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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG wht a liar that woman was...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum ff
all teh parts were nicely written
plz no more problems in maaneets life
they have had their share of troubles
why cant they have a happy married life with some cute scenes?
plz dont create life threatening situations for maan or geet or anyone from the family
i hope akshay is unable to do anything and comes to know tha truth abt his sister and apologises but still goes to jail
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti_ms

awesum ff

all teh parts were nicely written
plz no more problems in maaneets life
they have had their share of troubles
why cant they have a happy married life with some cute scenes?
plz dont create life threatening situations for maan or geet or anyone from the family
i hope akshay is unable to do anything and comes to know tha truth abt his sister and apologises but still goes to jail
update soon
waiting...
plz do add me in ur pm list

thanks for your comment... they will be married but a there is a twist first dear.. i had written about Maan's fear for loosing geet and this fear will been shown as taking toll on his love and being little harsh on geet and he will be more possessive about her... as far as troubles are concerned i willclose Akshay chapter in a very dramatic way. still in progress of writing... and dont worry you all will get Maaneet moments but with some twist and turns dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome...
dis sameera...hw i hate her...madke bhi kisiko shanti se jeene nehi deti...hw can god create such an evil person...dat *****...ladki k naam par kalank...
im really scared fr geet...maan will not b dere...can vicky manage everything?...akshay can harm him also...without knwing d truth he is hellbound to tk d revenge...he knw his sister...but he should knw d truth...i wish he knw d truth b4 doing any harm to geet...plz dont do anything to maan n geet n along khuranas n handas...plz plz plz...
loved it...
thank u very much fr d lovely update...
continue soon plz...
waiting eagerly...

thanks for your comment... i hope i have made sameera till now the biggest b**** in my FF. wanted to have some more parts for her but just could make it for 3.. still there are two villians remaining dear.. so kept my parts for them.. but dont worry nothing too serious will happen but to some extent it will where you will get to see a total different Maan who will be little harsh on geet for the decision which she will be taking ...
but dont worry atlast they will be one and the further story will continue
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

finally the the relation between akshay nsameera is out. she was a chudail. hope vicky protects geet. precap is interesting but threatening phone calls for geet is scary. loved both the update. like is not working.

Sameera is not only Chudial dear.. i would like her to give the worsed names... anyways liked your chudial for her...
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Amazing ..
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Part 31

Maan asked his dad and mohinder to take geet out for dinner and they would spend the night at farmhouse. he assured them that they could trust him and will not do anything which would bring shame for them. They gave him the permission and as planned Maan took geet to farmhouse without telling her tat he will be leaving for London tomorrow. He knew

That his mishti will be mad at him onec he will tell her about his unexpected London trip and it will be very difficult to manofy her as the very next day she was to join KC an he had promised her tat he will be with her the whollr day. He had this weired frrling inside him tat somewhere something was very wrong but just let go off his thoughts as he wanted to make this night special for. As planned Maan and Geet drove towards the farmhouse with Geet by continuously digging his mind with her stupids questions.

Geet: Maan main aakhir baar pooch rahi hoon akhir hum farmhouse kyu jaa rahe hai aur yeh Heer kya keh rahi th aaj puri raat hum dono farmhouse pe.. aakhir aapke ish bade se bhudhimaaan dimaang mein chal kya raha hai. main aapko warn kar rahi agar aisi waisi koi baat hai tho bhuil hi jaye, varna.

Maan: geet tum thodi der ke liye apni yeh bak bak bandh nahi kar sakthi. Jab dekho muh kholke shuru karthi ho. Baat karthe samay aapni express ghadi break lagana kab sikaogi.

Geet: main bak bak karti hoon. Dekha babaji aapne, kaisa insane palhe dala hai aap ne. na khud baat katha hai aur jab main kuch kehti hoon tho mian bak bak karthi hoon.

Maan: geet mera dimang ko kha juki ho aura b babaji ko tho baksh do. Unhe tho aaram se jeene do. Pata nahi bhagwasn ne tumhe humare hi zindagi mein kyu beja hai, shayd koi aur nahi mila.

Geet: haan babji ko aapke ish phiki zindagi se problem thi isliye mujh jaisi ladki ko beja hai thaki aap ki yeh berang zindagi rangeen ho. Ab aap batate hai ya nahi ki hum farmhousekyu ja rahe hai.

Maan: have patience love. Abhi thopuri raat baki hai. so first lets spend some time then will see.

By the time their so called nhok – jhok continues the car haulted infront of the farhouse. They both got down and entered the house.

Geet: chalo ab tho farmhouse aa gayer na ab bataye baat kya hai.

Maan: geet kya tumare saath waqt bitane ke liye mujhe reason chaye. Why do you think its something like tat.

Geet: aisa nahi hai par aap kabhi aise puri raat … I mean wats going on in your brain maan. I hope tat you are not thinking of spending…..

Maan: wat spending geet.. chup kyu hogayi. Apna sentence complete karo.

Geet: kuch nahi.. main apko already want kar juki hoon agar aisa vaisa kuch hai tho bhul jaye.

Maan: geet yeh warning dekar mere romantic mood ko kharab mat karna warna tumare liye acha nahi hoga.

Geet: oh so Mr. MSK khuranna is being romantic today. Meri tho aaj lottery lag gayi babaji. Kya kismet payi hai maine ki aaj the most busy businessman in India has time for me … I mean romance karne ka mood hai inhe.

Maan: haan hai tho. Imein galat kya hai. kya businessman romance nahi kar sakthe hai.

With this he marches towards her and she moves back. She feels the passion in his eyes which makes her to fear.

Geet: Maan please dur rahe mujhse. Aapki niyat theek nahi lag rahi hai.

Maan: tho aaj meri sherni ko muhjse darr lag raha hai.

Geet: haan. Kyu ki aagr koi sher char saal se bhooka hai tho darr tho lagega na. aur pata chala ki aap baat karthe karthe aap kya kar baithe. Isliye main keh rahi hoon ki aap mujhe se 10 feet dur hi rahi.

Maan: tumne mujhe bhooka sher kaha aur woh bhi chaar saal bhooka.. ab dektha hoon ki tumhe kaun bachata hai mujhse.

With this word maan starts chases geet who was running around the whole farmhouse to escape from him. Atlast Maans gets a hold of geet and pins her to the nearby wall. Geet holds her breadth which was ragging due to her running around. Maan stares at her loving and ask.

Maan: tho main char saal bhooka sher hoon geet… tho ab dekho ki char saal bhooka sher kya kartha hai.. and with this Maan crushes his lips to hers and starts kissing her with his full force and slowly increases the pressure. Geet who was first shocked to feel his lips slowly starts responding and going along with him. they kiss for along time and after feeling short for air they break their passionate kiss. Maan rests his forehead on hers and they stand they for some time holding on to their hearts to steady abit.

Geet: ab tho bataye maan ki baat kya hai vaise bhi aapko aapki mann ki cheez mili so now you should tell me.

Maan: ek kiss se tho mere dil nahi barne wala geet. pata nahi dobara kab kiss karne milega.

Geet: roz tho karthe hai.. wait a minute wat did you se..

Maan: kuch nahi geet..

Geet: maan aap kuch chupa rahe hai na bataye muhje aakhir baat kya hai.. I should have known before..

Maan: geet pehle khana khate hai phir baat kartthe hai. abhi tho puri raat hai.

Geet: nahi maan I want to know now so please don't avoid my questions.

Maan: geet I said lets have dinner first and then talk.. so come on now

They have their dinner quietly where geet notices tat Maan was tensed. She knew tat something was troubling him. she waited for the dinner to complete so tat they could talk nicely. After the dinner they sat outside the farmhouse enjoying the moonlight when suddenly geet asked..

Geet: Maan ab tho khana bhi ho juka, now atleast tell wats the matter. I have seen you tensed throughout the dinner. You seem to be in some deep thoughts Maan.

Maan: geet pehle kasam do ki tum meri baat theek se sunogi aur samjhogi bh. Aur ha naraz ho bilkul nahi hogi.

Geet: maan its enough now. You either tell wats the matter or we shall leave back home right now. She gets up to leave when Maan pulled her againg and made to sit down on the swing. He got up and bend on hi knees in front of her and holds her hands in hers.

Maan: geet main jho bhi kahunga woh pure dyan se sunna aur samjhna bi. Nothing is in my hands right now and I have to go geet. I cant avoid it..

Geet: go where Maan.

Maan:geet main kal London jaa raha hoo. ( by listening it she gets up to move but maans pins her tight on the swing). Geet I saidlisten to me first. Get there's ome problem in London project and as dad have to go to Bangalore and Vicky still not capable to handle such big responsibility, I have to go geet. I cant avoid this as it will cause a huge loss for KC. I have to leave tomorrow and I probably don't know when I will return back. I know tat I promised you to be with you when you will join KC and trust me geet I would have but I cant help it love.

Aur ek baat geet meri dyan se suno. I don't want you to go anywhere alone, I mean you will always inform aboutr your whereabouts to Vicky aur Arjun.Vicky will be with you aall the time but when he cant make up you will have to inform him about your moves. I have appointment two gurads for you who will always be with you wherever you go. I know you don't need them but there is no other way geet. do you understand wat I said, I don't want you to go without them anywhere. No going out at late nights with friends till I return. Even in the success party Vicky and the guards will be with you all the time. I know you will be thinking as to why m doing all this, its just tat I don't want anything happened to you love. its just precautions incase of any emergency. Did you get me geet.

Geet: iski kya jarrurat hai.. main apna khayal rakh sakthi hoon aur waise bhi intne saal London akheli hi tho thi main. I don't need any of your guards.you can go wherever you want and I know you don't care for me so no need of all this.

Maan.(controlling his anger): geet I told you na tat I cant avoid going. And don't say tat I don't care and very well know tat wat you mean to me. I know tat you are angry and m sorry for tat. please Mishti try to understand, its just for your safety love. Its only my fear for you tat I cant stop from doing all this. I promise after I return you will not have this restrictions love, just bear wit me for some days.. please geet.

Geet was very upset about Maan leving her and going, wat irked her more is tat he, himself did not know when he will be returning. The very thought of Maan staying away from her was troubling her as she always had the fear of losing him like he had, but never showed him as he would get tensed. She knew tat wat he is been doing is just for her safety but the way he put restrictions on her was bothering her. She knew tat it was not the way he was making it look like but much to it. She tried to reason with him but he clearly stated there is nothing like tat but just for safety measures. Maan atlast manofied his geet argreing to her demands tat he will return soon and will do wat ever she says.

Maan: geet I have a surprise for you.

Geet: ab aur koi surprise baaki hai iske baad. Aapke tho surprise se bhi darr lagne laga hai. pata vhala ki ishe bhi bada bomb phek diya aapne.

Maan: kuch hai geet par I mean darr lag raha hi ki tumhe pasand ayega ya nahi..

Geet: aisi kya cheez hai jise dene kiya aap itna darr rahe hai Maan.

Maan takes her inside the bedroom where he had kept a gift wrapped fro her. He hand her it and waits her to open the packek. As soon as geet opened it she was shocked to see the dress which was almost revealing and and tat was a off shoulder harldy could reach her knee length. As if understanding her confusion he said

Maan: geet main jantha hoon kit um aise khapde nahi phenthi ho. But I could not stop myself from buying this. I know tat its not the right time geet but could not control myself from giving it to you. I just wanted to see you in this but if you don't want then its ok.. I wnt mind as I know tat my mishti always prefers to wear Indian clothes. But I would like you to keep it with you and whenever you feel it's the right time to wear you can . I can wait for you to see in this for lifelong with these he goes out of the room.

Geet who was all shocked to hear his words came out of it and just started at the door which was closing. It was about half an hour tat Maan heard the door open. He turned top see geet who was standing there all wearing the dress and covered her upper body big duppata. Maan who just kept staring at her could not believe tat geet had woren tat dress. As if he had some magical cast on him , he started moving towards her. With each step of his, geet heart started beating at a uncontrollable rate. She had woren the dress as she had seen in Maan's eyes the longing to see her in it but she never thought tat he would have such a effect on him. she just stood there holding her duppatta tight around her body. Maan came near her and placed his hand on the duppatta without breaking the eye contact. His gaze reached her soul as if asking her the permission. Geet lowered her eyes answering his unsaid questions and with a swift move Maan unwrapped the duppatta fom her. Once the duppatta was gone Maan could not believe tat the beauty who stood in fron of him was his geet. his mishti , his love…… he had many questions in his eyes as he could see geet feeling shy… as if geet understood she said

Geet: Main janthi hoon Maan ki aap yeh soch rahe hai ki maine ush waqt kyu jawab nahi diya. Yeh sach hai Maan ki yeh dress dekhar main hairan hui thi par mujhe bora nahi laga balki acha laga ki aap mujhpar itna tho haq jathathe hai ki aap mujhe ish dress main dekhna chahthe hai. Main aap ki khwashish kaise puri na karthi maan. Humesha tho aapne mujhe sirf diya hai na ki kuch kiya hai aur aaj jab pehli baar aap ne kuch manga tho main inkar kaise karthi. Jnathi hoon ki jab aap yeh dress karid rahe the aap bahut bechain huye hoge ki geet kya sochegi aur kya samjhegi par Maan mujhe acha laga ki aapne mujhe ish layak tho socha ki main aise khapde app ke liye pehan sakthi hoon. Aur haan aisa bilkul mat sochna ki main humesha aise hi khapde pehanugi,yeh tho aap London jaa rahe hai isliye socha ki aapka mood karab naa kare..

Maan who was just staring at the divine beauty infront of his did not register her words and moved closer to her. Geet got scared and started to move back unless and until she was corned iand trapped between the wall and him. she stared at him and said.. "Maan".

Maan placed his hand on her face and caressed it ever so gently as if she was a wax dol who would break at anymoment. The way he was caressing her cheeks made geet shiver under his touch and she felt herself breadthing heavly. Maan slowly traced his index finger on her face and moved towards her neck and and then arm giving goosebumps to geet. Geet who was not able to take it any more said.."Maan please let me go"

Maan: sssh mishti aaj kuch nahi… and replaced his hands with his mouth. He placed wet kisses all overher face. He kissed her forehead, eyes, nose and cheeks. Slowly he placed kis rough lips on her soft petals and slightly brished them waiting for her to respond. Geet by now was out of control and as soon as she felt his lips on her lips she started nibbling and bitting them letting him know the effect which he has on her. Seeing her respondhe pulled her more closer by waist and her hands automatically reached his neck and pulled him closer even though there was no space left. The nibbed and bit each others lips finally entering each other mouth tasting each other. They kissed fro long as if there was no tomorrow. Geet who felt short of breadth tried to pry of him but he held her closer pulling again into his mouth. Geet started hitting him with her small fists letting him no tat she could not breadth due to his assault which was continous. He instantly left her and geet breadth. He kept staring at her pink lips which were swollen and saw her turning red with his gaze on them. She tried to move away but was pinned again to the wall..

Geet: Maan please jane dijiyena…

Maan: sssh geet. let me see you and drink your beauty with my eyes. I want to get drown into your serene beauty geet. aaj mujhe aapne aapko rokhne ko mat kehna mishti. I just want to love you…

Geet: Maan…. Please.. jane dijiye..

Maan: sssh geet I said no….. Maan slowly moved more closer and started placing kisses on her bare shoulder and neck. He bit her hard on her neck and geet hissed with pain moaning his name. her moans added fuel to his fire and he continued placing kissed and bitting her. He did the same to the other side. She could not control herself any more with the pleasure he was giving her and slowly started unbuttoning his shirt to feel his body with her hand.

Once the buttons were open geet pried his shit off his body and started placing kisses all over his chest bitting him. she felt herself being lifted in air and soon found herslf on bed with Maan on top of her. He stared at her once again and smashed his lips taking hers along. The kiss was one of the aggressive and passionate enough for them to loose their all control. He slowly traced his lips aloing her nape coming down and rested on slight above her breast and bit her there. She hissed in pain and dig her nails in his back. Maan licked her soothing the pain. Maan slowly moved down on her body and his one hand on moving upwards towards her tigh giing her unknown pleasures and desires for him. she could not control herself either him. they were so lost in the moment tat Maan slowly placed his hand on her breast trying to slip her dress down. As soon as geet felt her dress slide down a bit she realized wat they were doing and said … "Maan"

Maan ws heard her and looked up only to see a shocked geet and he later realized wat they were upto. He instantly lifted himself from her and covered her with spread. She pulled her dress up and covered herslf securely. Maan wore his shirt and said…

Maan: geet m sorry. Main aisa kuch nahi chaha tha par pata nahi kaise….

Geet closed his mouth with her hand and said….. Maan aapko sorry kehne ki koi jarrurat nahi hai.. aapne kuch galat nahi kiya nahi maine. Hum pyar karthe hain ek dujhe se aur yeh humara pyar tha jo ish roop mein bahar aaya.

Maan: par geet maine dad aur papa ko promise kiya tha ki…

Geet: sssh Maan humne aisa kuch nahi kiya nahi unhe sharamida kiya hai maan. Phir aap aisa kaisa soch sakthe hai..

Maan; par geet mujhe aapne aap ko rokhna tha. Agar tum rokh thi nahi tho aaj hum kuch kar jathe tho…

Geet: par kuch hua nahi na… Maan mujhpar aapka pura haq hai aur agar hum kuch kar jathe tho bi hum galat nahi hote maan. Yeh humara pyar hai maan. Main janthi hoon Maan aap sirf meriwajah se aapne aap ko rokhthe hai taki mujhe kisi ke samne sharamidagi na ho par sach maaneya maan I will relish these moments in my whole life. In this few moments I lived my best with my love maan..

Maan: geet tum humesha aisa karthi ho. Kyu pyar karthi ho mujhse itna ki mujhe kabhi bi galat nahi manthi..

Geet: kyu mere Maan kabhi bhi galat nahi ho sakthe. Who tho sirf mere saath hi aisa kar sakthe hai. unki zindagi mein, mera alava koi nahi hai aur nahi koi hoga.. so why should I not love you.. aur waise mera pyar apse bada nahi hai kyunki main janthi hoon ki aap mujhse kitna pyar karthe hai…

Precap: Dhamkis for geet

Vicky' accident..

Sorry for mistakes.. hope you like it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
i guessed it...something will happen to vicky...im very scared fr both maan n geet...plz dont do anything to dem plz...request u...but who will help geet...maan is also not dere...oh god...plz help dem...
loved it...
thank u very very much fr such a lovey update...
waiting fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update maan have to leaver and geet upset hope nothing happens to vicky and geet and gave her dress love maneet scene



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago

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