geet played a prank with him..
Den he tripped...
N she helped him reach back d tent...
Apply ointment.. Took care of him..
Hw she kept cryin in her own guilt..
N Maan instantly recognised dat she hd been cryin..

I loved d way he made her promise dat she wnt do dis again...
N Maan did say out his heart.. Though baad me fights me he hid it...

I loved their car fights .. Omg.. I loved d part lyk Maan slept on Geet's shoulder.. N she poked him to wake up.. Bcz acc. to her romantic movies ..girls sleep on guy's shoulder... Baap re.. Geet is crazy...
Hehehehehe...

Absolutely adored d part...
N once again sry 4 being late..

Love u Sneha di..
Hugs n kisses...

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

Yet again a wonderful update!!!!!

I loved it completely...

and you know the best part was Geet helping Maan when he tripped... it was totally new and i loved the idea!!! you know humesha Geet is the chalta phirta disaster... and here it was geet helping maan... wow... Sneha... you have got such a brain that has total crazy yet differently amazing thoughts... muahzzz...

Enjoyed the completely caring maaneet and their love for each other in every move...

continue soon... am waiting