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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
all the updates are are amazing.👏
read it again from chapter 1. was out of touch for a while.
maan deserves to suffer more, the way he has hurted geet.
geet should not give in easily. he should work really hard.
tammy and mann - so cute and lovely.
geet and shiv's relationship is so beautiful, ek aisa rishta jisse kisi naam ki zaroorat nahi hai.
waiting eagerly for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 67 -

awesome update dear

so Geet had landed in India n is eager to meet the MD of the company n want to return back to kids n rudra but nothing is going as per GEET plan

Maaneet come face - face now waiting for the confrontation

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 68 -

nice update

Geet is feeling suffocated in the same farmhouse where their love had blossomed once

liked the way u portrayed their confrontation

Both of them are affected by each other presence but the mistake of past are not letting them to move forward

Maan had to work hard in order to bring out his old Mitti back

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 69

superb update dear

Maan blackmailed Geet from stopping her to move out from Farmhouse

Maan is not aware of their kids n Geet dont want maan to know about them

finally Geet was able to speak with Rudra and also came to know how are the kids with rudra

awww Maan had a portrait of his imagination of two cuties but who will tell him tht he is the father of two angels and who are full of attitude n naughtiness

waiting for next part

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago



Thanks to everyone for liking this story.


Part 70



Geet's eyes opened with the music which was coming from somewhere in the house but where that she doesn't know yet. Her eyes went on the clock, it's eleven in the morning and she was just working on her laptop when the music stirred her from the deep thoughts. She stood up in front of the French window looking at the backyard ground and the deep far end which is only green and greenery. The music grows as a sweet hum making her remember every past she hated now. Her eyes lids fell heavy but tear refused to shed remembering her every scare. Few days before she was happy in her own world. A yr before they were having fun with her family, rudra and angels and she supposed she doesn't need anything more, but suddenly His appearance had stirred a need, a hollow in her. She tried to stop the music which was waking the pain inside again by putting her palm on her ear but it was growing strong like someone deliberately flowing all pain in the music but somewhere it was sweet like a memory lane was visualizing by someone in the music.


Just then it hit her, her heart shuddered remembering the music she had created. It was for rudra. She had composed the music and the only person knew about it is MAAN. She had worked day night on it to give a present to Rudra on his birthday but it delayed so Maan had helped her to compose it and they thought to give it on his engagement or any other occasion. So many occasion took place that she had forgotten about the music which Maan kept save to himself promising they will give him together. She was so happy to see finally Maan excepting Rudra not as brother so what at least as friend. But what was an irony his love was weaker in front of his hatred and accusation. But why he kept that safe till now? When he had so many uncertainties on their relation then why he still remembers the music?


Her legs were shaking still her heart lead the path when mind refused to go. Her knuckles where white as she was clutching her hand so tight that her nail dug her skin furiously. Still She walked in a trance just following the music and her heart. Soon they lead her to the alone corridor and next to a big room which was parted by only few curtains. White curtain and white wall she noticed. She wanted to stop there and returned to her place, her shell but couldn't as the music turn in a melodious canvas.



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Geet: What r u doing maan, it's for Piano and u r trying it on Guitar? Her pouting face made him smirk. He extends his hand to say her come close to him but she was already annoyed. She tried to shove his hand but he grab her palm then pulls her closerer. He made her sit on his lap facing her back to his chest and nuzzling close to her neck. She bites her lips to control the tickling feeling. Maan She called him softly.

Maan: hmm, u always distracts me with ur sweet scent, u know that?


Geet smiles: accha?


He kissed her neck then her shoulder: hmmm.


Geet: Maan please be serious na. I want to complete this fast.

Maan: his birthday is next yr geet.


Geet: huh so what, We can give it on his and maahi's engagement or better marriage. He shook his head on her childishness and then agreed.

Maan: ok baba thik hain, but relax for now.


Geet: I m stuck in this point maan, I don't know what to write now. He smiles and kissed her cheek.


Maan: follow the heart, have patience and try to listen it. He held her hand and played little string and then she smiles, next both started together to make a tune for Rudra.


*End*



She jerked up from her memory when He stood in front of her after ending the music. She looked at the blank eyes; He is definitely awestruck to see her, but why? Didn't he want to make her memorize this music? Doesn't he wanted her to visualize each pain that brought by this tune? She turned her back towards him and started walking away from him till his voice stopped her.


Maan: get ready we need to go somewhere. She stood numb hearing his hard and clear voice. What she thought? He will shiver to see her or stutter to see her reaction to the tune. She is so wrong always to judge him. He doesn't feel any sorry but he enjoys stirring the painful emotion in her which she wants to erase for eternity. She can't believe till now which no one could do this man had done less than few hours. He made her cry after so many yrs. He made those emotions come on her face after so many yrs, he made her come towards him in the music which she thought can no other person do in this eternity.


She took some deep breath concealing the emotion back in her and turned to face him with same coldness and hatred.


Geet: I don't think there is any clause in that contract that whatever u will say I will do on one foot. So close to wing of dream and let me do my work.


Maan smiles coming close to her: I think U should stop pretending it does affect u geet. You and I very well knew how it works on us. U can't stop ur heart to beat Mithi.


Geet glared him: Mr Khurana, stop assuming things which can never happen. Neither u can awake any dead feeling nor I m interested in your any feelings. It will be better if u can come to straight point, what do u want from me?


Maan sighed: U r still so stubborn.


Geet: Thank u for the complement. Now can we get to the work back?


Maan: As u wish. If u still remember the contract says u have to go wherever I want for business purpose and this is business. We are going to office just to discuss further negotiation.


Geet: can I go after that? Umm I mean in another place.


Maan: NO. he said blankly looking at her face, she greeted her teeth and he made an amusing face.


Geet: then what is the need to go office. We can discuss the project here. He smirks at her words and leaned towards her, she took 2 steps back where her back touched the cold wall and next he trapped her placing the warm figure on her still not touching it.


Maan: I m better then fine to have u here in the house geet and close to me. She looked other ways not want to meet the teasing gaze, she felt hatred oozing out her vein for this man now. He smiles slyly pulling her chin towards him. But I thought u don't want business with pleasure and this place only make it hard for me.

Geet pushed his hand and his body from her, he chuckle at her futile attempt them left her making a good gap between then still not leaving her fully.


Geet: Don't u dare to touch me with ur filthy hand Mr Khurana, u will regret it next time.


Maan: really? He said rather amusing way.


Geet: I feel disgusted to take the air where u took ur breath. Just remember one thing, u can make me helpless but u can't break me this time Maan, because this time the old geet had kill the love in her and u will only see poison in GR so better to make a distance between us or it will kill u.


Maan: and what if I say I m ready to take the sweet poison just to hold u close to me for a little while.


Geet: I hate these cheesy lines. He sighed and abruptly left her, it make her little taken a back, maybe she was expecting a little more which her brain refused fervently.


Maan stopped walking but didn't turn to face her: Get ready we need to leave fast. She greeted her teeth but couldn't say a word because somewhere she too wanted to get out of this place which has so many good memories that now hold pain her.



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He pressed his back on the door slowly sliding on the floor, a smile tugged his lips and when he opened his eyes only her face flashed in front of him. But this time it was a contrast between her happiness and this numbness. He remember the first time he met her on those Hills, she was so happy and then in collage. Her every smile always used to stir some ticklish feeling in him that he never accepted in front of anyone but today he couldn't suppress it. On top of that Her words which was straight needle in his heart still he was true on his words. He truly wanted to take all her poison thinking it as sweet as she was always, just to bring his old geet back to life. But the moment he met her eyes only blankness and dark emotion was there. He couldn't see the numb geet anymore, not in his life anymore. If it will take his life to bring his Mithi he is ready for it. He will give his every happiness for it, but whom he is joking He doesn't have any happiness to give her, but he need to woke up the emotion before it get too late.


He didn't plan the event to take place; it's his routine to play the piano just to get the essence of geet around him. The moment she left him he was empty and nothing had made the calmness in him for so long and then he found the piece of paper which has her composition, and from then he started play the song every morning or night some time hours just to make his heart a little peaceful. Today also he was following his daily routine when He felt her standing close to him. Only he knew how he had controlled himself to grab her and hug her querulously. He thought maybe she had forgotten their moment but whom he was kidding he had seen every emotion playing on her face when she recalled their moment. It tore him to see the pain but soon she masked it with her coldness and he was forced to change his tone. Though he was dying but he has to control his feelings if he want to give her everything she lost in these yrs.

He looked at the picture of her, the large portrait which has her large smile and shy eyes, pink cheeks and mischievous smile, a small smile tugged his lips looking at the picture. It always gives him strength. A determination spread on his face thinking his next move, he knew it will be tough but he have to work on it. Just then his cell rang breaking his revere. The caller ID actually made him confuse and delight together. Why he will call him that too in this hour? But today is special day for him as well maybe that's why.


Maan: Hello Karan.


Karan: R u coming to KM?


Maan: hmm. Are u there?


Karan: no, erm, umm wo actually I wanted to talk to u first.


Maan: from when u started stuttering Karan. He let out a small chuckle making him irritate further.


Karan: humor huh, well I m not in a mood. I am nervous.


Maan chuckle further: Why u r nervous, don't tell me u r making arrangement to propose Her. There was a deep silence after it and it forced maan to sense the seriousness. His smile vanished and took a curve of tension. Don't tell me.

Karan; well, umm. Yeah I, I was thinking that only.


Maan: you r telling me u are making arrangements to propose my sister. Are you out of your mind. How can u?


Karan: Shut the hell up, I m already nervous and Neha will kill me if I went wrong anywhere, it's just started to take a shape in our relationship and I don't want to lose her again.


Maan was silent for a moment, he knew it's the only time which will help him and he want to see his baby sister happy.


Karan: u know she will not say no after this day, whatever u r doing it will help us and I m grateful to u.


Maan sighed: I owe u this karan, without Your help I couldn't do anything.

Karan: ok, can u do me a favor for that?


Maan: anything.


Karan: Don't tell misthy that I Helped u in anything.


Maan chuckle: Okay, but Karan…. Thanks for everything.

Karan: I m not doing this for u but for her and neha. Geet should be here long back but it took me time to realize. When I got to know the company belongs to u I was literally mad but after meeting u I know it's time to bring back mishty in everyone's life.


Maan: ok let cut it and come fast to KM


Karan: yeah first go with geet to meet her, she will be so happy to see her.

Maan smiles and nodded then cut the call.


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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh me first

nice dear😊

karan going to propose neha👏

karan helps maan⭐️
Edited by dhakdhak22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was Awesome update !! Loved it very much

loved da BG score ...ufff i refresh da pg so many time only to heared that music😉😆

start was emoyinal n painfull..feeling bad for Maaneet😔
Flashback scene was superb l...da way maaneet make tune for Rudra..awww so beautiful😛

Maan ws in pain n guilt seeing numbness in his Mithi
hope he ll succes to bring back his Mithi

oh woww!! karan gonna propose neha😳..hahah n he take her brother Maans help 😆 n he also help Maan..i love him for this 😛

waiting for next...continue super soon
Thanks for the update n PM😊


Edited by Ru_21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The music is beautiful dear!👏

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