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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Wow...memories indeed...it was quite out of character for Maan to throw popcorns in a movie theatre - maybe that speaks to what extent he can change himself to keep Geet happy..

I loved it how you said that his love is destructive - it sure is - but then again Geet fails to see how this love made her life strong again after everything was falling apart - so its partly constructive as well.

I dont always pay attention to the lines you write before the update but anytime I do, I find them incredibly beautiful.

Go on, have an evil moment ! But come back soon !😃

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Awesome update..

Geet felt soory for she failed her father's dream that too b'coss of maan.

Loved the way maan tried to make her happy but still feeling guilty for his doings

The movie part is hillarious..."Tonsil Hockey" how can you find such phrases yaar...really really funny...

She was laughing for the boy was weak but she forgoat that rehan did the same thing with her...

You wrote past and present in very well manner that while reading it feels that portions are interlinked ...very good going

Update soon

Thanks for pm, dear

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

great part

surprising to see maan throwing popcorn at a guy in movie hall, doesn't go with his image

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

wht an updte... geet is soft heared...poor soul...

their movie part is interstng...

both enjooyed...

pl cont soon...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

part 18
nice part...
past
poor Geet...
Maan felt sorry for her and also anger at himself but why did he continue doing that to her?
hes paying for his past deeds to her...
the theatre scene was so hilarious...
Rehan is a strong part of her life and Maan is trying to soothe her but hes the cause of it...
present
that was so endearing...
but the thrill or the contentment it should give is still not being felt and dealt with...
feels sorry for both of them...
cont soon dear...

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Wow !

Another brilliant story from you !

The entire story was so intense.. kept me in the edge !

Thanks for the pm !

Continue soon !

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

fab update sanju loving it

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

great update! Loved it as always!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Hi thanks 4 da pm n superb long update! well written. the past n present well incorparated! It was emotaional n intense! Update soon, sory 4 late lieks n comments