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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Awesme part dear.
So mera guess sahi nikla..maan geet se jhoot bol raha tha ki o army officer hai..omg mera maan love guru ban kar ghoom raha hai...iam lovng it..
Waitng 4 maaneet's next meeting..


yes ur guess was right nd

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
awesomeee
😆 the Great baaba Maan singh khurana
it's really fab
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
baba maan singh khurana!!!!!!
maan akhir karta kya hai????
awsome update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Priya:She always pampers her only son and enjoys life's small pleasures along with him


Pari:she is sweet nd bubbly nd lvs maan alot




Part 3

maan's house:
pari is busy in calling sum1.maan wondered wat is she upto?
pari(excitingly):mama call connect hogaya...
priya:hain choti arahi huin...
maan:ee kisiko call kar rahi hain???
pari:hello mein apki badi fan huin...mein apki shw har roz sunthi huin...
priya:tuh agayi beta...
befeore could answer...her mom cuts him off by saying
priya:ek min ek min beta bahut musquil se call connect huyi...
Priya:ek baar mujhe phone dena...
pari:hain mom lo
Priya:hainji mera naam priya ...nahin mein ek house wife huin.meri 2 bache hain
ek filmstar ranbir jaisa Handsome diktha hain aur ek seedi sadhi beti.mein apki badi fan huin.mein apko slim rehne ke liye ek tip dedungi...
call:wow...
before priya could speak futher maan snatch the phone from her hand and shouts on person on the phn n cuts the call
pari:tuh phn kyun kat diya.itni musquil se hame call connect huin.tuh agayi hamari kushiyon mein pani phekne...
maan:tujhe mujhse jyada phn pe padi hain...
pari:hain...
priya:pari tuh chup kar ee bhi koi tarikha hain bhai se baat karneki...jaa andhar
maan gives her a winning smile...
priya:abhi baatrahi hain phn pe ki tuh ranbir jaisa dikhtha hain...tuh dekho patient jaisa ban kar agaya..tere ankhe kyun lala hain...
maan:kuch nahin mom journey karke ayi huin na todi tired huin...
pari was upset
maan went manofy her.
maan:sry choti galthi hogayi..mujhe maaf kardena...please...
pari:
maan:mujhse baat nahin karengi toh mein ee pyarsa dress kisko dhuin
pari:wow bhai ee meri liye...
maan:nahin bhajhu wali aunty ke liye...
pari:bhai app bhi na...
maan:toh maaf kardiya...
pari:hain app jantha haina mein app perjyada der tak ghussa nahin rehsakthi...
maan:hain maloom hain n hugs her...
pari:bhai ek baat batao...tuh mujhe itna maska kyun mar rahi ho??? koi ladki wadki chakkar hain kya???
maan:waise nahin hain per...
pari:bataona bhai please...
maan:teek hain teek hain...mujhe train mein ek ladki mila...mein isse pehle ash ko asal mein kabhi nahin dekha aur
abhi dekna nahi chatha
pari:kyuin?? ash ko marriage hogayana esliya
maan:nahin wo ash sa jyada beautiful hain
pari:bhai tujhe nahin lag rahi ki ee todi over hogayi hainn...
maan:teek hain pura nahin per 30% se kam nahin hain...
pari:oh k...
priya:kaun ash???
pari:mom bhai ko kisi ladke se pyaar hogaya...
priya oh wow meri maanu ko pyaar hogaya.kaun woh lucky gal...
maan:mom woh swiss airline mein airhostress ki kaam karthi hain...oh teri 10 bajgayi mein usse milne jaa rahuin
pari:bhai mujhe bhi dekhni hain meri bhabhi ko...
priya:mein bhi avungi...
maan:teek hain jali ready ho jao
swiss airlines:
yash:hello guruji...
maan:tuh yaha kya kar raha hain...
yash:jaha guru wahi sishyay...
maan(POV):ee sala yaha bhi agaya mujhe chain jeene nahin dega
yash(POV):jab bhi ladkiyon milne jaye toh mujhe chod kar jathi abb kaha jayengi mera pyaara guruji.
maan:abb chale andhar..
yash:ofcourse...
pari:bhai kisiko poochna ki woh kaha hain...
maan:teek hain by saying he moves enuiry desk...
maan:hi am maan.i came to meet geet.app usse bathdengi ki mein yaha uss ke liye wait kar rahi huin
lady:k sir.app waha bait jao...
maan felt that geet was here.he turned n saw geet cumng towards him...
geet:hi maan wat a surprise...
maan:hey geet hw r u?
geet:am fine...
maan:ee meri mom hain,ee meri sis hain aur ee meri uncle...
yahs:maaan
maan:oh sry ee mera frnd hain...
geet:hi guys nice to meet u...
yash:maan tuh kade ho kar kisko ishare kar rahi ho waha toh koi nahin hain...
pari:bhai tuh din mein sapne dekhna bandh karo woh athi hogi...
next: 😉

Edited by Aanandita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
aWSEM UPDATE T6HANX FOR PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
wow fab update
plzzz update next part soon

& thanks angeli 4 the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Awesome part..!!!
Thanks for the PM..!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Awsome writings wel done. Its nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Awesme part dear..
Mera maanu ka family kitna cute hai..hasti khelti parivar hai uska ..iam lovng it and o log tho pore family ke saath geet se milne gaye hai aur maan tho din me sapne dekhne laga hai..waitng to knw hw geet reacts by meetng them there..i thnk she'l feel frustatd by over interfering in hr life..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
awesum dear..
loved maan's paagal family...
i dont think geet s working dere..

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