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when ll u update... Update it soon...

Just finish reading this ff... Pls update soon and pls pm

Originally posted by: mayyo13

It's sort of a heady feeling, to get a chance to have your comment posted right after the chapter in your favourite story! Yes, it is! And I'm glad to know that my story is your favorite! I've never been first on any story and I still won't race but I now realise why everybody's so happy when they have the first slot reserved for their comment!! I know! The heady feeling explains it. 😉

I tried waiting up and dedicate my 1000th post to this special chapter but it was too long a wait, so here I am with my 990th post. Aww! No matter hun! The feeling is what matters more!

Two scenes, just two scenes is all it took for having us (me, at least) dreaming and blushing and swooning! *blush* I know what you mean! 😃

I have, so far, felt sympathy towards Pinky for what she's had to face while being so young. But today, she kind of awed me! Her soft, motherly side shown for Geet made me feel respect for her. Yes, I know. That's been the general view among people of her. But there's a lot more to her. She deserves sympathy but only as much as anyone else. Not overdoses which she is usually buried under all the time. Then her big heart, easy-going friendly nature and playfulness had me wishing for a friend and confidante like her. Ooo! That's a first! The way she readily offered Geet her own dresses, the way she tried helping her choose one of them, You wish you had a friend like that who readily offered you all her finery! 😉 the way she didn't want to force her choice upon Geet while shopping for dresses; all of this has just made me hope that she finds her own happiness soon. And with a heart so beautiful, I'm sure she will! If I have my way, she will! But let's wait and see what fate has in store for her. 😊

What do I say about the spotlight scene of this chapter? *grins* You chose the perfect song for this dance! Didn't I? I love it! And who says you don't know about music and dancing? Believe me, I do not! I could see everything the way you described it. I love that particular compliment! I could see them sitting on the grass enjoying their coffee, I could see Geet enjoying the rain and Armaan enjoying the view. I could see them dancing away on the song which so aptly conveyed their inner feelings. It was like a movie playing in front of my eyes. And I loved what I saw! WOW! Now I'm flattered! I know I visualised it while I wrote it, but my readers also being able to see the same? Hell, I'm beyond ecstatic!

Well, I would say this was a bomb! Of a kind. 😉 Never expected the seedha saada sa Armaan making this first move! Exactly! Neither did I! But when I was writing, he did it and I couldn't do anything to stop him. 😉 Not yet at least and definitely not without saying out loud what he felt! That's because he is a firm believer of 'Actions speak louder than words'. 😃 Geet's reaction, I think, is pretty much expected. Of course! Lekin I don't want her to back out of the ball or turn a cold shoulder towards Armaan. Nor do I, but who knows what's going on inside her head? Only time will tell. And I have this feeling that the bomb hasn't yet fully exploded. What's Armaan going to do at the ball? Well, you know Armaan. Let's see what's going on in that pretty head of his. 😉

I just hope you can update the next chapter soon! Can't say about that, unfortunately!

So the first thing I want to get cleared is a confusion. I've noticed that when you write Armaan and Geet's names in the precap, you write AR. Why is that? I mean is it a mistake or something or is there something behind it that I'm missing? 😕

I loved Geet's introspection and acceptance of her own reaction to Armaan while on the other hand, Maan being happy knowing that she's thinking about them!

I pity Garv for having to put up with Sasha! Poor guy! He became a puppet for her to use to make Ryan jealous. 😆

I'm really starting to like Dev now. I didn't quite understand what he was trying to do with the masks but then I was like 'this guy's got a mind!' 😃 Does this mean he approves of Maan and Geet as a couple?
But wait! He announced that Kunwar Maan is going to open the ball and Geet is going to dance with him. What if Geet recognises him to be Armaan? I'm nervous now!

Oh, by the way, the way you described Geet's dress, I can close my eyes and see it. Beautiful is the only word I can think for it!

Now I'm really desperately waiting for the next chapter! 😊

oh my god u hav left at the dead end...
Update soon dont tak too much of time for nxt update...
Waiting for nxt one...

Ofcourse it will b on geet only...
I guess!!
So finally u updated the ballroom nw time for ball dance..don't take long tym for anothr update...:)

Awesome pzrt.
Dev is very smart. Achasa setting karliya. Abi ball dance baki hai.
Pl. Update the next part soon.