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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome parts dear...😃
loved it...continue soon...
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Originally posted by: Mdworld



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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update..maneet part awesome..
shuru shuru mein likes kam milegi..
when it proceeds n all start to read u will get more like s n cmnts..
never care for it..it will make ur hope down..
care for the readers who are expecting ur next part eagerly..
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Originally posted by: valli22

nice update..maneet part awesome..

shuru shuru mein likes kam milegi..

when it proceeds n all start to read u will get more like s n cmnts..

never care for it..it will make ur hope down..

care for the readers who are expecting ur next part eagerly..


Thanx...k wil keep in mind 😊
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RECAP:

she locked the door after entering the washroom...

and slid down... she kept her hand on her racing heart...

no one ever touched me like this...

mujhe kya ho gaya tha...how can i react like this...

he was only trying to help me...

geet tu bhi na badal rahi hai...

don;t forget about the promise you made to sam di...

with this she got up and changed into her night dress



**PART 4**

She changed into her night dress and came out
of the washroom with determined expressions...

as she came out maan was waiting for geet sitting
on the edge of bed...

How is she always able to surprise me...
How can she always look so beautiful...
even without makeup...
oh god am gonna lost again...


maan was brought back to his thoughts when he heard
geet softly calling him...

maan...

ha geet bolo...

wo um..um..wo...

geet we are married now...don't be hesitant...
whatever you can feel like...you can ask...


wo ap parth ke sath bed par so jaiye...
mai couch par so jaungi...

just after saying this, she started looking downwards...

maan smiled and held her chin...

meri taraf dekho geet...

she slowly moved her eyes upwards in his eyes
which were full of love...not able to look into those eyes
she fluttered her eyes and tried to remove that topic out of her
mind...

geet iss sab ki koi zarurat ni hai...

par aap aur mai ek sath kaise...
and she closed her eyes closely...

maan held her shoulders tightly..which made her to open her eyes...

geet tum bed par parth ke sath so jao...

ap couch par kaise soge(sleep)...
ap uspar pure hi ni aoge to...to ap comfortable ni hoge...


geeettt...phle meri puri baat suno...he gritted under his teeth..
i will sleep in the adjoining room...it has a door separating both the doors..

okkk...

and if you need anything...feel free to ask me...

ok...goodnight

goodnight geet...

and he went to his adjoining room...he took his clothes from his wardrobe
and went to get fresh...


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geet set her bed...gave a glance to parth and wished him goodnight
before sleeping...when all of a sudden her mobile rang..
she quickly picked it up as didn't want parth to wakeup...without seeing the caller id..

hello...whose on the line???

hello geet...

there was no response from geet's side...tears started falling from her
eyes...

geet..you there???

deevvv... she whispered and she started sobbing...

geet..i am back geet...
oh god sweetheart...i missed you so much...geet...geet kuch bolo na..
geet i thought you would also be missing me like hell...aur mera phone ate hi tum
mujhe to kuch bolne hi ni dogi...bs apna hi alap sunati rahogi but..
yahan to ulta hi ho raha hai ...mai hi bole ja raha hoon...oh god geet
tumne meri adaty bigad di hai...mujhe ni pta tha ki mai itna bol sakta
hun...geet..i love you...i missed you so much...mujhe maaf kr do...mai
tumhe pichle ek hafte se call ni kr paya...i so held up...by the way hows
parth???...wo to tumhe hi apni maa manta hoga...i know tum use mujhse bi
zyada pyar krti ho..tum use kissi ki kami mehsoos hone ni dogi...
but i am not jealous...oh geet i am so excited to meet parth...
jab sam di usse carry kr ri thi tum din bhar bs uski hi baate krti thi..
waise geet tum abhi bhi sam di ko miss krti hun..koi baat ni geet...
ab mai aa gaya hun na...mai tumhe itna pyar dunga ki mai tumhari sari
purani yaaden mitaa dunga..oh geet mujhe tumse kitni saari baaten krni h...

aisa krte hai..we will meet at our same adda...ccd at kamla...
aur haan mai tumhare saare gifts bhi laya hun..

geet... you there??? mai kb se bole ja raha hun..tum bhi
to kuch bolo?? geet kya hua???


geet started sobbing loudly...and she just switched off the
phone as she could not take it any more...


Dev tum kyun wapas aa gaye...i just started with my new life..
babajee ap mere liye sb kuch itna difficult kyun kr rahe ho...
she kept crying...and didn't know when she felt asleep...


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maan after having bath...got an important phone call..so
he went to the adjoining balcony and got busy with the call...
when he came back he saw her sleeping...

he smiled to himself...kamaal hai itni jaldi so gayi...

as he was about to move he noticed tha the lights were still
on...which he found wierd...he moved to her room to switch off the lights..
when he observed her tear stricken face...he thought about the reason..
when his eyes fell on her mobile that was switched off and kept aside...
he switched it on and..

suddenly 20 missed calls and 10 messages appeared...
he looked at the caller id and his anger flared up...
now he knew the reason behind her tears...

he deleted all the messages and calls and again switched off the mobile...
he clutched his fists tightly...

yeh dev kahan se wapas aa gaya???
hell..meri saari mehnat par paani phir jaega...

he looked at geet and caressed her head...
i know what am doing is wrong geet...
but yeh karna zaruri hai...
i can not let all my hardwork go in wain...
i love you like hell geet...
aur mai tumhe paane ke liye kissi bhi had(limit) tk ja sakta hun...
aur ab jb tum mere itne kareeb ho ...
mai tumhe apne se dur kaise jaane du...
aadat ho gayi hai mujhe tumhari geet...


with this he kissed her forehead...
and stormed out of the room after switching off the lights..

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PRECAP: WILL SHE GO TO MEET DEV OR NOT??
WHAT SAY???


Finally update...so how was it??
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Mdworld Corner
PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART 3
NEXT UPDATE:PART 5


Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aswsem update aah dev aa gaya hope she will not go to meet him
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update dear..
geet has started to feel for maan
dev is back to destroy..grr..😡

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