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-knirwal-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

sorry shivu for late comment...

But yaar tune kya os socha hai maan in love with geet ghost...geet is dead?ab maan to akela reh jayega...eagerly waiting for next update to read what happen next?

plz jaldi cont karna and all the very best for ur exams😊

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

oyeee shivi
pls update
u r done with ur xams
now finish this
me dying to read

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
oyeee shivi
pls update
u r done with ur xams
now finish this
me dying to read

di.. there's just one problem... I have written the update on my cell... and my net connection on cell has crashed...so in 2 days I'll update any how!

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: -knirwal-
sorry shivu for late comment...

But yaar tune kya os socha hai maan in love with geet ghost...geet is dead?ab maan to akela reh jayega...eagerly waiting for next update to read what happen next?

plz jaldi cont karna and all the very best for ur exams😊

yup... I'll continue soon... and no problems yr!!!

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

shiviii😡😡
wen r u gonna update this????😡

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
shiviii😡😡
wen r u gonna update this????😡

let me get net on my mob na...!

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: -knirwal-
wen u updating shivu?

in 3 days most probably...

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh
let me get net on my mob na...!

gudness
how do u update on mob yaar??
i hate netting on mob
it feels horrible🤢

wht abt ur lappy?
net isnt back?

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

gudness
how do u update on mob yaar??
i hate netting on mob
it feels horrible🤢

wht abt ur lappy?
net isnt back?

yup...it'll be back in 3 days... update's on mob...can't transfer oon lappy...!🤢

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Part 3

Guys... I am extending this as an SS... For some days... I am discontinuing with Inhuman Ties and as soon as I finish this SS ... I will continue with it...

Maan turned to her in horror... She stood near the check in counter and holding a black rose in her hand. Maan was horrified... There he stood his lips shivering... There was a sudden chill in the air... The paleness ran to bite him... He had eyes that demanded explanation and answers... He wanted to ask and demand reason for this betrayal. She walked towards him... She seemed to be floating coz there was no sign of any jerk of a step... She smoothly drifted towards him and he stood numb... All his senses seem to have been dismantled and rendered non-functional... She stepped towards him and he stepped back. He raised his hand pointing her to stop stepping forward but she wanted to say something to him.

Maan- Move back I say right now!!
Geet- Maan meri ek baat sun lijiye... Please
Maan- Geet step back... NOW!!

Geet halted right there... Careful not to move further... She raised her hands to touch maan who jerked them back... She was taken aback... She took a deep breath.

"Main yahaan pichhle paanch saalo se bhatak rahi hoon... Ek aise aadmi ki talaash mein jo mujhe dekh sake... Aur pichhle mahine aapne mujhe sab se pehle dekha... Yeh karishme se kam nahi... Mere baba ko boliyega ki unki beti jahaan bhi hai... Khush hai... Please Maan..."

Maan- tumhare pati ne tumhe aise kyun...
Geet's eyes fumed- sirf isliye kyunki mere baba unke parivaar ko dahej mein santusht nahi kar paaye... Isliye...
Maan- use toh phir sazaa hogi...!
Geet- usse sazaa main khud dungi... Lekin mushkil yeh hai ki main use chhuu nahi sakti...

She continued- us din... Main wahaan train ke saamne padi rahi... Koi chahta toh mujhe wahaan se kheench sakta tha... Kyunki dev mujhe chhod kar jaa chuka tha... Sirf mere haath-pao bandhe the isliye main nahi hil payi... Lekin sab mooh pher ke chale gaye... Aur main wahan yeh sochti rahi ki shayad kisi mein itni himmat hogi... Ki woh meri jaan bacha payega... Lekin nahi... Main wahan ek tak logon ko dekhti rahi... Aur bas... Phir meri aankhon ke saamne achanak andhera chha gaya..."

She smiled and turned to him. Maan was almost broken to tears. He wiped a small tear glistening from his eyes. Geet chuckled softly at her own pity. Maan went near her. She raised her hand. Maan touched those beautiful soft hands and a current sort of passed through his body. Maan jerked his hands off. Geet turned and diminished in the fog. With her she took all the busyness of the platform and the platform was rendered alone and pale. Maan was sad and he returned to his suite in a 5-star hotel.

After taking a shower, he came out wearing a white towel around his waist. Drops of water dripped from his hairs on his chiseled chest and his forehead. Maan shook his hair with his fingers and a spray of water scented with the fragrance of hair wash saturated the air. He went to the mirror and took his deo and almost finished the bottle spraying it around his whole body. Maan gave a naughty look to the mirror and jumped into the comfy bed. He placed the cotton stuffed blanket on him and was taken in the magical world of sleep. There was a sweet magical smile on his face as he probably dreamt of geet. Maan had already informed that he wouldnt come to visit dadima earlier this evening. He lay peaceful... Snoring very softly hardly audible for others.

Late night... He was waken up by a sweet fragrance that was saturating his lungs...he smiled as he sighed in his sleep. There was a whisper in the blowing breeze. "Maan" echoed with the breeze entering his room. Maan cuddled and twisted in his sleep. The voice drew closer...finally it rang near his ears... "Maan"
Maan got up with a jerk. Geet was sitting on the window pane... Gazing and smiling at him. Maan at first smiled at her and then recalling that he wasnt wearing a single cloth, shame arrested him and he tightly clung to his blanket.
Maan- geet tum yahaan itni raat ko kya kar rahi ho?
Geet- mere liye raat kya... Din kya...

Saying this, she started giggling cutely like a kid. Maan smiled at her dimples and got up. He rubbed his eyes and groped for his vest and shorts. Having worn those, he got up and drank a glass of water. Meanwhile, geet sat on the window pane and gazed Maan walking to and fro in the room. Once ready, he went and sat near Geet on the window pane. She was resting her head on the knees and gazing at the moon. She looked real. When she was sitting, Maan didnt feel her to be a wandering soul even in the slightest. Moonlight glazed on her face an it shined like silver.

Maan- Geet, tum yahaan abbtak kyun ho?
Geet- kyunki mujhe badla chahiye... Saying this, her eyes fumed. Maan touched her pale cold hands- calm down.
Geet- mujhe maaf kar dijiye... Bas main apne badle ke baare mein soch kar kaafi gussa ho jaati hu :p

Maan grinned at her and thought- who could be so restless and insane so as to end the life of this beautiful girl. She looks so full of life even when she doesnt even have the slightest of life left in her.
Geet- aap meri madat karenge?
Maan- kisme?
Geet- revenge!!!

Maan gave a second thought... He gazed at her... She was a fairy like girl. How couldnt he help that face.

Geet- Maan... Aap ko sirf use mere paas lana hoga... Baaki sab main karungi. Mujhe bhagwan ne ek baar apni shakti ka istemaal karne ki aagya di hai.
Maan- hmm...

Geet smiled and gazed at her... She looked at the moon and then suddenly vanished in the fog. Maan looked around and then tapped his head. He had fallen for a wandering soul.

Here I end this part 3. Please leave your comments and do press like...I don't mind if you think...this is utterly stupid and kiddish...😆
Shivangi

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago

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