ALL FOR YOU...MG FF...~~thread 1~~ - Page 2

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monika1992 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
congarts on ur new ff...
its really very intersting...
contiinue soon & add me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
congrats 4 ur new ff
nice story
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
PART 1


Removing the curtains...Rono Handa lovingly yet sternly...
geet beta utho!!! college ni jana kya?

Geet:
mumma...please 5 minutes!!...making a baby face
Rano:
Geet no more 5 minutes...its already half past 8...and you have
your first lecture by 9!!!
abhi tu yahan hai jo hum tere laad utha rahe hai...shadi ke bat no one
would pamper you...


please click on the link for better feel...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRGr8PfW3vU

Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge ' (3)

getting up from bed,she held her arms around her mom and sang...

Ab Koi Khush Ho Ya Ho Khafa
Hum Nahin Badleinge Apni Ada
Samjhe Na Samjhe Koi Hum Yahi Kaheinge
Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge ' (2)

she enacted of flying...while Rano only laughed at her daughter's antics...


Hum Dil Ki Shahzadi Hai, Marzi Ki Mallika'(2)
Sar Pe Aanchal Kyun Rakhe
Dhalkaa To Dhalkaa
Ab Koi Khush Ho Ya Koi Roothe
Is Baat Par Chahe Har Baat Toote
Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge' (2)

she went to bathroom to bath...she sang while flying the bubbles...

Humein Shokh Mehandi Ka Na Shahnai Ka Hai'(2)
Humare Liye To Apna Ghar Hi Bhala Hai
Sunta Agar Ho To Sun Le Kaazi
Lagtaa Nahin Kabhi Hum Honge Razi

she started drying her hair...

Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge'(2)
Ab Koi Khush Ho ' Vaise Raheinge


while having breakfast...
Geet:
if someone fells in love with me...he will change for me and not me!!!
and mairrage..not before i am independent!!!

Rano:
let's see...you don't know the power of love!!!you dont know what destiny has in store for you!!!

Geet:
muummmaaa!!!...ok bye i am geeting late!!!


***Present*****

Geet was brought back by a sudden knock on the door!!!


savitri:
Geet beta if you are ready...please come fast...
we all are waiting for you!!!


Geet:
Jee auntijee!!!

geet turned and thought
how true her mother was?
you never know what is in store for you???
now no one was important then parth for her!!!

she for last time glanced at sleeping parth and left the room!!!

PRECAP;
as her hand touched his...she snapped back!!!



SORRY...FOR late
UPDATING...HAVE VERY TIGHT
SCHEDULE...DO PRESS LIKES AND COMMENTS!!!

NEXT UPDATE
: PART2

Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
nice start dear..
looking forward for more..
gud job..
no critics..
move on forward penning down ur thoughts..👏⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
nice start dear...
bt its very short part...
next time try to make some large plz...
i loved it ... continue soon
will be waiting 4r next part...
yaar iam unable to hit my like button its nt working dear... plz forgive me dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
really interesting to read..
a good start dear...👏
waiting for many more updates...😊
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Awsum!
Congrtzz for the new ff.
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
congrats...
CS and prologue
interesting...
have sent the buddy invite...
pm me...
spvd thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
part 1
interesting...
wanna know what Maan's POV...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
yu shd give us long updates ...😛
loved it😃
n hey congratz on first FF🤗

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