hum tum(maaneet) ff updated pg11

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heys guys am indu am huge fan of maan.this my first ff on maaneet it was loosely based on movie.hope u guys like it
Part1


man:oh fish mein phir se late hogayi.daud beta daud nahin train nikhal jayengi...
finally he caught train.
man:thank u babaji apne mujhe phir se bachaya.love u it.
wah kya khamal ki ladki hain yaar.
he moved towards her n sat in oppiste seat
man:to get her attention he spoked in little loud voice tone "love story by erich segal" .
girl ignores him...
man:herione will die in last part.i still remember the last wrds of her"Love means never have to say you're sorry."
superb novel.did u jus strd reading it r u completed half??/
girl:hey watz ur problem?
man:nothing i was jus trying to say reading in running train is not good for health..
girl:oh really.thank u.u saved me she said saracstic tone n continued to read
man:u r welcum.instead of reading y can't we speak to each other...
girl:not a bad idea
man:hey i am maan.apka naam?
girl:am geet
maan:nice name.wt do u do?
geet:am wrking as air hostress in swiss airlines.
maan:flights pe choclates deni wali wohi haina...
geet:yeah.aur app?
before maan speak she cuts him by saying
geet:wait wait let me guess u wrk in army rite...
maan:wow u r geneious. hw did u knw that am an army officer?
she laughs n says
geet:i knw apki height,weight,color,well build body dekh kar koi bhi pehnchan payengi
maan smiles
geet:i like army ppl...
maan:aww thank u.mein socha hi nahin app mujhe itni jaldi pasand karengi...
geet:mein ne aisa kab kaha.mein generally keh rahi huin ki mujhe log army ache lakthe hain...
maan:mein bhi unn log mein se haina
geet smirks
maan:even i like air hostress
geet:y?
maan:woh kya haina airhostress look beautiful like u
geet blushes
after 2 hrs:
maan was drooling over geet.geet used have glimpe of him now n then
maan went near the door n stood there..
maan:hey yaha avo bahut mazaa arahi hain...
geet: araha huin ...
maan:geet tum capricorn haina...
geet:hain tujhe kaisa patha
maan:jus a guess..
geet:tum pieces haina...
maan:tujhe kaisa patha...
geet:i guessed too she winks
they heard flight sound n looked in that direction
geet:kingfisher hyderabad 25mins late
maan was shocked...
geet:woh kya haina mein waha kamm karthi huin na isi liye mujhe flight ki awaaz sunthe hi patha chalega ki kaunsi flight hain ...
maan:wow
geet:apki miltary life baare mein kaho??
maan:miltary life bahut katin hain.bahut mental tensions aur physical injuries bhi sehna padega.
per jab hum ee sochtha hain ee sab hum hamre desh ke liye kar rahi hain toh badi se badi dard pe
bhi hame choti lakthi hain...he said emotionally
geet:maan r u ok...
maan:yes.tumhari airhostrees life ke baare mein kuch kaho...
geet:air hostress ki job karne ke liye bahut patience ki zaroorat hain.we will be meeting different ppl with different attitudes.har situations mein hum adjust karna padegi...
maan:oh k...
maan:shaadi kab kar rahe ho?
geet:jab app jaisa achi miltary officer milengi tab karengi??
Maan:woh kyun?
geet:mujhe milary officers bahut pasand hain.they r real heros...
maan:sahi kaha apne...
geet:per usko koi bad habbits nahin honi chaiye like smoking n drinking...
maan:even i hate smoking n drinking...
suddenly he notices sum 1 smoking in washroom...he knocks on bathroom door..a man cum outside washroom..
maan:app wash room kya kar rahe ho...apko nahin patha train mein smoking karna mana hain?dekho train mein aurate,
chote bach aur unke saath saath hum jaise non smokers bhi hothi hain...app log ki wajesi hamari desh sarwanash ho rahi...yaha se jayie
man:ladkiyon ke samne hero ban rahi hain
maan:mujhe aisi log se nafrat hain...
geet was impressed
maan:so geet apki office kaha hain
geet:swiss airlines,Sector 25
DLF Cyber City, Phase ' II
Gurgaon
maan:cool..
geet:app kab kasmir ja rahi ho...
maan:in two days
geet:laktha hain station agaya...
maan:haian bahut jaldi agaya
geet:hmmm.
maan:phir kab milengi...
geet:mallom nahin
maan:nice meeting u...
geet:me2
maan:bye geet
geet:bye maan

will they ever meet again???????


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KTPROCKS thumbnail
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so sweet
really like it
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wow!gud start..
but mujhe aisa kyun lag raha he ki maan jhoot bol raha hain?
Aanandita thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KTPROCKS

so sweet
really like it

thank u😊
Aanandita thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

wow!gud start..

but mujhe aisa kyun lag raha he ki maan jhoot bol raha hain?

thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice starting..
Muje pakka yakeen hai ki maan joot bhol raha hai geet ka attentn pane ke liye..i knw they'l meet again and maan pakda jayega..dekna ye hai ki o kaisa pakda jayega aur o log kaise milenge...waitng 4 next part..
Btw congrats on new ff indu and ha i lovd ur title...
Love ya..
Mona
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awesomeee induuu
i expected airport n all as in hum tum
but nice n different
luved ittt
n add me 2 ur pm list plzzz

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