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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

Tat was just awesome..

The way Maan's friends were teasing was just fabulous and the songs were too good..

Loved their friendship and even though they did not meet geet their bonding seems to increase with their lovely friendship.

Even though I did not like maan's way of teaching sameera a lesson but she really deserved it.

It was awesome to see how maan was making her to know the meaning of seducing man'

Dear want some romance somance yaar


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

such a cute update...loved it Varsh dear

This story has something whcih makes it very beautiful...I guess I am a stinker for stories where Geet sis o sweeta nd innocent and Maan is so possesive and caring for her.


❤️ thanksss😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.. waiting for MG to meet again..
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohhh so loved it dear, plsss do add me in your PM list and can't wait to see the next part. continue soon dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
pm me when you update it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting eagerly for da next update...
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amazing updates dear...
loved it...
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Want to see maan knowing that geet had fainted due to fear of darji. 😲plsss update soon. plsss do PM the next updates as i love this FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi frends,

m back with one more update...some people are confused with MaanEet age...to tell you ...the last part was all about ,what happened in last three years...NOW geet is 17 and maan is 19...with their 18 and 20 running respectively...i hope m clear...pls ask me if any doubts...

NOTE:please dont skip what i mention above my updates...read them also along with the story...thankuuu..<3


Varsh Rai

Part 22

please read maaneet age mentioned above.please igonre the spelling and gramatical mistakes..😳.

After 3 yrs
IIT -Delhi (Farewell party to seniors)

The farewell was in college itself.Maan and his frens had planned a skit for the seniors. The name of the skit was "SUPRESSED DREAMS"...it was a musical skit...and maan was a background singer for the same...it was maan's idea to entertain his seniors so he involved his frens there...

maan on microphone: Dear sir and Ma'am...

seniors were shouting , oye abhi bhi ragging de raha hai...

maan: ab jatey jatey aap logo ko thodi respect de he dete hai socha...😉seniors laughed😆

maan described the motive of the play to them...it was basically for the students who were forced to study hard and for their parents they somehow managed to get into one of the best clgs ,some were forced with payment seats... and were unwillingly studying engineering killing their own dreams which were totally different ...it was a serious message but with fun...

rex was playing the character of a student who is forced to study hard (which was actually true in his real life too😉)

sourabh depicts a whiz-kid...go-getter types

and vipul was their father..

play started...curtains were up...

Kas Ke Joota Kas Ke Belt

Khons Ke Andar Apni Shirt

Manzil Ko Chali Sawaari

Kandho Pe Zimmedari

Vipul was wearing shoes belt ...tugging his shirt in...looking like adults and head of the family...with all burden on his head...being disciplined and organized...

Haath Mein File Man Mein Dum

Meelon Meel Chalenge Hum

Har Muskil Se Takrayenge

Tas Se Mus Na Honge Hum


Duniya Ka Naara Jame Raho

Manzil Ka Ishaara Jame Raho


Sourabh woke up frm his bed like an undertaker😆 ...as robotic as he could and started with his daily routines and challenges...

Ye Sote Bhee Hain Attention

Aage Rehne Ki Hai Tension

Mehnat Inko Pyari Hai

Ekdum Aagyakari Hain

He had his brain boosting tonics,brkfast and went for school...he bfully portrait the character in him...who wanted to do something in his life according to what society wants and accepted ...and only then u r declared as civilized in society...else u r useless...and waste 😡


Ye Omlet Par Hi Jeete Hain

Ye Tonic Saare Peete Hain

Waqt Pe Sote Waqt Pe Khate

Taan Ke Seena Badhte Jate

And then it was rex...he woke up frm his bed yawning and strtching like a lazy bone...😆

Seniors laughed and applauded...maan slow down his tune and voice...showing the world that this is the best way to njoy life ...fully and slowly...not running to ahead from someone or compete to be like them...

Yahaan Alag Andaz Hai

Jaise Chidta Koi Saaz Hai

Har Kaam Ko Taala Karte Hain

Ye Sapne Paala Karte Hain

Vipul came to him strictly and instructed him to study and behave properly...whereas rex was least interested in listening

Ye Hardum Socha Karte Hain

Ye Khud Se Poocha Karte Hain

Kyon Duniya Ka Naara Jame Raho...??

kyu manzil ka ishaara..jame rahoo..??

His room was all mess...he picked his camera ...went outside and captured the nature...

Ye Waqt Ke Kabhi Ghulam Nahin

Inhain Kisi Baat Ka Dhyan Nahin

Titli Se Milne Jaate Hain

Ye Pedon Se Batiyate Hain

He looked at sky ...completely lost in his dreams...as from everyday reality into a fantasy world

Ye Hawa Batora Karte Hain

Barish Ki Boondein Padhate Hai

Aur Aasmaan Ke Canvas Pe

Ye Kalakariyan Karte Hain


maan like a rockstar made his seniors njoy and sing with him...



Kyu Duniya Ka Naara Jame Raho...!!!!

manzil ka ishaara ...jame raho

Some seniors actually had their eyes wet...everybody was spell bound by their realitic acts...and why not ...they were actually portraying the character which was shared by most of the students sitting their...

Seniors njoyed their skit...later on titles were given to them..in between 3rd year students also did a shero shayri mehfil...it was tottaly fun filled,rocking and one of the best farewll one could jave...in the end everybody danced together in a dj...

The farewell was to be conclude with a ball dance...maan was sitting on a spanish guitar chair with his guitar...on special request by seniors...they wanted the evening to end with his voice with a special romantic song...

Maan was lost in his world...he was not liking anything...he didnt know what he was doing here...

Rex understood his state of mind and immediately called his G bhabi...Coz dadimaa was not well ..and with his part time job...maan was hell busy ...it was 6 months now...geet and maan didnt see each other...though they woke up with their calls...they spoke like crazy but didnt met... geet took a promise from maan not to come hoshiarpur and look after dadi...and it was not easy for her...she was equally lost and dying to see him...but then...their love could never be mean...

Rex: hello G talk to maan...he is missing u...

Rex put the blue tooth device in maan's ears...

Geet blushed ...she knew rex was upto something

Geet: maan

Maan : geet...ye rex

Maan looked at rex and he smirked...

Seniors were shouting for maan...to start and here maan was lost in his meeshti's voice...geet knew he must be in farewell party today ..and realized he must be performing for them...

Geet: maan...gaaiye na...

Maan covered the microphone with his hands...

Maan: geet tum mujhe bahut satati ho...dekhta hu tum kab tak rokti hi mujhe khud se milne k liye...ab aur nahi sununga

Geet: maan...chilla baad me lijiyega...sab aapka wait kar rahey hai...

Maan: karne do

Rex looked at him...and widened his eyes...isey kya hua..i thot iska mood sahi ho jayega...ye to G pe he bhadakne laga..

Geet was so upset to hear him like this...she was equally wretched...not even a second went without thinking abt him...she couldnt eat properly...cudnt sleep...but was happy that maan kept his promise..and now maan being adamant like this...was making her helpless and difficult for her to control her emotions ...she so wanted to hide herself completely in his arms...

Geet: maan...aapki bahut yaaad aa rahi hai..she almost cried...mere liye ga dijiye na please...

Maan's heart skipped several beats...he couldnt believe geet said that,...finally...he wanted to run to her and take her away from this world in his armsto a place where no one could see them...

It was never in him to deny his meeshti...and the way she asked him he knew her eyes were wet...he knew it was equally difficult for her to be away from him ...but then if it is so..why she even tries when she knows ...he is all for her...

maan: only for u jaan...

geet smiled blushing furiously loving the breathtaking names he gives her...

He removed his hand from mike...and one more time...he sang for his meeshti...even his last breath was dedicated to his geet

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sU-39frqX4Y&feature=related (m sure it must be on the top of ur playlist nowadaz...cudnt help adding it as a part of this ff)

Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye


Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye


Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu


Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Everybody danced with their partners...singles were dancing with their frends...vipul joined with dia ...saurav and rex were dancing with each other...

Geet loved his voice,his words... which were all for her...

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta(its an urdu word meaning bonding,attachment)
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

aise hum jaane hume kya pata


Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye



Geet frowned like always...she never liked it and hated it when he talked abt "marna" and all...

Maan was smiling now...he knew she didnt like him saying this...but he cant help...it was so true...

He is living for his meeshti and will die for her...if he wont get her...

Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sauhbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maanu mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Maan closed his eyes feeling his meeshti's blush...her fluttering eyes...oh god he so wanted to see her..

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye..

While everybody was busy with their partners maan left from the venue keeping the Bluetooth on his chair ...he called geet with his phone

Maan: geet ...mai abhi aa raha hu...

Geet: maan meri baat to suniye...bahut raat ho gayi hai...

Maan: geet u know i don't care...

Geet: maan rajji ki sister ki marriage hai..kal sagai hai...please maan...ruk jaiye na...

kal hum bahar bhi mil saktey hai...bus ek din aur..

maan: geet...I..

before he could complete

geet: aur haan maan ...mai chahti hu ki aap rex vipul saurav...sabko apne sath laaye...i want to meet them

maan: geet tum galti kar rahi ho.. ye jo tum mujhe itna tadpa rahi ho na... mai tumhe chodunga nahi kal... yaad rakhna...he almost shouted

geet made a big O mouth...

geet : itna gussa...!!!mai bhi dekhti hu kal kaun kisey nahi chodta hai...

maan huskily: wo to mujhe pata hai geet ki arguments me tumse koi jeet nahi sakta...and i love to lose..lekin meeshti...

he paused for a while...

maan:mai wo waley chodne ki baat nahi kar raha hu...

geet had goosebumps listening to his last statement ...she went speechless and maan disconnected the phone...she couldnt sleep and was smiling thinking about his naughtiness everytime...she tried hard to get some sleep but end up changing sides restlessly thinking about him...after so many days he is coming..she cudnt wait to see him..

In the morning maan informed his frends about geet's invite for them...geet wanted rex and rajji to meet...she always use to tease rex by rajji's name and vipul by dia's name... maan planned how they ll enter inside the party being the musicians ...disguise as sardar...

Hoshiarpur

It was evening...Maan and his frends arranged everything ...they talked to the singh family and they were ready to hire them...they all dressed up in sardars...maan left his frends in a guest house after the proper planning leaving rest on them..

Maan enterd geet room...and was stunned too see his meeshti...her back was facing him...she was smiling looking down searching for her bindi getting ready for her love ,her soul...maan was dead seeing her almost bare back ...she was wearing a maroon Punjabi lehenga...

She looked up toward the mirror to put her bindi on...when she saw maan standing there looking deeply at her...when she looked up to him...maan lost all his senses...his heart was beating faster ...

when he is with his meesti...his state of being was pure love and nothing else...

Geet ran and hugged him tightly...maan took her in his arms,swung her ,feets in air...they were so close ...their bodies were glued to each other...he put her down ,geet was standing on his feets now...he covered her bare back with his palms...looking into her eyes ever so passionately...he hugged her again wanted to absorb her...she circled her arms around his neck keeping her head on heart calming their breaths...hiding herself inside him ...

Maan pulled her away from his chest...it felt like they were meeting after ages...maan badly wanted to feel geet now...the way she was dressed...as always seducing him in her own innocent ways...and the best part it was her unknown seduction...what will he do when she ll actually seduce ...playing with his senses...she was making him hard...he pulled her face to look into her eyes which belongs to him...he love to see himself in her deep brown eyes...it felt she has hiding him inside her to never let him go...she was still standing on his feets...

Geet: maan..

Maan kept his fingers on her lips...wet with her gloss she applied...he replaced his index fingers with his thumb and lingered them on her lips ever so lightly...geet closed her eyes feeling tingling...and looked down when maan held her chin and made her look at him...she looked up but kept her eyes closed...her heart beats were louder and faster...her breast moving in and out touching his chest...

Maan continued lingering his fingers from her lips to cheeks know...which were red with maan's blushon 😳...he touched her eyes ,her forehead...his one hand at the back ...he was pressing her bare back harder keeping her glued to him...it was difficult for geet to control...she didnt wanted him to stop...

From her forehead he moved down again trailing his fingers all over her face and then to her neck side ways...making her tilt her head towards his fingers...he was raising her heartbeats badly...he kept his fingers on her collar bone ...she shivered just with the feel of them and hugged him tight not able to control...

Maan opened her plaited hairs...and again pulled her away...

Maan: geet maine kaha than na ki mai tumhe chodunga nahi...wo bhi itni jaldi...abhi to maine kuch bhi nahi kiya jaan...

Geet was feeling dizzy...she looked down blushing...she was all red with his comment...

He dipped his face in her neck and was playing with her hairs giving her sweet pain...he moved her hairs to one side...and slowly opened her dori...

geet opened her eyes when she felt the tight choli getting loose and then realizing what maan did...she clutched his shirt holding him tighter ...

geet: maan please

but her moans were only arousing maan to give her peak of ecstacy..

geet felt her choli was moved down from her right shoulder making them bare...maan kissed her slowly starting from her shoulders moving up to her neck side ways...he was clutching her hairs and she was clutching his shirt...she wanted to stop feeling this pleasure mixed with unknown fear and he didnt want to stop today...

he left her hairs and rubbed her back using both his palms massaging them and continued his kissing creating a havoc with her senses...geet tiptoed on his feet and clutched his hairs moaning his name...


maan was so loving her moans ... it was his addiction to hear his name exactly in the same manner again and again...


maan pulled the sleeves away from another shoulder and dipped his head inside her neck kissing her the same way...he wanted to see her flushed face ..he again made her face him...she hold him tightly ...


next: 😉 (will update tomoro for sure)Thanks for reading...please click like and comment...thankuuu



part 23

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Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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Yeyy... I'm d first.

Nice one. Waiting 4 nxt one

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