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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi peops…..
I was very happy with the response for the os andeekha anjaana sa….
So I planned to write another os…..
OS:DIL DHOONDTHA HAI…
Yeh kahani hai childhood buddies maan and geet ki….woh dono saath mein school and college gaye….un dono ka ambition bi ek hi tha…that is journalism…..jab dono ne college complete kiya tho the got job in the leading news channel…..
Who dono humesha saath mein rehethe the…..maan ek show ka director tha aur geet usi show ki vj thi… unka har sach bohut exciting and adventurous tha…..phir ek din aaya unki life mein ek twist….
There came London based sameera in their life….her sexiness was so obvious that all employees wanted to be with her….the company manager made maan and sameeraa teamandsent them to America for a event…….
Maan with heavy heart left geet and went to America…..there during the shooting of the event maan and sameera came to know each other….sameera started to like maan's nature and his sense of humor and maan came to know about the cute girl in sameera….they started coming close….finally one day maan proposed her and she accepted…..
In almost the same time in india geet was missing maan terribly…she was seeing their childhood photos….she started realizing that she was in love with maan….she was waiting eagerly for maan to return…she got the news that maan was returning so she went to airport to pick him…..with racing heartbeat she was waiting for maan at the aravial….when she saw maan coming hand in hand with sameera her full world came crashing down……
Maan came and said her that he was in love with sameera…..with crying heart she tried to smile…..then after that maan would always be with sameera….one day maan thought to propose sameera for marriage…he went and said this to geet…after hearing this she was totally broken but still she agreed….
When maan went to sameera she said that she wanted to say something…she said that she got a job in modeling…..but maan said that he came to propose her for marriage….sameera started laughing"maan ur gone crazy….marrige and now…now only I started my career…..".hearing this maan was totally broken…for her-her career was more important….
After this incident maan's life changed totally….sameera went to londan again for her carer leaving maan to completely turn to a stone…..geet tried to heal maan with her love but maan would again turn into stone…like this 2 years passed and there was no improvement in maan's behavior……
Then one day geet went to cover a event…..at that time maan was in office they got a news that there was a bomb blast near that area…..maan was rooted to the spot…after gaining composure he took his bike and started to the event pace….throughout the ride he was praying and dialing geet's no. she was not receiving….this panicked him more…he reached the bomb blast sight….there were many people who were crying and were searching their lost one's…maan was very scared…he realized what real loneliness was….if geet is not there then he would surely die….
He showed his id and entered inside…there he saw geet reporting live…..it was like life came inside maan….he went near her…..their eyes met….geet saw love and concern in his eyes and maan saw pure love in her eyes….he didn't think anything…..he hugged her tightly geet to hugged him….all who was seeing it clapped…….
Then I guess all know what might happened…………….
That's all for this os….
I will come back next week with a new os…till then keep loving my os and me…
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os
loved it
finally maan realized his n her love
poor geet suffered so much
argghhh sameera!
thnx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os dear...
lovely... me liking it very much ...
so will be waiting 4r ur new os...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww awesome sweet cute little OS loved it a lot yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ITS SO BEAUTIFUL..MAAN'S REALISATION OF LOVE..AWESOME
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 👏
Just found ur OS dear..

Ossum wud b an understatement!!!!
Luved it so much...!!!

U shud write more yaar...
I loved d whole track..
Iss duniya mein sameera jaisa kuch ladkiyan hain joh apni lovers ki feelings nahi samaj sakthe hain 😭
Nd sameera is one of them 😡
Thnk god maan realised he fell for geet 😳 or else us bexhare ke life ko kya hoga? 😆
Hats off!!

Lov
Sally...

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