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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update.
This journey of maaneet relationship is really awesome. Iit is proper mixture of all the emotion s. Thanks for giving the beautiful ff.
Waiting for epilogue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...
loved it...
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum!!! finally the journey ended will wait for the epi dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates..loved it..very well wriiten..waiting for the epilogue..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, brilliant nice parts
loved them
uff iye geet bhi na
aur maan ka gussa
but finally all fine
loved it
geet is pregnant

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Posted: 13 years ago
read your whole ff in a go and have to say that its a wounderful ff... u have narrated each incident so nicely, it was just like a movie going on in front of my eyes... ur maans gussa is so much yaar... geet pe gussa aaya aur ek mahine ka punishment... oooppsss... i loved geet and vickys relationship here... now waiting for the epilogue... will u pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
The whole ff was a nice read =)
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EPILOGUE

After 4 years

Maan was busy in his laptop doing his work while sitting on their extra large bed while Geet was lying beside him playing with Muskaan their daughter, their symbol of love.
Muskaan: Dada..
Maan: Hmmm.
Muskaan: Dada.. meri baat suna na..
Maan: hmmm.
Muskaan: Mumma Dada verwwwy vewwwy bad.
Geet: Haan shone Dada na very very bad. Meri shone beti ki baat nahi sun raha hain na so hum khatti dada se.
Muskaan: Haan mumma me too khatti. Dada me not talking to you.
Maan had almost finished he work so he closed his laptop and tool Muskaan in his lap and placed kiss on her soft chubby cheeks.
Maan: oye mera shone beta Dada se khatti. Aur mumma this is not fair, kit um muskaan ka saath de rahi ho aur dada se khatti ho.
Muskaan: Dada, mumma loves muskaan verrry much. Not like dada.
Maan: Hmm. So dada don't love Muskaan na. ok than Dada will love the small babies more than muskaan ok mumma.
Hearing this muskaan made a sad face and quickly went to Geet almost sitting on her huge pregnant belly.
Maan: Muskaan sambhal ke. Mumma par aise nahi baithe beta. Choti babies ko lag jayengi na.
Muskaan: sorry dada. Sorry mumma. Sorry babies and she kissed Geet's belly.
Geet: aa ja mera shona beta. Dada say sorry to shona first.
Maan: ok sorry. Now say.
Muskaan: dada babies kab aayenge. Ab tho mumma ka tummy bhi big hain na, so babies kab aayenge. Mujhe unke saath khelna hain.
Maan: shone babies na aur kuch din mein aayenge. Par aap na unke saath nahi khel sakthi.
Muskaan: par kyu.
Maan: kyu ki babies bahut chote hoge. Jab who badi honge na tab aap unke saath khel sakthi hain. tab tak babies mumma ke saath rahege.
Muskaan: nahi mumma ke saath hum rahenge babies nahi. mumma loves me more not babies.
Geet: haan mera shone, mumma loves u more and more. Maan shone mere saatha rahegi aur babies aapke saath ok.
Maan: ok mumma.
Geet: Shona now go and play with Sneha ( Vicky and Pari's two years daughter) and Anisha ( Dev and Meera's three years daughter).
Maan: haan shona go and play with them and let mumma rest beta.
Muskaan: ok dada. Ok mumma.
Muskaan kisses both of them and almost jumps from the bed and trips down falling when Geet panics and screams her name. Maan instantly picks Muskaan ups and checks her first.
Maan: shona aapko lagi tho nahi na.u r fine na beta.
muskaan: nahi dada nahi lagi. Main tho carpet pe giri na so kaise lagthi…
Maan and Muskaan turns to see geet who was all the way crying and trying to get up and which made her to hit back on bed.
Maan: Geet yeh tum kya kar rahi ho. Gir jauongi Geet.
Geet ( crying): Maan muskaan. Muskaan Maan.
Maan brings muskaan to geet and gives her while geet checks her all over again and kisses her whole face.
Maan: Geet shona theek hain geet.
Geet: Shona aap theek hain na. aapko kahi lagi tho nahi.
Muskaan: nahi lagi mumma aur plzzz app cry mat karo na babies bhi cry karenge.
Geet: shona aap dekh ke nahi jaa sakthi kya. Kitni baar kaha hain aapse.
Maan: Geet shant ho jao. Dekho Muskaan ko kuch nahi hua hain.
Geet: agar kuch hota tho Maan. Agar hum muskaan ko kho dete tho.
Maan: Geet enough ek baar kaha na Muskaan ko kuch nahi hua hain. dekho woh bilkul theek hain.
Muskaan: Haan mumma Muskaan theek hain. Muskaan Maan Singh Khuranna ko kuch nahi hua mumma.
Everyone came to their room hearing Geet's scream and were shocked to see Geet crying badly and hugging Muskaan. Maan told them wat had happened and asked Pari to take Muskaan out. After all left Maan hugged Geet making her to calm down and later said.
Maan: Geet, muskaan ko kuch nahi hoga Geet.
Geet: Maan, main muskaan ke bina mar jaungi Maan. agar ushe kuch hua tho. Agar ush din agar muskaan hume chod ke chali jaathi tho.

FLASHBACK

Everyone in Khuranna and Handa family were happy to know about Geet's pregnancy. They did not allow Geet to take any stress and all had literally warned Maan to control his anger. Maan had asked sorry for is behavior to everyone and atlast he was granted it. Dev finally had gained their trust and everyone was happy tat Meera had finally got wat she deserved. Arjun and Annie were blessed with a cute daughter and Prem and Heer with a son. So all very in very happy mood but poor Vicky was all sad. He could not voice out his feelings to get married to Pari as he knew tat Geet needed rest as doctor had told them tat she was too weak and would not be able to handle any stress. So he somehow kept quite. But Geet had once listened to to his and Pari's talks and felt bad tat for her they were delaying their marriage. She knew tat Vicky's and Pari's relation was on a verge to break due to her and later Pari went to US so tat she could study further literally could think over her relation again but their love was to strong and they could not part their ways. But now when everything was right she could not let them suffer again coz of her.

Geet talked to everyone and made them to agree for the wedding. Though they agreed for it but warned Geet from doing any work. The marriage was fixed and it was a grand affair for both the families. Pari was welcomed with all love and tradition in Khuranna family. The happiness of the family grew to such extent and their days seem to go by with never ending happiness unaware about the storm to come.
Geet was almost six months pregnant now and she had started showing her tummy. All took great care of her. she was not allowed to do any work nor to move from her bed but she was Geet. one day Geet was coming down the stairs while talking to Maan on phone and she was so engrossed in her talk tat she did not even see down and when she lost her balance and fell down from the stairs. She was instantly taken to the hospital where her state was declared as critical. The doctors had informed tat they could only save the mother. Everyone was broken by hearing this and Maan was not even his senses. He could not let anything happen to Geet nor the baby as he knew tat Geet would die without the baby. He had warned the doctor to anything but save both his geet and his child. At last after struggling a lot the doctors were succeeded but had warned them tat this pregnancy was very complicated as due to her fall. As suggested by the doctors Geet was confined for total bed rest. They had even shifted their room down stairs and Geet was under strict observation. Maan had literally blasted everyone at home and asked them tat if they fail this time then he wont forgive anyone. ever since the incident Geet was under constant fear.

Flashback ends.

Maan: Geet dekho muskaan ko kuch nahi hua na. woh ek accident tha Geet. kab tak ush darr mein jeethe rahogi tum.
Geet: kya karu Maan, darr lagtha hain. ek baar muskaan ko khone se reh juke hain hum par agar ushe kuch hua tho.
Maan: Geet muskaan ko kuch nahi hoga. Hum hain na dono. Aur wise bhi tum agar itna roti rahogi tho humare jo do bache tumare andar hain woh rothlu ban jayenge tumari tarah.
Geet: Haan pata hain kaun rothlu hain. isliye tho jab bhi shona ko sardi bhi hoti hain tho aap pure Mansion ko sir pe utha dete ho. Yaad hain na aapko.
Maan: Haan tho kya karu aakhir MSK ki beti hain. ushe kaise kuch hone du. Aur ab na tum yeh rona dhona bandh karo warna main sach keh raha hoon Geet main apna wada bhool jaunga.
Geet: no Maan, aap aisa nahi kar sakthe. Aur nahi. yeh do last hain aur dekho aapne mujhse wada kiya tha ki only two kids but babaji ne tho teen diye hain na so aur nahi.
Maan: woh tho hum baad mein dekhege Geet. Pehle yeh dono ko tho aane do aur waise bhi mujhe do bte aur do beti chahiye so no arguments on it.
Geet: Maan maine kaha hain aur nahi matlab nahi. so you fulfill all ur dreams with ur three kids ok.

After 6 years.

Geet: shona beta, dekho agar tumne nahi bataya ki dhruv, dia aur garv kaha hain tho aapki mumma aapse baat nahi karegi. ( dhruv and dia are twins aged 4 and garv their youngest son aged 2 years)
Muskaan: Dada dekho mumma kya keh rahi hain.
Maan: Geet dekho tum na meri shona par shout mat karo. Agar tumare bache tumhe nahi milte tho ismien shona ki kya galati hain
Geet: har sirf mere akele ke bache hain. aapke nahi na isliye tho char char bache hain aapke.
Muskaan: mumma aap phir shuru hui.
Maan: Haan shona dekho na tumari mumma kya kya kehthi hain.
Geet: Haan milo aap sab ek saath aur mujhe bahar kardo. Dekho woh teeno badmaash bhi mujhe har waqt pareshan karthe rehthe hain. kabse yeh dhood leke ghoom rahi hoon par nahi. aakhir MSK ke bache jo hain. mazal hain ki meri baat maan le.
Muskaan: mumma aap ro kyu rahi hain. plz mumma don't cry na.
Geet: kyu na. aap sab ko mujhe pareshan karne mein maza aata hain na. tum bhi tumare dada ke side chali gayi mujhe akela chod kar. Chalo koi baat nahi mujhe samaj aaya ki mujhse koi pyar nahi kartha. Chalo tum log karo main jaathi hoon.

Geet goes to her room and sleeps.

Maan: dhruv, dia and garv yaha aao.
Dhruv: dada mom kaha hain. dada aap mom se kahiye na ki hume milk nahi peena hain.
Dia: ha dada plzzz.
Garv: dada… no… milky milky..
Maan: bas.. drink this milk first. Muskaan get them to our room after they finish the milk.
Maan leaves them and Muskaan makes all three to have their milk while she has hers.

Maan: mishty.. plzz aisa mat karo na. dekho tum aise roti rahi tho, humara main phir se baby ki maang karunga.

Geet: haan aap na sirf mujhe blackmail kar sakthe hain. eh nahi dekh paate ki inh dino main bahut taq jaathi hoon. Aakhir aapka yeh baby mujhe har waqt pareshgan karthi hain aur kich karthi hain. aapko kya pata aake yeh shaitan bache mujhe kitna tang karthe hain.
Maan: nahi mishty, I know sweetheart. But kya karu yeh baby unexpected tha na. tum jaanthi thi na ki humne precautions liye the par.. but you I love you more when u are pregnant.
Geet: aur waise tho aap mujhse pyar nahi karthe.
Maan: nahi tho maine kab kaha . if u want than I can show u now only.
Maan leans forward to kiss her when they heard their children shouting for them.
Muskaan: mumma m sorry. Sab log mumma seay sorry kaho.
Dhruv: sorry mom.
Dia: sorry mumma.
Garv: sowwwy moom.
Geet: aa le mere bache. Me too sorry.
Maan: and me too mumma.
The whole family comes for a family hug.

So here my sweet lovable Maaneet journey of relationships gets over. I hope tat u all enjoyed it as it's a long epilogue with my as usual long updates..

So leave ur last comments and like for the last time…

Love u all….. for giving ur love for me….

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Posted: 13 years ago





for compleating this ff





Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww such a sweet epilogue...
cute family 😊

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