Pt4/5 'Devil's Desire' thrd3 Pg31/72

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Little_Mermaid.

@Little_Mermaid.

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#351

o my god sexy devil

loved it

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#352

Annie I must say you really do come up with the most unusual story lines and you have a great flare for relating the story too and I'm enjoying this very much.

Actually I think that I'm more intrigued by this story line than IK or SS though I loved them too.

Please do update really soon and nice long updates, I'm so very impatient to read further, I'm just having too much fun with this one, the tussle between Maan & Geet is really gonna be very interesting 😆

Dee

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hemamurali65

@hemamurali65

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#353

hi ..

annie update s simply superb ..

out of world ..

beautiful depiction of geet s fear ..

so many wow factors ..

i loved my devil s part ..

devil no memory loss .

never forget s ..

always keep up his word r any agreement ..

geet s shock at his rememberance

annieee

wat a brimming confidence that he ll win his bet ..

devil i ve fully fallen 4 ur attitude ..

annie can t single out anything n this update that s superb ..

total update stunning

annie the whole update s

annie

for showing my devil so good with so much attitude ..

loved geet s a bit sherni type ..

annie this 4 u and my devil ...

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

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hemamurali65

@hemamurali65

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

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Maaneet4eve

@Maaneet4eve

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#356

Hi annie!!!!! the story is progressing in a superb manner... just love it... and sorry for commenting so late... i was out of town... I clicked the like button on all the updates... they were superb!!!!!😊

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#357

awesome update di
loved it very very very much
maan is really Devil
poor geet
god save poor soul
but did i ever tell u di
that i love this Devil soo soo much
can't wait for next part di
update soon
thanks for PM di
love ya 🤗