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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start continue soon and plz do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

I looked at his face immediately which was still sober but there was something in his eyes he looked intently on my face scanning and summing up something
No no doctor I said as I realised he was waiting for an answer and I pulled my hands back after a very prolonged handshake...

Maan call me Maan Ms geet
I nodded and said a yes
Please be seated he said politely to me and pulled the chair for me

So Miss Geet Handa how can I help you
I looked at his face for a second trying to figure out the answer of his question
Geeet he called bringing me out of my thoughts
Yes yes doctor I mean Maan I fumbled with my words
For the first time I was stuck in such an awkward situation where I was sitting in a doctors cabin without any reason

Miss geet he called yet again this time little louder clearly annoyed at my silence
I looked at his face which was serious but his eyes still was trying to figure something out
Dr Maan I finally started actually I am here because of my mother mrs Rano Handa
And to be honest I do not need your help for anything it is only because of her insistence that I am here and so I just want you to say this to my dearest mom that I am absolutely fine and i really don't need any psychatric help

Hmm he replied listening to me intently
I looked at him again his face expression was still the same
And some how my inability to read what is in his mind really was irritating me
What hmm doctor I shouted finally
I don't need your help
So just call mom and say that fine I hope I am clear
And with that I finally got up to leave
But the very next moment I found him holding my hold
I looked at him and then his hold
How dare you I screamed angrily completely not liking his hold on me
Cool down miss Geet please he said still holding my hand
He came to my side instantly and made me sit as if I was a weak patient
Look mr maan or dr maan or whatever you are I really don't get it why should I waste my time sitting here when I am absolutely fine

Well miss geet I am here to decide that and till the time I am not convinced that you are normal I am not gonna say anything to anyone

What I literally screamed and got up from my chair yet again do I look mad or insane to you I shouted at him literally
But to my dismay I found him just smiling at my banters
Though his smile really looked amazing and for few seconds I was just stuck at that mesmerising smile but then i came out of my thoughts back

I looked at him angrily and the very next moment just grabbed my hand bag and walked towards the door yet again

But before I could have stepped out of the room I found myself pulled back yet again and before anything could have made sense I found Maan's arms wrapped around my waist and my legs dangling in air

What the hell I muttered as I realised he was carrying me inside the cabin and laying me on his couch

He hovered above my face his face too close to mine I somehow gulped my saliva down as I saw the strict and angered expression on his face
Look miss geet Handa I am a doctor
And you are here for a reason do you understand
Now if you are normal or not it is something that I will decide and for that I really need to know you
Do you get me so
it is best for you to cooperate with me and if your absolutely fine trust me even I would not like to waste my time on you

I looked at his face how dare he talk to me these ways and waste his time what does he think of himself

He smirked at my baffled expression yet again
For now you can leave but I hope to see you again ...tomorrow same time


Ok people
Thank you for such an awesome
Response🤗
Have uploaded yet again do leave ur
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Ps this the 1st time I am uploading the part from my
iPad so do lemme know
If the font and size is not okay
Wil try to update more tmrw but only after
updating either
Autumn love
Or
As time goes by


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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...

maan actually lifted her...😲...🤣\

poor geet...was totally speechless...😆

continue soon...

thnx for PM>...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update !! :-) !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dat was superb..
do maan really noe wat her pblm is?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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. 🤗There you are and I was missing your comment
😕 For a moment I thought you didn't liked it so
But now I am happy 😆See
Hmm But now I want u to comment yet again
As I have updated the 2nd part
Love you enjoy ur brothers wedding honey
Love
Miki










Originally posted by: snehaj


Heya Miki.. 🤗
Look me late again.. 😆
Me hell busy yaar.. with the arrangements of my brothers wedding
which is due next week.. 😳
Bt can't stay away frm IF..
So thought to peek a little & saw ur PM..
U knw my little brain is also filled with Maan & Geet..& with ur beautiful writing.. it's the cherry on the top..
Me totally luuvvvd luuvvvd the 1st part of this story.. Its really interesting..
& more over i hav nvr imagined Maan as a Doc.. sumthing really different..
I m hooked after reading the 1st part..
really looking forward to knw wat happens next..
Do update sooonn..
Luving you & Luving your writing..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was lovely , continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Again I am late in commenting .. aha !!! my hectic life.. 😡

I am really thankful for all the writers who are keeping maaneet alive through there stories.. This a very refreshing concept.. Maan and doc.. 😲

Great start dear for a wonderful concept..About your writing how much ever I try to express it is less.. You are so good expressing with words..

And about the parts.. we are greedy ppl.. we'll never be satisfied with your writing.. he he.. 😆

So now we have 3 FF's to look forward to.. waiting waiting 😳

Thanks once again for the amazing write up 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is Dr Maan singh khurana 😉😛 aree wah loved part 1 & 2 ...😊

pls update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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VERY INTERESTING
CONGRATS ON THE NEW FF

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