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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 11


geet... what are you doing?


maan ... please suno.. i want to leave..


but why geet..we are just arrived ...and see this is not your Hp here no one know us and don't worry about such things and have your lunch pease fully..


no maan..i don't like it and am not at all comfortable here...
lets move out of here...


Geet why you are so afraid..nothing will happen..

Maan am leaving you want to stay then stay here..

saying that she took her college bag and left that restaurant this is there first outing and geet behaved differently leaving maan shock and angry...

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Maan sir...
sir...
maan sir...
excuse me sir...


ha..haan... aadhi bolo...

sir are you alright.. ?

yeah am fine aadhi tell what's the matter...

vo sir... today there is a meeting with Mr. and Mrs williams and they are waiting in conference hall sir...


yeah i remember...ok lets move...


MR:::yes Mr.maan we are very impressed by your presentation and willing to work with you and before we made agreement i like to invite you for the party...


party???

mrs williams ::::Today is our anniversary i have arrange the couples party in our restaurant itself and i would like to invite you with your wife for this party Mr.khurana...

before maan should answer aadi replied

*coughs*...
vo.. Mrs.williams Maan sir is not married yet sir...

MR::I thought you were married..then its fine come with your girlfriend Mr.khurana...

maan smiled a bit and remain silent...

Mrs:::And don't tell that you didn't had any of them Mr.Khurana i wont believe an handsome young successful man like you is still single i cant believe that...

Maan opened his mouth to answer where there is a knock in the door..

Excuse me sir..
get in..

with hands full of files geet entered...
Sir vo ...vo.. files..
.. when she's struggled with those files aadhi helped her to put some of those files in the table...

with a thud sound she put the remaining files which cause some thing to fell in maan's eyes...

he started rubbing those eyes with his fingers...

geet what have you done..

vo mein...sorry sir...

with out thinking about any thing she came close to maan immediately and removed his hands from his eyes and started blowing air from her mouth to his eyes

with shock every one is looking at her for her sudden behavior..where as maan too he forget about the irritation in his eyes and looked in to her eyes with out a blink..

after a while...she asked..

Are you fine?


he didn't reply...both again lost in there eyes...latter she compose her self and straighten...

vo am sorry sir...

with that she run away from the place...

after a while maan answered to the previous question of Mrs. williams..

Mrs.williams..thanks for the compliment and i will attend this party for sure...

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Part 11 continued...


as its already 6 geet is getting ready to move out of office when her phone rings..

geet... come to my cabin...

now sir...

no tomorrow...

at what time sir..

geet come to my cabin right now...
( ma favourite famous dialogue of maaneet miss them now)


Excuse me sir... after opening the door she asked

yes come in geet...

with out looking at her he just command her...

geet took these packets... pointing towards the plastic bags in the couch he said to her...

geet went near that and took that in her hands...

yes sir...


those bags contain dresses choose your favorite one and wear..

ji sir.... after a while only she got his words..

dresses for me?

she turned and asked him.
.yes go wear and come..
but why?

he closed the files in his hands and said

did i teach you this before..Don't question your boss?

But office hours are over now...am not your staff any more and you are stranger to me now.. i have rights to ask questions to the stranger who forces me to do certain things..

she told every thing with out a break for breathing and without looking in to his way..

who said your office hours are over miss.geet handa...you are my secreatary and you don't have certain time limits as office hours you have to do what ever i ask you to do at what ever the time is..

with a bossy tone he came close to her reducing the distance between them...
with a fear she took two steps back which matting to his one step close to her..

did you change by your self else need my help in doing so...


with those words she gather all those packets in the couch and went out his sight with in a few seconds

she choose a white saree which also contains all the necessary things and accessories matching her each and every dresses and every things is in perfect fit as it its particularly designed for her...



geet again enter to his cabin...
this time with out asking permission to get in..maan stopped seeing the files and stared at her forgetting about him self and the world around him he just stared at her...

she is very beautiful like an angel...in those white dress maan lost in her beauty...

she came close and stopped in front of his table with out looking at him looking down she stand before him,,,

Sir..maan sir...
when she didn't get any response she looked up in his face..

he is seeing her from top to bottom and said.. beautiful and perfect...


seeing her he took his phone and called her driver to make car ready...

he came close and took her hands in his and said..
.lets go geet...

where..?

He put his fingers on her mouth and said.
.
No questions now just come with me...

where he will take her that too with out her permission never maan wont do any thing which geet don't like...he is just planned her to take her to Mr and Mrs williams couple party to inform to them not only to them but to the entire world that he is not single any more he got

his girl
his soul mate
girl who is there cares for him..
who loves him to the core...
who is still his girl...
His geet..his only and only geet his wife...

and he believes she got no reason to neglect him this time and she will never ask him to leave her,forget her this time...

He is willing only one thing to give all the happiness in her life and made his life satisfied fulfilled with his geet...

Did geet will make him happy at least this time...? Is that so easy for maan to bear the hard truth of her life.?

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To be continued..



Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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awesome update
is her past same as ghsp
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 11
nice part...
wanna know her past...
cont soon dear...

PS - congrats on ur engagement...and update the title with the page number and date dear...
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Part 12


geet is shocked to when the car stopped in front of the restaurant where the car is surrounded by the press media and the 7 star restaurant is filled with all business magnets...


geet get down...

maan sir.. what's this where you brought me?

her face clearly shows that she is afraid...

maan hold her palms tightly in both his hands and said


geet don't be afraid...am there ..get down...

maan please...she kept tears ready in her eyes and requested him with her pleading voice..
geet please... geet just do it for me...

Its enough geet... i can't stay away from you any more i like to announce the whole world that you are my geet...i cant even wait for a single minute for you here after geet please geet don't stop me in doing so...



maan please understand... leave me... forget me ... am not...


maan took his hands away form hers soon and get down from the car...with full anger before she completes..

where all the press and media people surrounded him and geet remain in the car with out getting down...

after a while when the car is parked in the parking lot get down from the car and went inside the party hall...

where as in a mean while maan has become the center of argument...

Mr.khurana..where is your partner..

i think you forget that this is the couple party not your usual boring business party..

where all the people around him started laughing at those commands...

which made maan more angry...
geet entered where as every ones eyes started falling on her...

she remain at some distance from him where maan came near her and drag her to the dancing floor...

as if they where dancing the arrogant maan made her dance with his aggressive moves...

why you doing this geet..?

did you don't love me...

did you think am not perfect for you?

what you think geet... i always came around you like an idiot and you making me down all the time and do what ever you like and i will see that for ever with out asking you any thing...

what you want geet..
what you want from me...
why you always putting me down..
.

am always coming behind you it doesn't mean that i don't get any other girl or you alone the only girl in the world remember...


each and every words are bursting out from his mouth in anger..and the same time his hold hurt her badly...

maan you are hurting me...?

i don't care... and what you think what you did now didn't hurt me...

maan i don't like you...
i don't love me...
just leave me alone...
go away from me from my life...


Stop that nonsense geet...i know you love me ...

i can see that in your eyes don't try to lie to your self...


you think i can't do any thing..if i want you.. i can make you mine right now right here want to see that Miss.geet handa...

come with me...

saying that he drag her to away form the dance floor and reach the basement where they were alone where ever one is out of there sight...

maan... geet shouted...and pushed away his hands from hers..

he left her hands and cupped her face and kissed her...

aggressively...angrily...she didn't react didn't restrict didn't gave in..remain still like an life less doll...

her life has become like that'life less doll who ever wants can hurt her'throw her into pieces no one ever cared for her'didn't thought about her wills likes ever'not even maan once..he always command her and make her do what ever he want her to do...not even a single time he listen to her wills ...

But but there is difference in maan and others.. others wont care if she die also but maan will ready to kill himself if she is not around..He loves her cares for her but not the others.. she knows maan loves her and cares for her..her happiness means more to him...

after a while when she didn't even respond a bit he released her and felt sorry for his behavior..but didn't say it in words'

left her'moved away from her not willing to face her... he went away leaving her with tears

She knelt down there and cried...till the last bit of her tears fell on the ground...and made the place wet and remain there till those tears dry away...

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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after some time when maan understood that its all his fault and compose himself..and came to the place where he left geet before a while ...

but now she's not there not around not in the place where he left her...

he started searching her all around the place all around the world if possible he is very sorry for what he had done to her he don't want to hurt her..
what ever he did he did it in anger...no in sense he did...but what ever at last the result is he hurt her..hurt his geet..hurt his geet badly madly...

maan lost himself and search the whole place like an mad with in these few minutes he was dead knowing that he hurt geet and his geet is missing from...

where she might have went ...he didn't get any idea and at last results to tears in his eyes with that failure in founding his geet he returned back to the party hall where he found his geet...

sitting peace fully in the corner of the hall with the reddish bulky face which shown clearly that she is cried very badly ...
with all around the strangers with out knowing what to do next she sit quietly in that corner...with out talking with out even blinking...


maan got his life back ...he finally found his geet with a relaxed sign with a great relief sigh he came closer to her place..geet who is lost in her own world didn't even seen maan coming near her and sit beside her...


at last rubbing his face composing him self maan came out of words...
am sorry geet...with out any moment geet turned to see him with out reacting she remain silent..

Geet am sorry...what ever i did i did it in out of mind out of anger...
am very sorry i did hurt you am sorry geet...


As if his words are going in air..geet didn't gave any reaction just seeing his face staring at him...

after a while maan seen her face where the tears remain a slight a bit in her eyes made him feel pain in his heart this tears is not because of her not because of some one...

The main cause for her tears is him only him...

he extend his hands to wipe the tears in her eyes...where the music begins...

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Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

maan took geet hands in his and took her to the dancing floor but this time very slowly...







Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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y no update for so long

anyways y did geet leave maan ...my only question

poor maan

update soon
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Part 13

geet don't want to spoil her maan's life again..

yesterday is enough for her to understand that maan is not going to leave her just like that as before.. he is going to be determinant this time in making geet as his but she again don't want to spoil his life not ever... her strong feeling is that she cant make him happy ever...so she decide to leave the city..leave her maan behind to search her and after a certain time of searching he will surly forget her...she knows its not easy for maan to do so but yet she think time will heal every thing her maan too will forget her one day and move on in his life...



as the first step she pack all her things in her bag removed all necessary items and put it in her bag to run away form here from her maan form her love from the whole world...

at a sudden there is a ring in her phone..


aadi sir... now...

Geet where are you?


vo... mein...

Ok where ever you are come to vijaya hospital soon..


hospital but kyon aadi sir..? is that every thing is fine...

before she get answer her heart beat raised and again asked..

maan sir is fine?nothing happen to him na?

geet..maan sir is fine but its emergency come to hospital soon i will explain you all there...

with that aadi cut the phone...
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Geet i was waiting for you only...

why so late..

come soon...with that he drag her to the car near by...

aadi sir what happen?

i will explain that latter geet now just please get in the car
while car started aadi started explaining..

at a sudden dadi ma's health became worse and she is in ICU now

kya..dadi's is not well..what happen to her...

heart attack geet...

doctor asked us to bring her dress and necessary items from home for doing surgery immediately and i don't know what should have to be brought if you there it will be helpful that's why i called you geet...sorry for disturbing you in the mid of night...

How is that happen all of sudden sir..

I don't know geet...

Maan sir called me before an hour and he's is very terrified i didn't seen him like that ever in my life... i didn't ask any thing to him...


Driver ji please go fast..

ji sab...


geet is very perplexed hearing about dadi's health...

#how maan will be now...oh god please give strength to maan to be strong now...please god don't let any thing happen to dadi...#

she knows for maan every thing is dadi if any thing happen to her she can't even imagine what will happen to maan after that..

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Its being an hour after geet and aadi reached hospital with all the necessary items from Khurana mansion...

Maan didn't even gazed at her..he is very perplexed..the fear of loosing dadi is very clear in his eyes..

aadi, is standing beside where maan sat but didn't know how to console his boss he itself seems very perplexed.. geet is sitting in the opposite chairs which is not straight opposite to maan's but at some distance she can clearly see his face and too little drops of tears in the corner of his eyes...

she didn't even took her eyes away from maan for a while.
..

at a sudden doctor emerged out from the surgery room where before he come out maan aadi and geet surrounded him to ask about dadi's health...

don't worry Mr.Khurana...surgery is done...but can't say any thing till she awake... nothing will happen to savithri ji..she is very strong lady i ever seen...

before maan should say any thing aadi interpreted..


Thank you doctor...we all know nothing will happen to her..
she is the pillar of Khurana mansions..

aadi ... come with me need to get some medicines..

ji doctor...


saying that aadi went leaving maan and geet alone...
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maan again in his own world with the same reaction there is no sign of little bit of relief in his face...

geet yet didn't seen maan like that ever a fear covered all over his face...

after an hour of silent geet came near maan and sit beside him...
but maan didn't seem to be notice that...

geet put her right palms over his left hands and entwined...this small sigh is enough for maan to come out of his tears to flow... he hold her hands tightly with both hands and cried keeping it near his eyes...hiding his eyes in her hands he cried for a long time...

geet put her right hand over his hair and slightly comb it in her fingers
and remain in the same position till its dawn till aadi came till doctor came out and say ...

Savitri ji is fine now...she is out of danger...nothing to worry Mr.Khurana..

they didn't leave each others hands yet...

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to be continued...



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Geet planned to leave him ...

oh poor dadi !!!!!

thank god she is fine



i love u aadi sir


omg !!!! maan actually broke down


geet must be with him now

u left it at cliff hanger

so lets see wat happens next

continue soon akka and yeah thanks for the update 😃
Edited by niticool - 13 years ago

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