OS: Faithful Till the end/ last part pg 3

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Hi Guys, I know I havent been updating my FFs. For posession I am having a mind blank at the moment But I will update this week either two updates or a long update and return with a bang!!!
Ek Anchaha Faisla has been updated PMs will be sent this week SOON!!
I will be updating Ek Anchaha Faisla daily from Friday.. IF I get to the second thread before PART 15!! We are on Part 11 at the moment
This is a new FF which I had on my mind ages ago I had written it ages ago!!!
'TELL HIM GEET' Yash roared at Geet who was sitting there calmly looking out the window. She looked at Yash and replied putting a hand on his shoulder and smiled at him. Her smile did not reach her eyes and Yash saw through it.
'How can I Yash? He is now happy in his new life. He deserves to be happy' She walked towards the window looking out at the sunset.
'Geet Please tell him the truth he deserves to know. Why are you doing this to yourself?' He urged her for an answer pushing his hair back.
'Cancer Yash. Last stage. 3 months' She stated sitting down pouring a glass of water from the jug.
'No. Those reports are wrong. Its wrong Geet. Your not dying damn it. Your not' Yash said throwing the reports on the ground. He lifted Geet up from the sofa and held her tight across the arms.
'See Yash, if you can't handle the truth. How would you expect Maan to huh?' She cried out.
'Geet' Yash whispered as Geet broke down in his arms.
'He can't know. He loves me more than life Yash. He won't be able to handle the truth. I know him. Its better he thinks I betrayed him and ran away rather than me dying'
'Geet. Why did you do this?' He asked in tears.
'Because I Love him and he needs to move on and Mahi needs a mother' Geet said picking up a photo of her daughter.
Flashback.
1 year ago.
'Maanuuu' Geet smiled running into the house seeing Maan had just returned from his business trip.
'Geet be careful' He said as she almost tripped over one of Mahi's toys on the ground. Maan held her tight.
'uffo Maan, your here na always to take care of me' She smiled pecking him on the lips. Maan looked at her passionately and kissed her passionately and lifted her up in his arms.
'I missed you Mrs Khurana' He smiled.
'I missed you too Mr Khurana' She said playing with his shirt buttons as he took her into the bedrooms.
'Waise Mr Khurana how much did you miss me?' She asked playfully.
'I'll show you' He smirked ripping her kurti off as he began to nuzzle her.
'Mahi' He asked as he took his shirt off.
'is out with her Yash Uncle' She smiled.
'So no disturbances' Maan smirked removing her salwar and inners as he bent down to love his wife and ravish her.
2 months later,
Geet was out with Mahi and Yash as Maan was in a business meeting. Maan was well aware of Yash and Geet's friendship. He trusted them both as Yash was like his brother. He knew Yash since he was a child. He trusted Geet more than anyone. He had never let Geet go out without him or Yash. As he always thought that Geet should have someone with her because there had already been two attempts on her life. One was because Geet was in the wrong place at the wrong time. Second was because Geet was in the middle of a shootout. Both times Maan had been scared to death if anything happened to Geet he would die. Today was Maan's birthday and Geet wanted to buy something special for him. Maan knew that as he smirked in the office what new his wife will give him after 4 years of marraige. Geet was smiling as Yash was picking up 3 year old Mahi and talking to her in the shopping mall. Geet suddenly felt darkness around her eyes and everything going hazy. Voices became distant and the last thing she heard was Yash screaming 'GEEET'
Two hours later Geet awoke in the hospital, she looked around and saw whiteness and wondered how she got here. She looked to the left and saw Maan standing with the doctor who was smiling and saying
'No need to worry Mr Khurana, its just weakness. We will receive the reports soon'. Maan turned to see Geet who had got up from bed and walked towards him and he got angry and asked.
'Geet why have you got up huh' He lifted her up. 'Sir she may go home. I'll inform you when the results come' He smiled seeing the love in Maan's eyes for Geet. Maan lifted Geet up and took her to the car.
'Maan mahi?' asked Geet concerned.
'She is at home love. Now stop worrying' Maan said buckling her seat up. She smiled at him as Maan kissed her forehead and said 'I was so worried for you jaan. If anything would happen' Geet kissed his lips before he could utter another word.
'Nothing will happen to me'
But how wrong could Geet be.
The next day Geet went to collect her reports as Maan was in an important meeting. She had met Yash on the way as he was told to go by Maan.
'Take a seat' The doctor said leading Geet and Yash to her cabin.
'Doctor is everything fine, it was just weakness nah' asked Geet worried.
'I'm Sorry Mrs Khurana, is it possible Mr Khurana could be here' asked the doctor reading the file.
'why' asked Yash confused. Geet snatched the reports from the doctor and was shocked.
'Geet what is it?' asked Yash looking at Geet's face. The doctor looked at her
'Cancer. Last stage. Minimum time left 8 months' The doctor said.
'does Maan know' asked Geet.
'No I will call him now' The doctor picked the phone up when Geet took the phone and threw it.
'Don't ever tell him ever' She warned.
'Geet but Maan' Yash asked.
'Yash please don't tell Maan' Geet pleaded.
'Mrs Khurana I have sent your reports to specialists but am sure will get the same answers'
Geet and Yash acknowledge and left for home.
Geet arrived home and saw Maan playing with Mahi. Tears were in her eyes.
Maan saw her. Geet wiped her tears.
'Jaan how was the reports' Maan asked concerned.
Geet smiled and hugged him and smiled and said 'am fine Maanu. Maan I'm tired Im going to sleep' She said as she ran to her room and shower and turned the tap on so Maan could not hear her cry.
The following day Geet went to meet Yash. The reports had been returned by specialists and the reports were the same.
'Geet tell Maan please'
'No. I can't Yash. you have my kasam. Do as I say please. Mahi needs a mother. And I need your help'
'Geet no I can't. GEET' Yash screamed as Geet told him her plan.
'Please yash' Geet fell to her knees. 'For Mahi for Maan'
Yash finally agreed.
Geet then started everyday going to meet Yash. She was going to the hospital for treatment but she told Maan she was going to her friends house. MAan was worried as Geet hardly had time for him and was always out.
'Maan Im off bye' She said grabbing her purse. She heard Mahi crying. Maan wondered why Geet was not stopping to help Mahi and ignoring her. This was happening for 3 weeks now. Geet had become distant. She was always out returning late. She has not had any relation with Maan since that day. She was not herself. One day Maan followed her because he wanted to know what the change for. He needed to find out why she had changed. Geet noticed Maan's car and smirked and called Yash.
'Yash final phrase today' She smirked.
'Geet please think'
'NO YASH' She screamed. She went and parked outside his house. Maan was shocked why was Geet at Yash house. She said she was going to see Ria. He walked towards the door and saw Geet and Yash hugging passionately. He was shocked. Then he saw Yash leading Geet to the bedroom.
'Oh Yash...' She smiled. Maan was shocked. He remembered all the times in the last few weeks Geet was out and about. She never told him where she was. But before she always used too. Geet was cheating on him. Wht did she have to lie that she is meeting Yash he had never had a problem. Maybe this was all a misundestanding. He thought he was wrong. He needed to find out the truth though soon.
The following day Maan wanted to confront Geet but she wasnt at home. He had an important meeting. Maybe he was wrong. But he left for home. An employee rang Geet that Maan was coming home.
'Yash' She called him and both went into Maaneet's room.
'Geet please there no turning back after this' Yash warned.
Geet had made her mind up.
Maan opened the door and was shocked to see Geet and Yash in bed and was shocked. Both were dressed under the covers. but Geet was wearing a boobtube dress and leggings.
'GEEET' Maan was angry. He was wrong. Geet betrayed him with his best friend. Maan shut the door.
Geet and Yash got changed and opened the door. Maan wanted to punch Yash but Geet held his arm.
'Don't you dare Maan' She warned.
'GEET' He growled.
'what Geet, huh. You thought you were the perfect husband right. And I Loved you and im a housweife baby making factory?'
'GEET'
'Guess what I Loved Yash. I tried to love you Mr Khurana but your not so good in bed as Yash was' She smirked.
Maan slapped her.
'Get out.'
'I am going. But Maan love, will you ever find anyone who loves you' Geet smirked.
'I WILL GEET. TRUST ME! And MAHI will stay with me and have a good mother' HE gritted in anger.
'Well lets see and Maan remember alimony i want half' She smirked.
'money greedy' Maan smashed the vase as Geet left with yash. 'How could I not read her'
Maan sat that night in pain and drank a lot. But He promised he will find a good mother for Mahi. Forget Geet.
Yash walked out with Geet as Geet cried onto his shoulders seeing Maan's hurt pained eyes.
5 months had passed. Geet health was deterioting. MAan had found Sameera a decent girl who was a teacher and loved Mahi as her own daughter. Geet was happy. that it had happened.
PRESENT
'Thats why Yash. I know in his eyes is love for me. There is still pain. But his words show anger and hatred. He needs to move on Yash and he is marrying Sameera' Yash hugged Geet.
'oh sorry was I interrupting something' MAan walked in seeing Geet in Yash's armed. there was bittterness and anger in his face.
'Maan what are you here for?' She asked coldly
'oh just to tell you that me and SAmeera who loves me Geet' He smirked. 'we are getting married' He threw a card at her.
'She isnt a wh**e like you Geet' Maan said. Yash arms flinched but Geet held his arm.
'She loves me Geet. She loves Mahi. She is a better mother than you Geet. Mahi doesnt even love you' Tears formed in Geet's eyes.
'She is not a money grabbing wh**e like you. Not a user or a bitch like you. We are getting married here is the card' He threw it.
'Oh and Yash, Your invited too. Don't you want to be at your best friends wedding? by the way when are you getting married? You already had your suhagraat' He smirked. Yash clenched his amrs.
Geet started feeling dizzy. Her heart was hurting. It was breaking with each word of Maan. Yash noticed.
'Not another word Maan' He said. Geet eyes were getting dark. Her body was shaking. MAan didnt notice.
'why huh? she is a wh**e. She will leave you too Yash I'm warning you'
'MAAAN' Yash roared. He saw Geet who pleaded with tears in her eyes not to say anything. But what happened next was not known to anyone. Geet fell flat on the ground and fainted. Maan smirked
'another act huh? wow' Maan said. Yash looked at Maan and called the ambulance.
'Hello, yes Geet Handa, please she is sinking'
Maan looked at Yash in shock and looked at Geet. He never noticed how drained of colour she looked or how different she looked. cancer had taken a tole on her. She was much skinnier.
'Yash' MAan put his arm on his shoulder.
'DONT MAAN! If Geet dies today it will be your fault and because of your words.'
'dies? what do you mean?'
'Geet I'm sorry im breaking your kasam but Maan deserves to know the truth.' Yash said as Geet was led into the ambulance on the strecthcer. She was still unconcious.
'GEET HAS CANCER.'
Maan was shocked. 'last stage. She now has 3 months left and Maan if Geet dies today. you killed her 3 months early'
'Yash? Cancer Geet my Geet... when how'
'8 months ago. Your birthday. She was diagnosed. She never betrayed you Maan'
Maan was shocked as h got into the car with Yash following the ambulance.
'She lied to you. she loves you Maan more than her life. We never had any relation Maan. we were just brother and sister. Geet made promise to break your relation. she wanted you to think she betrayed you. that day we hugged it was because we saw you. in bed we were fully clothed. i could never sleep with Geet. i love meera. Geet dr who knows the truth. we are engaged! maan geet knew you would never take the news of her cancer well so she made you hate her. she wanted you to remarry for you for mahi' Yash explained the truth. maan cried blood tears to how much Geet loved him.
to be continued
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is so heart breaking !
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woaa.! this is so damn awesum i want to read the next part soon.! plz update soon.. n doo pm me... plz..! :)
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awsum dear:)
plz update soon :)
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Awesome but soo sad :(
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heartbreaking update😭😭😭
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Maan looked at Yash as he told him everything Geet went through the last 5 months.

'She wanted you to move on. She knew how protective you were that's why she wanted you to think after she dies that she ran off with your money with another guy. And She wanted me to ask you for forgiveness because she wanted me to act heartbroken that she betrayed me because she wanted out friendship back'

Yash and Maan arrived at the hospital. Geet was taken into the intensive care unit where a group of surgeons were attending. Maan and Yash sat outside.

'She saw you with Sameera. Mahi's Nursery teacher and realised you will be happy with her.' Yash explained as he gave a cup of coffee to Maan.

'Why Yash? Why did you both try to prove yourself wrong?' He asked crying. 'I can never forgive myself'

Yash lifted his arm up and Maan saw what he was trying to show. It was a Rakhi.

'You see Maan, my sister Geet made me promise on this Rakhi that I never tell you the truth. Maan when she found out that you were marrying Sameera and seeing her. She was so hurt but pretended to be happy. She stopped taking her medicines. She became more fragile. She only returned home yesterday from the hospital when you came and through your words at her' Yash explained.

Yash told Maan everything. Maan was broken. He felt so guilty. Yash gave him a hug when Meera came out.

'Mr Khurana, Yash, Geet only has a few days left. Her health has deteriotated rapidly and her not taking her medicines had caused her cancer to be more abrupt' Meera explained.

'No Yash Geet is not dying. She can't leave me. She just can't.' Maan said. He ran into the ward and saw Geet. Geet felt a familiar sense and turned and saw Maan. She coughed and took her oxygen mask off.

'what are you doing here?' She asked coldly putting a expressionless face on trying to hide the tears and act like she didn't care. 'I only fainted think Yash was too rough on me'

'Geet' Maan yelled. 'Stop it just stop it. I know everything' Maan said crying. Geet looked at him and tears started to form in her eyes.

'why didn't you tell me Geet? Didn't I deserve to know? I love you damn it' Maan said. Geet put her arm on his and said

'that's why Maan' She softly replied. 'you love me care too much. You can't accept the truth that I'm dyi..'

'NO'

'Maan I'm dying. Its true. I wanted you to hate me. Hate me Maan please hate me. It will be easier seeing hate in your eyes rather than Love and tears' Geet cried. Maan hugged her so tight.

'your not dying Geet. I won't let you. If you die I'm coming with you' Maan said.

'NO. Mahi.. what will happen to her?' asked Geet. Maan looked at her for a moment. 'She needs a mother and father. You are her father Maan.'

Geet started breathing loudly. 'Maan' Geet tried to speak as Maan called for the doctor.

'Promise me that Mahi will have a mother and father' Geet whispered.

'Geet please'

'Maan promise me! My last wish'

'I promise' Maan said kissing her forehead as Geet drifted out of consciousness. Meera brought Mahi in who Sameera had brought after Meera rang her. and She smiled and kissed Mahi one more time before her concioussness left her.

'mama' Mahi said looking at her mother whose eyes were opened her face was smiling but she was not moving.

'Geet' Maan turned and saw that Geet was not moving. Sameera Yash Meera ran to Geet as Maan hugged her tight as Meera declared she has passed away.

'GEEET' The shock of Geet leaving was too much. He hugged her and never came out of that hug. Maan had suffered a heart attack.

Maan awoke and saw he was in a garden type place. He looked around as birds chipred and roses bloomed and saw Geet sitting on a swing.

'Geet' He smiled and went to her. Geet turned around and hugged him.

'Geet I….couldnt fulfil your promise. I couldn't live without you'

'I know Maan. But Look Mahi has her parents' Geet showed him Yash and Meera taking care of Mahi as her own and Sameera as a masi.

25 years had passed. Meera and Yash had married and raised Mahi as there own. Maan had put Yash as Mahi's legal guardian if anything would happen to him. He had fulfilled Geet's promise. Both Meera and Yash had been perfect parents for Mahi and never let her feel that she wasn't there own. Everyday they told Mahi the love Geet had for her father and her father for his mother.

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that was too sad..but beautifully written
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it was a happy ending and a sad ending at the same timee !
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it was heartwreanchingly beautiful
feel really bad for geet...
da lst words maan said was really painful:(
it really made me wanna cry

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