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seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Loved it dear, plsss do PM the updtaes.

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

RECAP:-

everyone noticed this and annie whistled...she pulled maan's hand out which was in turn holding geet's

hand..maan didn't break the eye lock..just then annie screamed...bhabhi you won...which broke geet's eye lock...

and she turned to look towards her hand...in which there was that ring inher ring finger...she just turned her

head and looked towards maan..who winked at her...and and and obviously her cheeks got crimson red...

** PART 3**

Just then they heard parth crying...

Geet: oh god..parth uth gaya...
shayad usse bhuk lagi hai..
nakul kaka aap please parth ke liye dudh ki bottle tyar kr do...
tb tk mai parth ko sanbhalti hun...

Nakul: ji..mai abhi lekar aya...

and she just ran off to parth totally ignoring maan's presence

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Maan just stormed out of the house to the garden...
he ran a frustrating hand through his hair...

why has geet to make all things so damn difficult for him...
its so difficult for him to control his feelings...
parth is also his son...a part of his life...
but why does she gives him more importance...
i know she loves him like anything...
but now i am her husband and she has to understand that...
I can not take it anymore...
but then for me her happiness is everything...
I Maan Singh Khurrana had everything but not love...
my life always needed you...

TUM ZARURAT BAN GAYI HO MERI...

the very first time i saw you...idecided to make you mine...
aur aj tum mere itne kareeb ho...

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just as geet took parth in her arms...
he started smiling as he knew it was her mother who was holding her...
as he was missing her warmth...
geet smiled looking at her little angel...

i may not have given you birth...
or i may not have carried you in my womb...
but still you recognise my touch...i love you more than anything...
you are my everything...meri zindagi ho tum...
i never knew i can love soneone to this extent...

Parth gurgled... and geet kissed his cheek...😃

nakul kaka came with the bottle and handled it to geet..

geet took the bottle and started feeding him...
and made him to sleep...

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geet felt very tired due to all the rasms...
she started removing her jewellery lost in her own world...
she wasn't able to open the hook of her necklace...

just then maan entered the room...he was already quite frustrated...
but sight before him made him forget everything...
he saw her struggling with the hook...

automatically he proceeded towards her and very slowly removed all
her hair from her back..making his fingers linger a bit more on her
exposed back...

geet was in her own world when suddenly she felt cold fingers caressing
her back...a sudden shudder ran through her entire body...she looked up in the mirrr
with a jerk...

maan was gazing towards her through the mirror...not able to take his intense gaze, she lowered
her eyelashes...and snapped her hands back from the hook as maan's fingers touched hers...
she lowered her hands and held the pallu of her sari in her fists...

maan kept looking at her face through the mirror while opening the hook...
he lowered his face towards her nape till she could feel his breathing on her nape...
her breathing became a bit abrupt...just then maan uttered

ho gaya geet...

she looked upwards and saw a smirk on his face...she could't take it anymore
and ran toward washroom leaving maan with a amusing smile...

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she locked the door after entering the washroom...
and slid down... she kept her hand on her racing heart...

no one ever touched me like this...
mujhe kya ho gaya tha...how can i react like this...
he was only trying to help me...
geet tu bhi na badal rahi hai...
don;t forget about the promise you made to sam di...

with this she got up and changed into her night dress...

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P RECAP:
a glance into geet's past 😲..
or is someone coming from her past???😲😲

PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART2
NEXT UPDATE:PART 4

next part update...
do tell me how was it...
guys please press likes and do comments...
as it motivates me...please...😭😭

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Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

<font color="#6600FF">ok guys.. have given you all the link to my fb account...
so do join it...

i had some doubts like..how to upload a pic..as it makes it quite heavy
also how to design a banner for this ff???

how are you guys liking the storyline...because i am not receiving a good amount of response!!!</font>😭

Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

lovely update dear

see dear for posting image while u post comment see at the top emotion pic is there just left to that is insert image click there and paste the link of the pic and click ok ur pic would be posted

and f u dont have the pic link then first upload it in net and get the link and use it

hope this helps u😳

Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Amazing one. continue soon and plsss add me in your PM list and plsss PM the next update.

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Mdworld

@Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: abinash079

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lovely update dear

see dear for posting image while u post comment see at the top emotion pic is there just left to that is insert image click there and paste the link of the pic and click ok ur pic would be posted

and f u dont have the pic link then first upload it in net and get the link and use it

hope this helps u😳

Thanx..i l try and let u knw 😃