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Okay.. First of all me scolding u 2... U dumbo sexo... U stupid bevkoof... Ullu... Y didnt u eva sent PMs for dis one... Shud I call u crazy or ignorant of ur own talent... Babaji... Is ladki ka kuch karna schhi me... Apne aap ko underrestimate krna to koi isse seekhe... By God.. Khud ko underrestimate krne me to masters nhi PhD haasil kr rkhi hai...
Acha enuf of scolding...
Ab OS ki baat karte hain...
Awsum..amazin..wonderful..lovely..beautiful..outstanding...!!!!
Ohh k.. Aur adjectives abhi dimag me ni aa rhe.. 😆
D character of Geet... Its sooo fresh...
I luvd d way u showed hw her frnz called her Pagal bt stil it ws she being hrslf n she did drag ol of dem to d beach in december... Heehhehe...
Me 2 luv winters... 😆
Okay... I luvd d part whr u described her emotions wen she cudnt see any of her frnz n she got panicked... Dat part ws juz beautifully described rlly... 👏
Umm... Cnt believe.. She actually went into d water even though she didnt knw hw to swim jz bcz she ws scared... 😲 babaji... Ye ladki to pkka crazy h... Baap re...
Geet thought no prince charming wud cum 2 save her.. But nahi nahi Geet bete... Babaji hs set ur prince charming... Hheheheh...
Yep... Her prince charming came to save her...
Ohh... Sexo... Sachhi me... U say ur nt gud at describin... Girl.. R u kiddin me... Cz rly... U took my breath away wid d description u gave of Maan's sexiness... Baap re... Along wd Geet.. Even me hd my breath hitched... I ws sooo dreaming bout him wd my eyes open... 😍
D way he carried her n moved out.. Kissed her to get her life back.. Omg... Magical... 😳
Umm... But y is Maan angrily lukin at her...
Baba... Samajh ni aaya... 😕
Umm... I luvd d way... Geet kept gaping at Maan... Despite d fact dat her frnz wer tokin to her... Hehehe... 😆
Dunia jaae bhaad me... M to watchin my Greek God... Hhehehe... 😆
Ohh my my.. Maan walkin towards Geet... But in anger... 😕
Sahi kaha tha.. Postin a cliff hanger...
Ab to jldi nxt part dena hoga Sexo... Othrwys.. Me gonna chew ur brain... 🤣 😛
N fir i'l keep pestering u to update... Hehhehe...
Islie .. Do u think u hv an option...???
Lemme answer dat... NO... U'l hv 2 update nxt part jldi se... Hehhehe... 😆
Luv ya Sexo... ❤️
Beautifully written .. Trust me..
N dnt u dare tok bad bout ur work... Cz m luvin it...!!!!! 😃
Muuuaaahhhzzz Sexo...!!!!
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