Expression of love:Gurti OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Expression of love

I wrote this for Gurti FC specially 4 Kash-Maneet.To get direct comments from my readers i'm sending it here


Those who love Aamir-Kajol plz read my short SS Love fate destiny on them.There r only 4 parts.I just posted d part 1.plz read & comment.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2728834



Today is Drashti's birthday.Drashti wore a red saree and matching jewellery for the birthday party.She looked at the mirror.
Her face was gloomy.
"I miss Gurmeet.If he was here it would have been so nice.But he won't be able to come today as he has some important work.So sad".
Surprisingly she saw Gurmeet's reflection on the mirror.
She turned back.
"Gurmeet!Am i dreaming?"
He smiled.
"No.I'm here to make your birthday special.I wanted to make my visit a surprise.That's why i lied to you that i won't be able to be a part of your birthday celebration".
She smiled.
"You don't know how much happiness you gave me by coming here today".
His eyes rolled at her.
They both felt a romantic breeze.
His lips moved only to admire her beauty,"Drashti...you look very beautiful.Gorgeous".
She blushed.
"Drashti...don't you want my birthday present?"
She was eager to see his birthday gift.
He held her hands and took her down.He held her hand as if she was his wife.

She saw some people play beautiful instrumental music.
She was surprised.
"Gurmeet..you are lovely.You made this evening musical".
He said,"This is the rhythm of love".
She blushed.
He plays a song from the movie 'Kaalia'.
Drashti sees many pairs dancing to the song.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pmdvk0fxVSU

It was a beautiful sight.
"This is another surprise for you Drashti.You love dance.Right?"
Gurmeet said.
"You are the best",she said.
Gurmeet did not wait to lead her to the dance floor to dance with him.
"Hey Hey.. Ho.. Ho..{Gurmeet did not wait to lead her to the dance floor to dance with him cheerfully}
Ho Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne Duniya Ko Dikha Denge
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge Andaaz Sikha Denge
Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne Duniya Ko Dikha Denge
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge Andaaz Sikha Denge.."
While the song was going on and he was dancing with her his mind spoke to her silently,
"When you are with me i feel that you are my world.If you are with me,I can even face death with a smile".

He played guitar in between to make her feel his heart beats.
She spoke to him silently,
"Gurmeet...i know what this guitar signifies.It is giving birth to music to caress me.It is pouring your love on me.I can understand how much your heart is longing to be with me".
"Maana Ki Andheron Ke Gehre Hain Bahut Saaye
Are Maana Ki Andheron Ke Gehre Hain Bahut Saaye
Par Gum Hai Yahan Kisko Aati Hai To Raat Aaye
Hum Raat Ke Seene Mein Ek Shama Jalah Denge.."
His heart spoke to her,
"You don't have to get scared of darkness.Infact you should fall in love with darkness.Because during darkness you can see a shadow.I'm your shadow and i will always follow you to shower love upon you".
"Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne La La..Duniya Ko Dikha Denge La La..
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge La La..Andaaz Sikha Denge..


Drashti got lost in her own dreams about Gurmeet.

"Hum To Hai Dilwale Khanjar Se Nahi Marte
Are Hum To Hai Dilwale{He cupped her face in his arms}
La La.. Khanjar Se Nahin Marte La La..{Her heart jumped with romantic joy}
Hum Zulfon Ke Qaidi Hai Sooli Se Nahi Darte
Sooli Ko Bhi Zulfon Ki Zanjeer Banaa Denge{He touched her arms romantically}

She responded internally,
"Gurmeet..Your soft touch is sensuous enough to soothe me".
She rests herself on his body and enjoys him completely without taking her eyes off him.


"Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne La La.. Duniya Ko Dikha Denge La La..
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge La La..) Andaaz Sikha Denge.."{He danced with her putting his heart and soul into it}.

"Aye Ahl-E-Jahaan Tumko Nafrat Ki Hai Bimaari
Aye Ahl-E-Jahaan Tumko La La..Nafrat Ki Hai Bimaari La La..
{Again he played his guitar making her feel that her Prince Charming is right in front of her}.
She thought,
"Gurmeet..i feel that you are playing your guitar to propose to me.Its rhythm says 'I love you' to me".
Gurmeet's heart spoke to her,
"Drashti..please understand what i mean by this music.I'm expressing my love through music.My dance movements are confessing my love to you.Even if you hate me i will wipe your hatred with my musical love".

"Bhadkaaya Karo Shole Phenka Karo Chingari
Hum Pyar Ki Shabnam Se Har Aag Bujha Denge.."
{He made her put her arms on his shoulders and put his arms in her curvy waist and continued dancing}.
"Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne La La.. Duniya Ko Dikha Denge La La..
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge La La.. Andaaz Sikha Denge.."
His heart tells her,
"When you are with me i forget the world where i live.For me you are my only world.I feel that I am free from death when you are with me".

He turns her around completely.This dance movement was mesmerizing.
"Haan Tum Saath Ho Jab Apne Duniya Ko Dikha Denge
Hum Maut Ko Jee Lenge Andaaz Sikha Denge".
{Her fingers went through his face and held his neck softly with the power of romance to show how much she loved him}.
Her heart spoke to him,
"I love you so much that I can even die in your arms".
Her emotions burst out.She could not control her feelings anymore.
She expressed her love,"I love you".
He replied,"This is what i was waiting to hear from you.I love you too".
She blushed,"I was also waiting to hear these magical words from you".
They shared a romantic eye lock.

The end

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsem love it please start a ff or ss on maneet
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awesome...beautiful...
short n sweet...
thank u very much fr everything...
waiting fr more...

gurti/maaneet...unka pyar...subah ka pehli kiran k jaise mithi hai...unka pyar mano jaise hawan ka jhonka ho jo tumhe mehsoos karata hai ki koi tumhare liye hai...pyar ka ehsaas dilata hai...unko dekhke pyar karneka dil karta hai...pyar pe bhadosa karne ka mann karta hai...its really beautiful...

hats off to u...

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awesome love it that was so cute thanks for the pm
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Awesome OS
This is something that my heart secretly desires to happen in reality
loved it
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LOved it dear ...awesomely romantic which completely fits our GurTi...
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Awesome OS
Thanks 4 The PM
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Hiii
Awesome os
Loved it
Maaneet sooo cute
Can't wait 4 more os's
Thanks 4 da pm
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awesome awesome update
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It was so beautiful dear ..loved it ..thanks

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