Why is my heart so restless? Maaneet SS Part 5 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Wow!! read part 1 and 2 and it is amazing so far!!!!!
I love your writing!!!! Wondering if tattu is maan or is he pretending????????
Please pm me!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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READ SECOND PART ... SO THEY R CHILDHOOD FRIENDS... I REALLY LOVED GEET THAT SHE IS STILL STUCK TO HER CHILDHOOD FRIEND. SO MAAN IS TUTTU... PLEASE COME BACK WITH ANOTHER UPDATE... AND PLEASE CORRECT PART 2 IS ON PAGE 6 NOT 7...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Awesome I loved it
Geet waiting for Tuttu
And Is Maan really her Tuttu ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
maan was right in expressing his feelings
hope it does not effect their professional terms
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
wow superbb😍
loved it dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
maan is tutu...nice..

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Why my heart is so restless Part 3

"Yes Ma'am.I am none other than your Tuttu",Maan revealed his identity.
Geet was over excited,"Really?You are my Tuttu?"
He smiled,"Why?You can't believe it?"
"I am so excited".
"After completing studies my aim was to reach you.I searched for you...finally i could reach you".
She smiled.
"But Tuttu...i really thought that you must be a rich business man now.You were so intelligent when you are small.A business man needs brain.You use your brain very well.Right?"
"Everything is only after you Ma'am.Even money comes after you for me".
She blushed.
"Actually i am well off".
"Then why did you join my office?"She was confused.
"For you.I joined your office to see you everyday".
He looked at her deeply.She became shy.
"But why did you hide your identity?"
"Simply.I wanted to know whether you can recognize me or not.But you failed in recognizing me.But still i wanted to confess my love.That's why i confessed my love".
Her face became dull.
"But without recognizing you i insulted you.Even though you are well off i insulted you telling that you are inferior to me.But actually you work here only for me.I am sorry Tuttu".
"It is ok Ma'am.Now the misunderstandings are cleared.We are happy together".
She smiled.
"But why are you calling me Ma'am now also?You have already revealed your identity.Still..."
"Ok Geet..."
They both smiled.
Suddenly he saw her bandaged hand.
"What happened to your hand?"
"Chill Tuttu..just chill...I fell down.A small wound".

Geet took him to her guest house.
She took a bottle of liquor.
Maan was shocked.
"Geet...liquor..?"
"It's very tasty Tuttu.My London uncle sent it to me from London.Taste it".
"I don't drink".
Geet could not believe it.
"You don't drink?I just can't believe this.Now days it's difficult to find a high class man who does'nt drink".
He said in his mind,"I am a simple middle class man who is against drinking".
Geet poured some liquor in the bottle.
He asked her,"Geet,i don't drink.Then why are you pouring it?"
She smiled,"It is for me".
He was shocked.
"You drink?"
"Yes.I drink when i am really happy.Today i want to drink as i got my Tuttu back.You don't know how happy i am".
She drank.
He felt awkward seeing her drink.
"Wow!So tasty.I feel really cool after drinking".
He did'nt mind her as he was really irritated with her drinking habit.

He thought,"I fell in love with a high class girl unknowingly.So i have to accept the high class culture also.After all she is not a regular drinker".
She felt drowsy and kept her head on his shoulder and slept off.
Suddenly his conscience pricked him.
He felt guilty.
"My God!What did i do?I lied a lot to gain my love as i did'nt have any other option.I become restless without Geet.So i had to do something against my conscience.Geet thinks that i am her Tuttu.But what will happen if she comes to know that i am not her Tuttu,but only an ordinary middle class man?"
His heart became restless again.


Today is Geet's parents' wedding anniversary.
Geet had decided to surprise her parents by introducing her soul mate/best friend Tuttu to them.
The dancing boys and girls are led by Maan and Geet.
"Tera Rang Balle Balle, Teri Chaal Balle Balle
Tera Roop Balle Balle, Tere Gaal Balle Balle
Dekha Tujhe To Mujhe Pyar Ho Gaya
Tere Khayaalon Mein Yeh Dil Kho Gaya...
O Naiyon Naiyon , O Naiyon Naiyon Mainu Dil Tera Naiyon Chaahida
Ik Tu Hi Mere Naal Naiyon Naiyon Janchda...{Soldier}.
Maan's team started dancing.

Geet and her team were wondered.

Maan showed funny face at Geet as his team was getting claps from the audience.


Geet stood as if she did not care.

But they did'nt want to be inferior to the boys' team.Geet stared at Maan like a Queen to prove that they are not in any way below them.


Tthey danced with full energy.

Maan and geet danced with competitive spirit.They were very funny.

Finally they danced together.


Geet and Maan changed their outfit after the dance performance.Geet wore a beautiful white saree which has violet border and diamond ornaments.Maan could not take his eyes of her.Geet blushed.
The song 'Mann Yeh Saahib Ji, Jaane He Sab Ji
Phir Bhi Banaaey Bahaane
Naina Nawaabi Ji, Dekhe Hain Sab Ji
Phir Bhi Na Samjhe Ishaare
Mann Yeh Saahib Ji Haan Karte Bahaane
Naina Nawaabi Ji Na Samjhe Ishaare
(na Samjhe Ishaare)
Dheere Dheere, Nainon Ko Dheere Dheere
Jiya Ko Dheere Dheere Bhaayo Re Saibo
Dheere Dheere, Begaana Dheere Dheere
Apna Sa Dheere Dheere Laga Saibo...'{Shor In The City} is played.
Geet's parents danced romantically.
Maan and Geet look at each other romantically.They imagined dancing romantically.



Suddenly the spotlight fell on the guy who just entered the house.
Everyone looked at him.
He gave a flower bouquet to Geet's parents.
"Happy wedding anniversary aunty uncle".
They smiled at him even though they did not recognize him,
"Thank you".
"I know that you both may be wondering who i am".
They were wondering who he was.
He went towards Geet with a smile.
"Did you recognize me Geet?"
She could not make out.
He showed her a childhood photograph of a boy and a girl.That girl was Geet.
"Can you identify the boy who stands next to you?"
She was shocked.She stared at him.He was smiling.
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
so my doubt was rt...
maan lied to her..!
nw wen she cums to noe the truth,wat vl happen?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
this is so not done maan lies to her that he is her childhood friend and now her real friend is back
again an insult to maan and this time it would be more insulting and painful
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
oh oh titu is back con soon

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