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Monali

@monika1992

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

Very cute.

Waiting for the next one

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Geet ne toh MSK ko darahi diya😉 I wonder how Sam came in between!!!!

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Nikki...

@asmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

nice and cute update..😊

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Mdworld

@Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

you guys are lucky...
ihad to take off because off my bad health...
so was gettng bored...so thought of updating for you guys...
do let me know how was it!!!
and yes...100 likes on previous updates...so again a big applause for all of you!!!👏
but please guys...leave your comments also...
here s d next update...so enjoy...

RECAP:who told you mere pas time nai hoga!!!
tum call to krke dekho...
k...dekhlenge...she spoke and gave her no...
both exchanged there no...

it was then when geet had to store his no. in her mobile...she didn't find her mobile...
she saw it lying on her bag...
she then realised her current position...

she felt embarrased now...she lowered her lashes and tried getting up...
when maan held her tightly...
and spoke...abhi nai geet!!!...sternly...

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**PART 19**

ABHI NAI GEET...he spoke sternly...
geet looked towards him only to find a naughty glint in his eyes...

phle..you didn't answer me when m there...why did you bother your babajee??? he asked looking in her eyes...
hawww...ap abhi bhi ussi bat pr atke hai!!!
jaiye...i dn't feel like talking to you...
and chodiye mujhe...sir please...

nai chodunga!!!!...ab mai bhi dekhta hun tum kya krti ho???
sir chodiye na please...aise acha nai lagta!!!

maan started looking outside from the window in order to ignore her...
maan sir please...MSK sir are you listening???
mmaannn suniye na!!!

maan??? maan jerked his face towards her and raised his brows!!!
wo wo...galti se...ap sun nai rae the to...
to kya geet?? agar mai sun nai ra...to iska matlab you will call me maan!!!

nai aisa nai hai...it just happened by mistake!!!

geet...he chuckled...
you can call me maan...i was about to tell you this only...
as we are friends now...so need of formality...
got it!!! hm...
to which geet smiled...

car was stopped abruptly...
which made geet realise her position...she removed maan's hand...
got down from him before maan could react...
maan shook his head...

what happened???...maan asked the driver

sir don't know...you wait here...till then i will check the car!!!
and the driver got down to check the car...

about 15 minutes passed...then maan excused himself and got down to
see the matter himself...
after about 5 minutes...maan came to geet's side and signaled her to lower the window...
which she did quickly...

he told her it will take a bit long time so he asked her to come with him so that they can find
some other means to reach home...as it will again take time for one of his other car to come!!!
geet obliged...she picked her bag and got down from the car...
they were almost half the way to her home...

they started walking...
sir you won't be in a habit of walking this much??? geet spoke in order to break the silence...

matlab??? he asked giving an amused expressions...
wo...you always tend to travel in the car...
so thats why i thought...

that i won't be in a habit of walking...hun...
geet kuch bhi??? i daily go for morning walk...
sachhii...geet asked as widening her eyes..
or else how did i get the physique ...that you keep drooling on...

geet's moth fell open...
arrey geet muh to band krlo...he spoke winking at her...😉
just then geet felt something wet on her face...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZKOtuPEHsc8(do listen to it)

she touched her face...and felt water droplet there...
just then she again felt a water droplet...
she looked upwards towards the sky fluttering her eyes...

Arrey aankh se boondh gira koi, chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara, sehra ki pyaas buja zara
Umeed ko aag laga zara, sehra ki pyaas buja zara
Gan itna baras ke galne lagun main paani ke upar tarne lagun
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Ohooo.. behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Behenede ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara
Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara

maan who himself realised that it has started raining...ran towards the the bus stand that was abandoned at that time...
he started wiping himself...he shook his hair in order to dry them...
he called geet...geet idhar ajao...nai to bheeg jaogi...he spoke while he was drying himself...
when his eyes caught the sight before him...

Sharrt lagi hai marr jaane ki, jeena hai to pyaar mein
Deha kahin bhi ho mera, jaan rakhi hai yaar mein
Beh ja, beh ja, hai sagar ka kehna
Beh ja, beh ja, hai nadiya ko behena
Patte se tapakti boondh ki awaaz sunayi di thi
Nadiya mein tapak kar gum ho jayo

he saw her spreading her arms slowly feeling the water droplets...
and then herher feet of themselves started twirling around...
maan noticed a beautiful smile that was playing on her lips...

Beh gayo beh gayo, jo reh gayo reh gayo
Beh gayo beh gayo, jo reh gayo reh gayo
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Ohooo behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara
Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara

his feet of thier own started moving in her direction...
geet was busy playing with the water droplets...
maan also spread his arms in sink with herand thus glued his body with her...
geet who busy enjoying...felt maan's body behind her...
she turned her and hugged him...
maan moved his hand to hold her tightly to him...
when he felt that there was no one in his embrace...he snapped his eyes open
and saw himself standing under the shed of bus stand and she stood in the rain enjoying herself...

Mera pal pal ang ang bar diya, tune jaan pe junoon sa kar diya
Mera hai kya jo main haar doon, jaan teri hai tujhpe vaar doon
Doob gaye jo suna hai saare tere dere aate hain
Dil ke chulu mein bechaare dubkiyan ghote khaate hain

geet faced towards him...maan aiye na...bahut maza aa raha hai...
nai geet...am fine here...
maan please...
no geet... tumhari bhi tabiyat khrab ho jaegi...
but she didn't give up...maan singh khurrana ko baarishse dar lagta hai...
lolz...ye toh kal ki newpaper ki headlines honi chahiye!!! she laughed out loud...😆
which made maan angry...geeet...he gritted under his teeth...
mai tumhe nai chodunga!!!!and with this he ran towards her...

Beh ja, beh ja, chal tod kinare ko
Beh ja, beh ja, dhar le majdhare ko
Chingari udha ke raakh se ik boondh gira ke aankh se
Chalne ke ishaara kar gaya, kar gaya, kar gaya
Sab bhar gaya, bhar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya, sab bhar gaya bhar gaya

geet who busy laughing noticed an enraging maan running towards her...
she shot a quick prayer to her babajee and ran for her life...
as she started running...she felt being pulled with a sudden force...and dashed into maan's arms...
she was short of breath after running...she had her face hidden in his chest...
when maan lowered his face...and whispered in her ear...
NEVER CHALLENGE MSK!!!! to which geet looked upwards and both of them laughed to it...

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Ohooo behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara
Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara

as geet tried moving back...her foot slipped...
but before she could fall...maan pulled her in his embrace...
carefull geet...agar tumhe lagjati toh...he spoke while tightening his hold around her waist...
and pulling her more ino his hug...and crushing her into him...
as if to protect her from the entire world...

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhoo behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara
Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tar

when geet was about to reciprocate the hug...they heard a car's horn...
both of them came out of their hug...
geet car aa gai...chalo...
as geet started moving...he stopped her...

he removed his coat and made her wear that before asking her to settle in...
geet then noticed her wet form...her uniform was making her dress see through...she smiled at his caring nature and sat inside the car...

maan dropped geet home...
geet it was really nice being with you...
she smiled and bid him good bye...she proceeded towards her flat...
maan's car left only when he ensured that she had safely entered her home...
and he moved towards his home

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PRECAP: so its a dare...so maan jiju you will have to kiss your wife in front of all of us...
and yes on lips...meera winked at geet
geet was shocked...she was about to protest when maan closed the gap between them!!!

phew...longest till date...
so even i want long updates...if you guys want next update...
so how was it??? do let me now...
and join my fb account...
Mdworld corner
NEXT UPDATE:PART 20
PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART 18

Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago

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suba2011

@suba2011

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#435

AWESOME...waiting for more maaneet moments

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#436

r
amazing update dear
so maan and geet in rain that was good
and love it
continue soon dear plzzz
can u give another update today if ur free plzzz

Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago

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Yellowtullips

@Yellowtullips

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Nice update..

Liked the past...

Geet brought different side of maan in the past..

Waiting for the next update... Precap seems interesting..

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theresa

@tintinu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

awesome part ,just loved their masti😉

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Mdworld

@Mdworld

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: zohafarheen
r
amazing update dear
so maan and geet in rain that was good
and love it
continue soon dear plzzz
can u give another update today if ur free plzzz

SORRY...I GAVE A BIG ONE TO YOU...😆
I HAVE TO LEAVE NOW AND TAKE REST!!!...MY MOM S SCOLDING ME
THANX FOR LIKING DEAR!!!😃