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Posted: 13 years ago

Same Part

It was next morning when Daddi came to hospital with Addi n sent Rano home. She was not willing to go back.But Daddi insisted at least to hav a shower n lil rest.Addi took baby for check up n Maan changed in his normal cloths n had been also taken for some tests.Daddi received call from Dev so she was attending outside.

After long Geet started to regain her lost senses n conciseness back.She was saying some thing but no words from her mouth But when slowly she raised her rm due to tension in fluid beg tubing...stand fell down n Daddi hearing voice came in running .She was stunned n shocked to find Geet coming out of coma.What to do she forget in overwhelming joy.whether to run outside or to Geet

Daddi: Geet hamari bachi aap theek ho gayi ..hosh aa gaya hamrai Geet ko …(she ran toward Geet n kissed her.Geet wanted to say some thing as she was coming out of her unconsciousness ) hum doctor ko bulla kar late hai abhi …

Daddi ran outside but when she found nurse coming she asked her to inform doctor n herself moved back to room..Geet she was amazed where she was looking here n there.Lik Maan she had blank mind what happened .

There was lil movement on Geet's lips .She was trying to say some things.Daddi knew what she wanted to say.Same what her boy said.Where she was ?

Daddi: Geet bechay hummne patta hai aap kya kehna chahti hai ..yahi k aap kahan hai..?(she held her face in hands)

Geet nodded her head.

Daddi: Betay aap hospital main hai…Maan le kar aaye thay apko yahan.

She felt lil pain in her stitches so she moved her shivering hand toward her belly.But what she noticed.Her belly was flat.She moved her hand with faster pace.Where her child was.

She started to breath heavily n rolled her head on pillow…When she tried to get up .Daddi stopped her.

Daddi: Geet beta hamari baat suniye beta..humme pata hai aap kya soch rahi hai..

Geet with full force pushed Daddi..n got up from bed..throwing all life supporting system away.She started to search some thing (defiantly her baby) under bed..behid door.

Dr Rekha came running n she tried to calm her dowm.But Geet held her arms such tightly that Dr Rekha had scratches of her nails.She gave her support when she was about to fall.But Geet she was more upset n out of control then Maan.

Daddi: Geet ..beta hamari baat suniye..apka …(she was about to complete her words when Geet turned to her n She first tried to say some thing but suddenly she screamed in full force.

Geet: Mera Bacha..Maan…(at last words came out from her mouth n she fall on floor.)

Nurses put Geet on bed .Daddi was surprised to hear her voice.Dr Rekha gav her injection n She became unconscious again.

Daddi: Dr Geet fir se behosh ho gayi..(she was much worried)

Dr: Don worry ..she is alrite injection ka asar hai she ll come out of this.

Daddi: Dr Hamari Geet theek to hai na….aur humne pehli baar inki aawaz suni ..iska matlab yeh bol sakti hai..

Dr: I hop so…Inki mother ne bataya ek incident main inhone apne Papa ko kho diya to fir se bol nahi payi..Dr gav reason Shock.I think samen shock she gets now.Jab yeh behosh nahi thi to she had her child…But after not finding baby inside her..she is in shock..this is the reason as I gussed.Let her recover.She is out of danger now.

Daddi phoned Rano n she came running.Maan left his wheel chair when he got news on his way back to room after check up.Daddi..Rano...Maan they were waiting for Geet to b awake.Maan requested nurse to gav him a chair n he sat in front of Geet holding his lil son in his lap.He looked at baby rolled his hand on baby's tiny checks n lil bundle gav a pleasnt smile same lik his father.

Maan: Beta aaj aap apni Maama se milogay..per baby Papa ne apko Maa se pehle god main liya dekhna wo humse jealous feel karegi…pata hai Maa apke Papa se angry hai…per aab aap gussa hona…kyo nahi liya apko god main(his baby talk made evey one much emotional )

Maan refused Daddi's offer to take baby n for some rest.Lik he was glued to chair. In between this Maan gav baby to Rano to feed him.After three hours Geet came to her senses.

Geet: Maan (her lips were saying but no voice )

Maan got up from chair n set next to her on bed.

Maan: Geet deko mujhe …abhi bhi gussa ho.. (he took her face in hands)

She looked in is eyes without a blink n tears rolled down from corners of eyes.Daddi had told whole incident what Geet's condition was not getting baby in her womb.So her tears were enough to tell whole story.

Geet: Maan…(she wanted to say some thing but not able to do so..Geet held Maan's hand n placed on her belly n started to cry bitterly)

Maan: Main samjh gaya tum kya kehna chahati ho..mujhe kush batane ki jaroorat nahi Geet...tumhari aankein he kaffi hai ..jo mujhe se sabh keh deti hai..(he held her face n kissed her forehead)

Daddi Maa: Maan aap aab Geet se jo baatain karni hai baad main kar lijiye...unki haalat dekhiye aap...(Daddi got angry)

Geet again jerked his hand n was about to get up.Maan stopped him

Maan: Geet...dekho meri taraf..tumhe kya lagta hai kissi main itni himmat hai hamara bacha humse dur kar paaye..Pammi to bilkul nahi..

Geet loooked at him with wide open eyes.

Daddi: Geet beta shaant ho jaa-ea..every thing is okey..agar Mummi royegi to rote hue baby ko kon chup kara-a-ga.

Maan: Aur nahi to kya ..mera beta to jab se meri god main aaya hai wo to itna roya nahi..jitni uski mumma ro rahhi hai..(so at last Geet came to know about their son)

Daddi: Arre Rano to patta hi nahi wo bahar hai..Let me tell her..aur Geet ko itna preshan nahi karna chaa-hea (she left)

Geet looked with egar eyes on Maan.

Geet: Maan...hamara bacha (she forced words to come out of her throat )

Maan looked at her...his happiness was out of this world

Maan: Geet tum bol sakti ho...u know... (But Geet hadn't noticed Maan on his feet in fear to loose their baby)

Rano came in holding baby in her arms.She was outside trying to make baby sleep.

Rano: Geet meri bachi (she moved toward her)

Maan got up n took baby from her.Rano hugged her tightly.But Geet she was jst looking at lil bundle in Maan's hands.Rano noticed that.

Daddi: Dekhiye Rano khud Maa baan kar ..apni Maa aur Daddi Maa ko bhul gayi hai hamari Geet (she teased )

Rano: Manji agar meri bachi yeh kushi paakar mujhe bhul bhi jaaye to hajaar baar bhulle ..main kush hu..(she rolled her hand on Geet's cheek )

Maan came close to Geet n sat next to her on bed.Geet she was not able to express what she got.After so mainy pains she gained from years.What that witch to her..she had lost hop to keep her baby.But Maan he let any body not to snatch their baby from them

Maan: Geet what r u looking...its true hamara bacha ..hamara beta hamare samne hai ..hamare pass...apni Maa ko milne k liye kitna tadap raha tha ..mujhe pata hai (he put baby in her lap)

Geet looked at him n then baby tears rolled down from her eyes n fell on baby's check n this disturbance made him to come out of sleep .He started to cry.She held her tightly.

Daddi: Beta dekha aap bhi rone laggi...aap ro rahi hai to is nanhi se jaan ko kon chup kara-ega

Maan: Papa...waise bhi baby mumma se gussa hai...wo itni derr se baat nahi kar rahi ..(Maan took baby from her)

But Geet snatched from his arms.They were acting lik small kids.who fight to keep some thing very dear to them with themselves.But baby was crying aloud.

Rano:Aap donno pehle ladaae kar lijiye aur hamare Raj Kawark ko mat rulaa-ea...main aur Manji inko le kar bahar jaate hai...(she took baby from them n both Daddi n Rano moved out laughing at their lov/kiddish fight.

Maan n Geet both were left looking at their faces.But Maan started to laugh aloud.Geet she was about to cry


Hows this hop u lik plz comment n hit lik.If u want more tell me.Thanx my dearies who support me.


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
for make geet conscious and she speak double treat



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG VERY EMOTIONAL
PART...
JASS U REALLY DID THE JUSTICE WITH MAAN'S EMOTIONS... JALDI JALDI UPDATE DENA DEAR...OR AB MAI TUMSE ANGRY NAHI HI... MUUUHHHA
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

YE KYA SWEETY SARA KA SARA CHANCE DONA TIME TUM LE GAYI. MAI TO WAIT HE KARTI RAH GAYI... CHALO KOI BATH NAI MEEE SECOND...
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Posted: 13 years ago

😭😭😭so much pain...

awesome part...

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Are yar jass aur kitna rulaogi..maan ko dekkar mein bhi ro rahi hu..i cant c my maanu in ths cndtn and geet too..jaldi geet ko teek kardo yar warna mera maan aur pagal hojayega..and update soon...
Hey jass tum kese likthi ho yar itni emotnal updates..rona nahi aathi hai kya...iam again fida on ur work..ab plz jaldi se update karo aur geet ko bhi teek karo..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee


YE KYA SWEETY SARA KA SARA CHANCE DONA TIME TUM LE GAYI. MAI TO WAIT HE KARTI RAH GAYI... CHALO KOI BATH NAI MEEE SECOND...


it happened accidently first time i commented for waiting but that time she updated and at second time i reserved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
😃😃

Originally posted by: tamanna1391


it happened accidently first time i commented for waiting but that time she updated and at second time i reserved it




😃...KOI BATH NAI I WILL TRY NEXT TIME
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Posted: 13 years ago

sweety kabhi kabhi hamari post ko bhi lke kar diya kar ... hame lage ga ki u r reading our comments and acknowleding us...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very emotional update
Loved it
Geet is still unconscious
Felt bad for maan
Continue soon

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