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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 16(A)


As days passed he was more in love with her.

He would leave no chance to be with her, as the days of starting the work came closer, they also came closer.

A week was left for the work to start, Geet had transferred all the rights of the project to Maan, he first objected but later after much persuasion agreed.

It was 10 at night, they were still at Basti, a certain area was vacated where the apartment will be constructed, and the residents of that place were accommodated on the other side.

The apartments will be ready to shift in 3 months; once all the residents shift here the work of the factory area will start in full swing.

The target was to complete the work in 2 years, if possible earlier.

He accompanied her after to her apartment; it has become a daily ritual.

She went to change while he made coffee for both, and after he freshened up, they discussed more plans and ended up kissing each other.

Tomorrow was the big day, and tonight they ended making out with each other.

At first Geet was a little reluctant.

G: Maan will it be Ok, my experience with such things is bad

M: better than me

G: pardon

M: at least you have some experience while I am all new to this

She was all red with humiliation and started hitting him with a pillow

He caught her hand

M: if it starts like this, no way the experience will be bad

She gave him a startled look

And he laughed

They laughed together and finally with some reluctance with some experience with some inexperience and with lots of love they became one

G: Maan thank you

M: same to you

And they slept in ach others arms

The inauguration went well, and the work was started.

Maan bade her good bye and went to his house dreaming of a future with Geet as his wife and their two kids

At about midnight his cell buzzed it was Geet

M: Hi sweet heart, not able to sleep

G: MAAN! HELP!

He was shocked

M: Geet, are you Ok? Where are you?

G: in my room, they are here, Maan come soon, and they are here to kill me

M: I am coming Geet, who are they? Where are they?

G: in the lobby, I have locked myself in my bedroom.

M: I am on way and don't cut the phone

He ran to his car and drove like a maniac

M: Geet I am coming

But the line went dead

He became restless

He reached her apartment in record time

She was nowhere, the whole apartment was a scene, the neighbors' have gathered, the police was called

M: GEET!

Mrs. Buns came forward

MB: they dragged her from here

M: who were they?

MB: we don't know

He looked at the apartment, the door of her room was broken and her cell was lying near the bed.

He did not know what to make out of all this. She was nowhere.

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Part 16 (B) hit like and go to next page

hope you liked the part 16(A),
I know you all are bashing me, throwing chappals on me, Ouch it hurts.
but this is what it is.
as I said, can you plan anything in life? can we have a planned life?

so who were those people?
where did they take her?
is she alive? or dead?
what will Maan do now?
will he be able to find her?


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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
geet easily accepted maan's proposal
they came closer with passing days
did arjun found her...where they took her...hope she is safe and sound
maan save her...she need u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no , but how does geet's ex husband came to know about her ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome... Finally they confessed ❤️
Who took her??? Is it dev or arjun??? Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 16(B)

She was nowhere. They searched for her everywhere. But during this time also Maan did not stop the work of her dream project.

The police tried to search for her, they did everything that was in there hands.

2 months passed, still no news of her.

Maan had become quite, he did not speak to anyone.

His only aim was to find her and to complete her project.

Today was Manpreet's sangeet and mehendi, though he did not feel like attending the function, he had to.

MP will get married to Prem tomorrow and Pari will go with her biological parents after the marriage.

Yash and Myra were coming to attend the marriage and take their daughter with them.

Everyone in the family now knew the truth.

Finally he went to the function but came back after talking to MP and Prem, they understood his condition.

He went to her apartment, he had it all renovated.

He came here almost daily.

There was a music player in her room, which she used often, he thought of hearing some of her favorite songs.

He took a cassette she listened to and opened the case panel to find a cassette already in there. He rewinds it thinking that he would hear the songs she must be listening to that day.

He sat on a couch and played it.

He was shocked to hear what it had, it was she speaking,

"I am so happy today, after so much of effort finally I am doing something important. And above all I have Maan with me now, the project and Maan they make my life so complete. Soon the project will be over and we will get married, and will have two kids as he says and few more as I have not told him yet. Well when we can afford why should we not have more kids.

Ting tong,

Wait there is someone, maybe its Maan; I will keep you on as I can then record his voice without him noticing,

Ting tong,

G: Coming

{The door opening sound}

G: Who are you?

{A male voice} Madam can you tell me this address?

{Sound of paper}

G: it's OMG its my address

MV: so you are the person

G: Who are you? What do you want?

MV: you, hey guys come she is the girl, no a real lady

G: get away

{sound of struggling}

MV: relax lady we will not harm you

Another voice: but we are here to harm her

MV: right

G: move away

{Sound of running and closing the door}

{Banging sound}

MV: open the door, we are not here to create a scene

AV: open it, you will not feel any pain if you co-operate

MV: yes we will shoot you keeping the bullet close to your temple

AV: you will die even before knowing what has happened

MV: I think we will have to break the door

{Sound of breaking, Bang! Bang!}

AV: the door is very strong

MV: I think we should closely watch the hinges and break it from there

AV: right

MV: I will work on lower hinges while you try to break the lock rail

AV: ok

{Sound of breaking continues for long}

MV: finally

AV: now we only need to push it to open it

{CREAK!}

G: NO!
{breaking sound of the phone}

MV: so you called for help

AV: we will take her somewhere else

MV: yeh

G: leave me, HELP! HELP!

AV: she will gather the neighbors

MV: hit her head

AV: ok

BANG

G: NO! HE''''''''..LP!

There was silence

{Sound of door opening}

A female voice: who is there?

MV: someone is coming

FV: who is there? What are you doing in Geet's house? Why are you wearing masks

AV: run

FV: wait, what have you done to her?

BANG! BANG!

FV: help! Help! They are taking Geet with them, they are kidnapping her

{Sound of running footsteps}

Male voice: call the police

Another voice: where have they gone?

Female voice: to the parking

Another voice: alert the guard

Someone else: he is not conscious; they have hit him on his head"

The cassette was complete

Maan sat there perplexed.

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Part 17 (A) coming soon

hope you liked the part 16(B),
now let us see what happens in the next part?
imagine the state of Maan's mind
poor guy he has to hear all this



please read it
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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome first 15 b ...haila ye maan hai ... ya koi r ...full chatter box ...


mana liya maan ney apni geet ko ... stat forward tha sab ...

i loved his lines 2 kids . uff both like u ...

reading again and again ...

par i loved this part ...


finally they r one ...


next part ... are yaar meri itni pyaari love story mai ye kaisa twist ...

aa gaya kya uska ex pati ...


mee first too ...


going to read the part now ...

thanks shruti ...


nhi aatey ho nahi aatey ho ...

par jab aatey ho to update kee barsat le kar aatey ho ...

love u ...muuhhhaaa


Edited by maansee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
accidently ... un planned ... and yepiee mee firrst
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor maan ... sab badal gaya ...

ye kya kar dala shruti ...

maan chup chap doing his work ...


and this tape .. uff koi clue nahi mila is se ...

kya hoga aage ...


come soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
mera like button not working 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 17 (A) coming soon



soon matlab soon ...😃

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