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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Definitely...thanx!

Originally posted by: mayapari

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="7" color="#993399">yu shd give us long updates ...😛</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="7" color="#993399">loved it😃</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="7" color="#993399">n hey congratz on first FF🤗</font>

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
interesting...
wanna know what Maan's POV...
cont soon...


Sure..thanx 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
v nice but v short yaar p;z giv us next update long plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
gud start yaar..
pls add me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Congrats for ur first FF..
Nice update...
Pls add me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26


PART2


As geet came out of the room,annie was waiting outside only...
chhaliye bhabhi...sab apka wait kr rahe hai...
even maan bhai has come..jaldi...


as they proceeded towards the main hall where everyone was waiting...
geet glanced at maan who seemed to be engrossed in some deep thoughts...
she thought may be missing sam di...
but little did she know that topic of his thought was geet herself...

Maan's POV

Geet i know you loved your sam di a lot..
you could have done anything for her...
this marriage is just for her promise...
you don't expect anything from this marriage...
but i won't let you compromise your life for her...
i will give you all the love you deserve...
parth is a part of both of our lives...
i know it might be difficult for you...
but not impossible...
i will give you both time and your space...
and yes i will keep loving you...
i have waited so long for you...
now a little more...


~~~End of his POV~~~~



He looked towards geet...God she looks so pretty...
her smile..her voice...
maan you can not loose now...you have to hide your feelings...

Annie:bhai..stop staring her...ab woh apki hi hai...
puri raat hai unhe dekhne ke liye...she winked

Both Maan and Geet got embarrassed...

savitri: enough of teasing for today...
so lets begin with the game...


Annie: very simple game...as you can see this vessel which is full of milk
and rose petals...so both of you have to put your one hand inside and find
the ring inside it...you will get three chances...the one who finds it maximum
no. of times wins the game...


Savitri:and it is believed the one who wins maximum no. of times always rules..
that is the other person always obeys or obliges to the person who wins...
so lets get started...

Annie put the ring inside..geet looked up towards maan who was sitting right
just in front of her..maan smiled...and both of them put their hands inside
the vessel...

in first round maan got the ring...and he won..⭐️
now began the second round...in which geet won..and she got excited...⭐️
now began the final round..both put put their hands with enthusiasm...maan
being maan singh khuranna had already found the ring..he pressed it under his
thumb and kept moving other part so that no one comes to know about it...he was
very happy as he knew he has already won the game.. .while geet was busy finding
the ring so, she didn't notice the smirk on maan;s face...while pretending..maan's
hand just touched her hand..geet got startled and as a result she snapped her hand back
but didn't pull it out of the vessel...as a reflex maan moved his hand forward and held
her hand,geet tried wriggling..but no use...geet looked towards maan who had a smirk on his face...😉
both had an eye lock...

everyone noticed this and annie whislted...😉 she pulled maan's hand out which was inturn holding geet's
hand..maan didn't break the eye lock..just then annie screamed...bhabhi you won...which broke geet's eye lock...
and she turned to look towards her hand...in which there was that ring inher ring finger...she just turned her
head and looked towards maan..who winked at her...and and and obviously her cheeks got crimson red...😳


(Ashi's POV:waise MSK wink kere toh blush to banta hai na boss...) 😉

PREVIOUS UPDAT
E:PART1
NEXT UPDATE:PART3

Peww..the longest till now...i gave you all a little glance at maan's character...
slow and steady wins the race..dheere dheere saare raaz khulenge...😆
and its just started...hahahaha😈
😈
and by the way my name is Aashi..i am from Delhi...


Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
hey aashi...
awesum part...
maan luvs geet a lot,den y did he married sam???????????
oho!lot of qns..!only u can give us answer..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome...
jaldi jaldi raaz kholo can't wait...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Hey buddy,
interesting n awesome ff.
Pls add me in 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

hey aashi...

awesum part...
maan luvs geet a lot,den y did he married sam???????????
oho!lot of qns..!only u can give us answer..😉


I will surely answer all your questions but dheere dheere 😆
Thanx 😊

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