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WOw DI...!!!!!!!!!
Superb update... Me loved it sooo much...!!!!!
U wrote it sooo welll...!!!!!!!
It was flawless yaar...!!! Osum...!!!!!!
Di hats of to u... U write sooo well...!!!!
U expressed geets monologue so nicely..!!!!
Uff... Painfull yet sooo sweet update..!!!
Here goes sumthin from my side to ur fab update of today's...
Kaise roku use jab usi ne hi ye dard diya hai
Kaise roku use jab usi ne apno se paraya kiya hai...
Mera aur uska rishta kya sirf dard ka hai
Kya wo bhi meri tarah dard me tadapta hai...
Mene uski ankho me dard ke sath pyar dekha hai
par kaise yakin karu jisne mera sab chin liya hai...
Wo kehta hai wo mujhse bahaut pyaar karta hai
par galti ki wajah se mujhse nazre nahi mila pata hai...
uski galti jankar bhi ye dil kyu use chahta hai
Kyu uska dard mujhe bhi mehsus hota hai...
Hum dono ka dard hi hume jodta aaya hai
shayad isi dard se ek dusre ko pyar hua hai...
Usne apne dil ki baat to keh di hai
par mere liye mushkil kadhi ki hai...
Na jane kyu mera dil bhi uske liye dhadkta hai
Uska dur jane ka faisla mujhe bhi satata hai...
Rokna to bahaut chahti thi use par kis haq se rokti
Baho me sametna chahti thi par kis haq se use apna kehti...
Mere dard me uska dard to mene dekha hi nahi
Mujhse jyada wo tadpa hoga kabhi socha hi nahi...
uski kadmo ki aahat ne bataya wo dur chala gaya
Laga jaise mujhse meri saanse chin le gaya...
Nahi me use khone nahi de sakti
Is dard me use akela nahi chod sakti...
Isi dard ne hume milwaya tha
Isi dard ne to pyar ka rasta dikhaya tha...
Ab yahi dard hume aaj bhi saath layega
mera pyaar use jarur wapas layega...
Uska aur mera rishta ek dard ka hai
usi dard ke khatir mujhe use apna banana hai...
Its not that gud par me iske alawa abhi
kuch aur nahi soch sakti...
Luv ya sooo Much di...
Superb update
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